Khwab likh Doon ki Kahani likh Doon (Adab)

by drpandey on August 24, 2014, 05:19:56 AM
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बहती दरिया की रवानी लिख दूँ।
अपने ग़ज़लों की जवानी लिख दूँ।

जिसका साया भी कोई छू न सके,
आग लिख दूँ कि मैं पानी लिख दूँ।

आज जी भर के फिर पुकारूँ उसे,
गुजरे लम्हों की कहानी लिख दूँ।

वक़्त कुछ और तुम ठहर जाओ,
उसकी तौफ़ीक़े निशानी लिख दूँ।

कल 'अदब' कौन इसे समझेगा,
ख़्वाब लिख दूँ की कहानी लिख दूँ।

- अदब
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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2014, 06:03:55 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2014, 07:06:24 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2014, 07:22:14 AM »
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Quote from: drpandey on August 24, 2014, 05:19:56 AM
बहती दरिया की रवानी लिख दूँ।
अपने ग़ज़लों की जवानी लिख दूँ।

जिसका साया भी कोई छू न सके,
आग लिख दूँ कि मैं पानी लिख दूँ।

आज जी भर के फिर पुकारूँ उसे,
गुजरे लम्हों की कहानी लिख दूँ।

वक़्त कुछ और तुम ठहर जाओ,
उसकी तौफ़ीक़े निशानी लिख दूँ।

कल 'अदब' कौन इसे समझेगा,
ख़्वाब लिख दूँ की कहानी लिख दूँ।

- अदब

Waaaah kya kahney....bahut khoob ... dili mubaarakbaad qubool
farmaayen......Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2014, 08:48:17 AM »
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beautiful!!

kyaa baat hai!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2014, 02:39:42 PM »
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Quote from: drpandey on August 24, 2014, 05:19:56 AM
बहती दरिया की रवानी लिख दूँ।
अपने ग़ज़लों की जवानी लिख दूँ।

जिसका साया भी कोई छू न सके,
आग लिख दूँ कि मैं पानी लिख दूँ।

आज जी भर के फिर पुकारूँ उसे,
गुजरे लम्हों की कहानी लिख दूँ।

वक़्त कुछ और तुम ठहर जाओ,
उसकी तौफ़ीक़े निशानी लिख दूँ।

कल 'अदब' कौन इसे समझेगा,
ख़्वाब लिख दूँ की कहानी लिख दूँ।

- अदब


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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2014, 04:20:21 PM »
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Nicccce !
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2014, 06:20:24 PM »
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Waah
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Quote from: sksaini4 on August 24, 2014, 06:03:55 AM
Applause Applause Applause waah waah bahut khoob

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya Dr. Saini Sahab...!!

- Adab
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«Reply #9 on: August 24, 2014, 07:10:50 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on August 24, 2014, 07:22:14 AM
Waaaah kya kahney....bahut khoob ... dili mubaarakbaad qubool
farmaayen......Raqeeb Lucknowi


Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka Azehad shukriya Bhai Satish Shukla JI...!!

- Adab
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«Reply #10 on: August 24, 2014, 07:40:19 PM »
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bahut umdah Adab Sahib.
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बहुत खूब.....
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«Reply #12 on: August 25, 2014, 10:15:46 AM »
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Quote from: drpandey on August 24, 2014, 05:19:56 AM
बहती दरिया की रवानी लिख दूँ।
अपने ग़ज़लों की जवानी लिख दूँ।

जिसका साया भी कोई छू न सके,
आग लिख दूँ कि मैं पानी लिख दूँ।

आज जी भर के फिर पुकारूँ उसे,
गुजरे लम्हों की कहानी लिख दूँ।

वक़्त कुछ और तुम ठहर जाओ,
उसकी तौफ़ीक़े निशानी लिख दूँ।

कल 'अदब' कौन इसे समझेगा,
ख़्वाब लिख दूँ की कहानी लिख दूँ।

- अदब
Wah Kya baat hai. Bahut Khoob.
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