Khwaab hai apna muqaddar

by seraj325 on February 10, 2009, 12:18:11 PM
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Khwaab hai apna muqaddar tu gila kaise karen
Door hai mujhse bahot uss se mila kaise karen

Raaste roz mohabbat ke badal jate hain
Tum kaho Rasm-e mohabbat ye ada kaise karen

Yaad se teri darakhshaan hai zindagi meri
Yaad har saa.ns me.n hai, isko juda kaise karen

Be khudi itni hai ke khud ka bhi ehsaas nahin
Aesi haalat me.n kaho yaade khuda kaise karen

Kaash yuu.n door na hoti teri basti mujhse
Deed ka shauq hai, deedaar tera kaise karen

Mil hi jati meri Laila mujhe ek din pe Seraj
Aaj ke daur me.n Majnoo si khata kaise karen.!!

by me-- Seraj
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2009, 12:23:12 PM »
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Khwaab hai apna muqaddar tu gila kaise karen
Door hai mujhse bahot uss se mila kaise karen

Raaste roz mohabbat ke badal jate hain
Tum kaho Rasm-e mohabbat ye ada kaise karen

Yaad se teri darakhshaan hai zindagi meri
Yaad har saa.ns me.n hai, isko juda kaise karen

Be khudi itni hai ke khud ka bhi ehsaas nahin
Aesi haalat me.n kaho yaade khuda kaise karen

Kaash yuu.n door na hoti teri basti mujhse
Deed ka shauq hai, deedaar tera kaise karen

Mil hi jati meri Laila mujhe ek din pe Seraj
Aaj ke daur me.n Majnoo si khata kaise karen.!!

by me-- Seraj

AAj ke daur me majnoo si khata kaise karen !! wah bhi wah seraj sahab !! bahoth umda !! maza agaya sahab !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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Naziya Tahera
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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2009, 01:11:43 PM »
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Bahot khoob Seraj Bhaii

Be-khudi aesi hai ki khuud ka bhi ehsaas nahin
AAesi halaat me.n hum yade khuda kaise kare.n

Waah kya bekhudi hai Bhaai..

Mil hi jati meri Laila mujhe ek din pe Seraj
Aaj ke daur me.n majnoo si khata kaise kare.n

waah waah waah
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2009, 11:13:43 AM »
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wah wah bahoot bahoot khoob seraj.. bahoot umda likha hai
bahoot acha reply kiya hai Nazia.. very nice
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2009, 11:31:45 AM »
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Subhan Allah, Subhan Allah, bohat Hi Achche Seraj bhaiya,.
yunhi Likhte rahiye,.
Hume Seekhne Ka Maukha Milega,.
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2009, 10:50:38 AM »
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Khwaab hai apna muqaddar tu gila kaise karen
Door hai mujhse bahot uss se mila kaise karen

Raaste roz mohabbat ke badal jate hain
Tum kaho Rasm-e mohabbat ye ada kaise karen

Yaad se teri darakhshaan hai zindagi meri
Yaad har saa.ns me.n hai, isko juda kaise karen

Be khudi itni hai ke khud ka bhi ehsaas nahin
Aesi haalat me.n kaho yaade khuda kaise karen

Kaash yuu.n door na hoti teri basti mujhse
Deed ka shauq hai, deedaar tera kaise karen

Mil hi jati meri Laila mujhe ek din pe Seraj
Aaj ke daur me.n Majnoo si khata kaise karen.!!

by me-- Seraj

Beautiful creation Seraj Ji..Bohot Khoob...!
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2009, 11:03:10 AM »
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Aaj ke daur me majnu si khata kaise karen........

Wah Seraj kya kehne badi bhari baat kahi hain tumne last line me maza aa gaya  Clapping Smiley

Majnu Ranjha Farhad in namo se bulana GHAYEL ko
Yeh woh namurad the jinko, na khuda mila na sanam

                                  -SG-

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«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2009, 11:05:40 AM »
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Aaj ke daur me majnu si khata kaise karen........

Wah Seraj kya kehne badi bhari baat kahi hain tumne last line me maza aa gaya  Clapping Smiley

Majnu Ranjha Farhad in namo se bulana GHAYEL ko
Yeh woh namurad the jinko, na khuda mila na sanam

                                  -SG-



Wah Wah Wah ghayel kya likha diya yaar !! bahoth gaheri baath kahe gaye janab !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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seraj325
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«Reply #8 on: February 13, 2009, 06:17:22 AM »
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Shukriya aap logon ka..
 
Qadeer Topchi ji,

Naziya ,

Sophi ji,

Celmira ji

Sajid Ghayal ji,

Jazakallah.
Sajid Sahab bahot khoob Sher kaha hai aapne.
waah

bahot khoob.
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