Khwaabon Ki Duniya Mein "Khwaish"

by khwaish on November 02, 2011, 02:27:21 PM
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Ek baar kareeb
Aaa kar to dekho
kahin door na
Mujhse jaa paaoge

Jab kabhi Meri
yaad Aaye Tumhe
Mujhe Yaad kar,
Tum Muskuraaoge

itnaaaaaa Kareeb Ho
kar Kabhi Milo Mujhse!
Ke door Hone Par,
Tum Bhi Naa Reh Paoge

Tumhare inn  Honton Ki Kya
Tareef Karoon Main...!!!
Ek Geet ban jaau to kya mujhe,
Tum Umar Bhar Gungunayoge??

Tere  Zulfon Tale Kabhi
Meri Koi Shaam Guzre!!!!
Kya Inn Nasheeli Aankhon Se
Mujhe Tum Maye Pilaoge??

Teri Baahon Mein
Khona Chaahta Hoon..!!!
Kya Mujhe Apni
baahon mein Tum Sulaaoge

Teri Adayen Meri Jaan
Le Leti Hai..!!!
Tera Haath Ho Mere Haath mein
Kya Umar Bhar Mera Saath Nibhaoge??

"Khwaish" Khwaab To khwaab Hi hai
Yeh Koi Haqeeqat To  Nahi..!!!!
Par Khwaabo Ki Duniya mein Hi Sahi!!
Kya Mujhse Kabhi Mil Paaoge???

          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: November 02, 2011, 02:39:30 PM »
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Aha dost kya baat hai..
Aksar ankh bhar ati hai apki kalam parr kar par aj,
muskura utha hoon..
Kuch aise hi kalam ki talab thi mujhe..
Kya baat hai..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #2 on: November 02, 2011, 03:28:50 PM »
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woooooooooo......... khumaar se labrez ye poem khwwaish ji kis maashuka k liye likh gaye ho aap....... zabardastttttttt pyaar ka rang chadh gaya hai yahan to..... mashaalllahhh ..... hr ek sher me shabd me sirf pyaar hi pyaar baras raha hai... ekout of control feeling dikh rahi hai
kamaaallllllllllll ki post jiiiiiii
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«Reply #3 on: November 02, 2011, 04:08:33 PM »
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 bahut khoob,khwaish ji.
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«Reply #4 on: November 02, 2011, 05:21:46 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Khwahish ji
akhiri ashaar khoob raha..
jindgi ka poora lutf hai.. kya kahne...
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«Reply #5 on: November 02, 2011, 06:13:17 PM »
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Khawhish Jee Aadaab!

Janab bade khubsurat khayaaloN ko bayaaN kiya hai
aapne.. Sabhi khayaal behad khoob rahe.. Usual Smile

Puri kalaam par daad hazir hai janab..

Par in ashaaroN ke liye hazaaroN daad..
Behad khub khayaal hai.. aur khub bayaN bhi
kiye hai... Usual Smile






Tumhare inn  Honton Ki Kya
Tareef Karoon Main...!!!
Ek Geet ban jaau to kya mujhe,
Tum Umar Bhar Gungunayoge??

It's realy beatiful... An expression is too good..
Behad shayarana raha yeH ashaar.. Usual Smile
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


"Khwaish" Khwaab To khwaab Hi hai
Yeh Koi Haqeeqat To  Nahi..!!!!
Par Khwaabo Ki Duniya mein Hi Sahi!!
Kya Mujhse Kabhi Mil Paaoge???


Yeh khayaal bhi behad umdaa raha janab
daad daad daad... Usual Smile
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye...
Agar aap na rahe to mehfil viraaN si lagti hai janab... Usual Smile

Mehfil ki roshni meiN kamtazri na aane dijiye.. Usual Smile
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: November 03, 2011, 03:23:16 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

bahut khub khwaishji

kamaal.........
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«Reply #7 on: November 03, 2011, 03:45:06 AM »
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Khawish ji

BAhut Hi sunder aur pyaar se bhari app ki is kalam ko salam

Sir sabhi khyaal behad khub hain

Dil Se daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad

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«Reply #8 on: November 03, 2011, 04:09:53 AM »
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khwaish ji bahut umdaa creation hai aapkee baar baar padhaa har baar pahle se zyaadaa mazaa aayaa.
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«Reply #9 on: November 03, 2011, 04:53:00 AM »
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Aadab araz Khwaish sab buhut khoob kaha hai
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«Reply #10 on: November 03, 2011, 08:53:57 AM »
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Ek baar kareeb
Aaa kar to dekho
kahin door na
Muhse jaa paaoge Applause Applause

Jab kabhi Meri
yaad Aaye Tumhe
Mujhe Yaad kar,
Tum Muskuraaoge Applause Applause

itnaaaaaa Kareeb Ho
kar Kabhi Milo Mujhse!
Ke door Hone Par,
Tum Bhi Naa Reh Paoge

Tumhare inn  Honton Ki Kya
Tareef Karoon Main...!!!
Ek Geet ban jaau to kya mujhe,
Tum Umar Bhar Gungunayoge?? Applause Applause

Tere  Zulfon Tale Kabhi
Meri Koi Shaam Guzre!!!!
Kya Inn Nasheeli Aankhon Se
Mujhe Tum Maye Pilaoge?? Applause Applause

Teri Baahon Mein
Khona Chaahta Hoon..!!!
Kya Mujhe Apni
baahon mein Tum Sulaaoge
 Applause Applause
Teri Adayen Meri Jaan
Le Leti Hai..!!!
Tera Haath Ho Mere Haath mein
Kya Umar Bhar Mera Saath Nibhaoge?? Applause

"Khwaish" Khwaab To khwaab Hi hai
Yeh Koi Haqeeqat To  Nahi..!!!!
Par Khwaabo Ki Duniya mein Hi Sahi!!
Kya Mujhse Kabhi Mil Paaoge??? Applause Applause Applause

          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

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«Reply #11 on: November 04, 2011, 06:23:28 AM »
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Aha dost kya baat hai..
Aksar ankh bhar ati hai apki kalam parr kar par aj,
muskura utha hoon..
Kuch aise hi kalam ki talab thi mujhe..
Kya baat hai..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!

Dost Rahim Humesha Ki Tarah Aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya..

Aapke Chehre par Muskaan Le Aayi Yeh kalaam, yeh jaankar Behad Khushi Hui Hai..

Khuda Kare Aap Yuhi Muskuraaate Rahe.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: November 04, 2011, 11:54:32 AM »
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wah... bht bht khoob khwaish ji....
excellent creation...
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«Reply #13 on: November 04, 2011, 01:27:02 PM »
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woooooooooo......... khumaar se labrez ye poem khwwaish ji kis maashuka k liye likh gaye ho aap....... zabardastttttttt pyaar ka rang chadh gaya hai yahan to..... mashaalllahhh ..... hr ek sher me shabd me sirf pyaar hi pyaar baras raha hai... ekout of control feeling dikh rahi hai
kamaaallllllllllll ki post jiiiiiii


Aapko Yeh kavita Pasand Aayi, yeh jaankar behad se Bhi Zyaada Khushi Hui hai Anuji..Thanksssssssss a Lotttttt For Appreciating!!!!

Thankyou soooooo Much!!!!! icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: November 18, 2011, 04:13:24 PM »
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Applause
 bahut khoob,khwaish ji.

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Hasan Ji icon_flower
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