khwab me purana ho chuka

by deetri1 on June 11, 2008, 11:04:46 AM
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khatm wo fasana ho chuka
khwab me purana ho chuka

dekhna bulana ho chuka
lutf ko zamana ho chuka

dekhna palat kar ujr se
phir nazar churana ho chuka

zabt kar raha hoon aaj phir
aaj phir na jana ho chuka

haye manzile maqsood tha
raah ka thikana ho chuka
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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2008, 02:37:50 PM »
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Quote from: deetri1 on June 11, 2008, 11:04:46 AM
khatm wo fasana ho chuka
khwab me purana ho chuka

dekhna bulana ho chuka
lutf ko zamana ho chuka

dekhna palat kar ujr se
phir nazar churana ho chuka

zabt kar raha hoon aaj phir
aaj phir na jana ho chuka

haye manzile maqsood tha
raah ka thikana ho chuka

Bahut accha likha hai aapne deetri jee
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2008, 06:52:28 AM »
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good creation
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2008, 04:13:30 PM »
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very nice job buddy.....keep posting.....
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