Khwaab ne ye mukaam hain paaye

by @kaash on July 27, 2009, 11:57:37 AM
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ye vo shabnam jisme ek chingaari si uthti hai
ye vo nagma jisme aag bhi ho paani jati hai
kahin dhadakte dil ki rahguzar me mehakti shaam
kabhi subah hi khwaab ka paigaam ban jati hai


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husn aur ishq ka bus itna falsafa hai
mohabbat ka jawaani se jaisa rishta hai


Khwaabon ne mohabbat me ye mukaam hain paaye
dil ki har gali me hakeekat me inka charcha hai


deedar kaisa hoga sochte hain aur banti nahi tasveer
dil sochta hai us andekhe ke aage mehtaab kaisa hai


tamanna-e-aashiqui yun to hargiz jismani nahi hoti
phir bhi zulfon ke saamne sawan ka badal feeka hai













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«Reply #1 on: July 27, 2009, 12:01:59 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Kaash Ji  Applause Applause Applause
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Sammual
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«Reply #2 on: July 27, 2009, 02:04:23 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Kaash Ji. Very Nice.
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«Reply #3 on: July 27, 2009, 02:29:44 PM »
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Waah Waah bahoot khoob Kaash Ji
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«Reply #4 on: July 27, 2009, 02:57:57 PM »
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Very Nice @kaash ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 27, 2009, 03:21:31 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI   KAASH JI.....

WOH HUSN HI KYA,JO HUSN MEIN ISHQ NA HO JAAEY,
WOH KHWAAB HI KYA,JO ISHQ MEIN NA AAEY.
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«Reply #6 on: July 27, 2009, 05:25:59 PM »
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Aaye Haye..!! Wah Wah Yash Bhai.. Kya baat hai.. Pahali line Hi dil ko Chhoo gai Yaaaaar.. aur Poori Rachna bhi kamaal likhi hai aapne..!! Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #7 on: July 27, 2009, 05:33:33 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Kaash Ji
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salil2002
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«Reply #8 on: July 28, 2009, 01:45:16 PM »
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bahut achcha kaash khoob likha hai dost ek sher tumhe nazar kar raha hoon

bada roya main qatl apna hota dekhkar
oos khwab ne mujhe raat bhar khob tadpaaya
ashq bahe nahin dekh kar lahoo apna
yeh barse jis waqt tere haath main khanjar nazar aaya
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«Reply #9 on: July 28, 2009, 02:03:15 PM »
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Dear Saahil aapne achi koshish ki hai,
par dard type ka laga bhai.

well, thanks for liking my poem.

na dard na ashk na bevafaayi na hi ranj koi dil me rahta hai
aashiqi ka mausam mahaz ishq nahi ye to har dum kayam rahta hai



bilkul sahi farmaaya aapne kaash bhai.apni galti sudharte huye yeh char lines ishq kii

uska roothna bhi mujhse ek ada thehri
nahin toh kankhiyon se mud k na dekhte mujhko
humne bhi jab pakad li chori unki
toh kehte hain tum roothne bhi nahin dete humko

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«Reply #10 on: July 29, 2009, 02:37:32 AM »
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Wah Kaash ji,very nice and wonderful creation bahut khoob. icon_thumleft Applause Applause :clap:beautiful lines by Cara ji,Saahil ji
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 03, 2009, 01:55:33 PM »
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wahnji wah kya baat hai aap ki
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«Reply #12 on: August 20, 2009, 10:43:00 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob kaash ji!!

Sahil bro bahoot acha sath diya hai apne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Good work both!!  Thumbs UP
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