khwab jo dekha tha......mkv

by mkv on October 01, 2011, 06:14:26 AM
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ankh hai band
tasveer unki dil me hai
raah veeran magar
sochte mahfil me hai


       ab mujhe hosh kaha
       baho me unke hai
       sath unka pakar
       besudh se hum hai


ud rahe hum dono
haath failaye hai
sath dene ko hame
panchi bhi aaye hai


       kuch nahi hosh mujhe
       dil ye dewaana hai
       kahan se aai mai
       kahan mujhe jana hai


neend se jag gai
maa ne pukara hai
khwab jo dekha tha
kitna suhaana hai
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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2011, 07:34:21 AM »
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mkv ji,Bahut khoobsurat khwaab aur bahut khoobsurat uska bayaan.Dil khush ho gaya.
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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2011, 07:54:15 AM »
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ankh hai band
tasveer unki dil me hai
raah veeran magar
sochte mahfil me hai


       ab mujhe hosh kaha
       baho me unke hai
       sath unka pakar
       besudh se hum hai


ud rahe hum dono
haath failaye hai
sath dene ko hame
panchi bhi aaye hai


       kuch nahi hosh mujhe
       dil ye dewaana hai
       kahan se aai mai
       kahan mujhe jana hai


neend se jag gai
maa ne pukara hai
khwab jo dekha tha
kitna suhaana hai



bahut khoob mkv


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«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2011, 08:01:29 AM »
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ankh hai band
tasveer unki dil me hai
raah veeran magar
sochte mahfil me hai


       ab mujhe hosh kaha
       baho me unke hai
       sath unka pakar
       besudh se hum hai


ud rahe hum dono
haath failaye hai
sath dene ko hame
panchi bhi aaye hai


       kuch nahi hosh mujhe
       dil ye dewaana hai
       kahan se aai mai
       kahan mujhe jana hai


neend se jag gai
maa ne pukara hai
khwab jo dekha tha
kitna suhaana hai


Very Nice...

Bahut Bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2011, 08:58:57 AM »
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Shukriya hasan sahab
ummeed se jyada tareef kar di apne. mujhe khushi hogi agar aap kamiyo ki taraf bhi dhyan dilayege.
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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2011, 09:03:11 AM »
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Shukri sheba ji
Hausla badhane ke liye
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2011, 10:23:03 AM »
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Shukriya khwaish ji
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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2011, 10:43:04 AM »
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MKV Jee Aadaab !

Bahut khoob Janab Behad pyaare ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN
kiye hai aapne... behad achchi rahi aapki yeH kalaam
dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye.
Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2011, 11:31:07 AM »
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Shukriya parwaaz bhai
meri rachna apke review ke bina poori nahi hoti.
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«Reply #9 on: October 01, 2011, 01:12:41 PM »
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bahot khoob MKV sahab--

bahot pyare se massom ehsaasoN ko shabdoN me utara hai aapne--

daad kubul kareN

muskurate raheN
khus raheN
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«Reply #10 on: October 01, 2011, 01:49:26 PM »
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good work.
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«Reply #11 on: October 01, 2011, 08:50:02 PM »
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Bahut Khub..!!
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«Reply #12 on: October 02, 2011, 03:03:04 AM »
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Shukriya sarfira
apne mere liye vaqt nikala, tareef ki.
sab aap logo ki duayen hai.
sabse badi baat.. khush rahne ka tareeka ek nirale andaj me bataya..ek bar to myskarahat aa gayee..thanks
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«Reply #13 on: October 02, 2011, 03:04:40 AM »
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Marhoom sahab
Aap ko padhke bahut accha lagta hai.
tareef ke liye shukriya
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«Reply #14 on: October 03, 2011, 07:06:38 AM »
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Shukriya gyan ji
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