khwaab ke bina shayri kaisi ishq kaisa

by @kaash on February 04, 2010, 02:50:27 PM
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drpandey
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«Reply #15 on: February 05, 2010, 05:58:55 PM »
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wah kay alines likhi hai DRPANDEY JI.. WAH
Thank you Pooja Ji Shukriya
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«Reply #16 on: February 06, 2010, 05:43:04 PM »
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shukriya Pandey ji,thanks for yr appreciation and achi koshish ki hai aapne,awesome lines
thanks tu u for writing some lines is tarah se jawaab ke saath shayri achi lagti hai n only u wrote,

kuch lines pesh hain

khwaab kya hote hain
khwaab kai tarah ke hote hain
khwaab kinke paas hote hain
khwaab harek ke paas hote hain
jise khwaab hasil nahi uske bhi
aur jise har khwaab haasil uske bhi paas hote hain
har cheez mayassar hone par bhi khwaab dekhen jaate hain
aise khwaab behad khushgawaar hote hain
aise khwaab khwaabon ki bahaar hote hain
aur hum aise hi khwaab tasavvur ko bakhshte hain
kalam ki sadaon ko harf-e-khyaal yun salaam karte hain

thanks
Kaash Ji khwab ki behad achchhi psychoanalysis kia hai aapne bahut achchha laga, aapke khwabon ke aur aapke shaan mein chand alfaaz pesh-e-khidmat hain...

Khwab khwahish ki khudnumai hai,
Khwab haquiqat ki ek parchhaai hai,
Khwab hasil hai rang-e-hasrat ki,
Khwab khilquat ki roshnaai hai.

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«Reply #17 on: February 07, 2010, 07:03:26 PM »
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shukriya Pandey ji aapke alfaazon ke lie
aur ye lines achhi likhi hai aapne  Applause Applause
kuch lines pesh hain,khumar ke saath zindagi par bhi
likha hai,


khwaab ko dekhne ka nazariya alag alag hota hai
khwaab ko samajhne ka nazaria alag alag hota hai
khwaab ki paribhasha bhi juda juda ho sakti hai
lekin khwaab ki khubsoorati use mahsus karne valen ehsaason me hoti hai

ye zindagi bhi ek khwaab hai ye aankhen ye jahan ye bhi khwaab hai
haqeeqat hai to sirf ye khyaal jo kabhi bhi kuch bhi soch jate hain
ye zindagi ek khwaab islie ki iske pehle iske baad bhi ek khwaab hai
ye aankhen ye jahaan khwaab yun jane aise kitne kahkasha aur jahaan hain
haqeeqat me jeena alag hai lekin lutf me jeena alag hai
haqeeqat me lutf me jeena sirf khwaab dete hain
khwaab zindagi ko aur mazbuti se jeene ka sahas dete hain
yehi apne ehsaason se naye ehsaas siyahi-e-kalam ko dete hain
@Kaash ji khwab per aapke andaz-e-bayaan bahot achchhe lage, agar aapki khwab per Ph.D. thesis mere pass evaluation ke liye aati to aapko award kar deta. Apne ehsaas ko continue rakhiye. Good wishes & good luck..
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«Reply #18 on: February 08, 2010, 08:40:31 AM »
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Bahut khoob Kaash ji,ek alag andaaz mein aapne bahut khoobsurti se likha.cara ji Pandey ji aap dono n bhi kamaal ke likha.great work.
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«Reply #19 on: February 11, 2010, 02:51:28 PM »
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