Khwaab hi khwaab rahaa hun buntey:

by abdbundeli on January 28, 2013, 02:59:05 PM
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Apnee beetee tumhain sunaataa huun!
Fir bhi lagtaa hai, tumhain gaataa huun!!

Haamilah hai hawaa: mahaktee hai;
Har lamhey chulbulee chahaktee hai!
Aag to hai, dhuwaan nahin leykin;
Shai koyi baarahaa dahaktee hai!

Ab bhalaa aur kyaa kahuun tumsey:
Paas hai jo, usey bulaataa huun!
          Apnee beetee tumhain sunaataa huun!

Khwaab hi khwaab rahaa hun buntey:
Kyaa karuun, sun key tum nahin suntey?
‘Yeh nahin, wo nazar karungaa main’:
Thak chalaa hun azal sey gul chuntey!

Dil mein aataa hai, gul-afshaani karuun;
Paar jaw key 'abd' ko paataa huun!
          Fir bhi lagtaa hai, tumhain gaataa huun!!

                                  - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: January 28, 2013, 03:13:46 PM »
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bahut khoob...
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2013, 02:05:09 AM »
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umda khayalaat piroye haiN aapne sir jee, lekin muafi chahuNga is line ka matlab nahi samajh paya hawa ke hamilah hone se kya murad hai barahe karam roshni daal kar is khaksaar ke ilm me izafa kareN...

Haamilah hai hawaa: mahaktee hai;
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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2013, 04:06:13 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2013, 05:24:26 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2013, 07:10:29 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2013, 09:03:45 AM »
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Abd Jee Aadaab!


Wallaah janab kia kahne badi hi khoob nazm kahi hai janab...
behad dilkash ahsaas O khayaaloN ko umdaa lafzi jamaa pehnaya
hai aapne... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2013, 09:38:23 AM »
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Quote from: theyash on January 28, 2013, 03:13:46 PM
bahut khoob...

Shukriyah, 'theyash' ji!
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«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2013, 09:53:13 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on January 29, 2013, 02:05:09 AM
umda khayalaat piroye haiN aapne sir jee, lekin muafi chahuNga is line ka matlab nahi samajh paya hawa ke hamilah hone se kya murad hai barahe karam roshni daal kar is khaksaar ke ilm me izafa kareN...

Haamilah hai hawaa: mahaktee hai;

Shukriyah, Aarish ji!
Haamilah hai hawaa: mahaktee hai = Hawaa akeylee nahin hai, balki apney badan mein aisaa kuchh sanjoye (carrying) huye hai, jiskee wajah sey wah mahak (khushboo) rahee hai! Yahaan 'Haamilah' kaa isteymaal aik 'metaphor; suggestive imagery' batour huaa hai!
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 29, 2013, 04:06:13 AM
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Dr. Saini ji!
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Quote from: nandbahu on January 29, 2013, 05:24:26 AM
bahut khoob

Shukriyah, Nandbahu ji!
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Quote from: prashad on January 29, 2013, 05:50:27 AM
bahut khoob

Shukriyah, Prasad ji!
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on January 29, 2013, 07:10:29 AM
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'meet' ji!
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 29, 2013, 09:03:45 AM
Abd Jee Aadaab!
Wallaah janab kia kahne badi hi khoob nazm kahi hai janab...
behad dilkash ahsaas O khayaaloN ko umdaa lafzi jamaa pehnaya
hai aapne... Usual Smile
Humari dheroN dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda hafez... Usual Smile

Namaskaar ParwaaZ ji! Bahut-bahut shukriah!
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