Khwabeeda

by @kaash on June 26, 2009, 03:00:30 PM
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Khwabeeda sa husn aisa jo mahshar ke nazaron me na mile,mohabbat katil magar purnoor  sukoon usse rahe                                     
            galon ki shaguftagi yun phool si muskaan koi bikhre,hothon ki lazzat pyara sa unka aanchal kahe                Gesu to jaise parvat sunhara! zulf koi nadi ki dhaar ho,wallah andekhe khwaab ki tasveer hum kya kahen                          Makhmali si nazuk kalaai honth jaise mahka hua gulaab,seene me masoom sa dil duniadaari se mahroom lage                                                            Kadmon ki chaap aise jaise hirni balkhayi si,chehre me tabassum kudrat ka haal hi lage                                                         Dekhkar aaiyne ko yun nazren jhuka lena,kajal hai Khudaai jaise phir kyun kar nazar lage                                       Madhoshi saanson ki kabiz dhadkano pe kuch yun,aahaton se unki khumaariyan yun saason ka tarannum chhide                     Lahja vo baat ka usme bhi yun sarmaya husn hoga,sharma hi jaye khwaab jo khwaabon me vo mile
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«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2009, 12:08:27 AM »
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Wah wah Kaash ji,excellent,bahut khoob likha aapne,very beautiful  creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:bahut achi lagi. Thumbs UP
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2009, 12:41:37 AM »
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Nice one Kaash Ji
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aaina
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«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2009, 04:19:46 AM »
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bhut khoobsrat paiskhash kaash
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«Reply #4 on: June 27, 2009, 01:15:36 PM »
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kaash Bhai.. bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Behad Khubsoorat aur Lajawab Alfaaz Likhe hain Dost.. Bahut Bahut KHoooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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shab
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2009, 10:00:46 AM »
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lajawab kaash ji
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: June 29, 2009, 11:52:22 AM »
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Makhmali si nazuk kalaai honth jaise mahka hua gulaab,
seene me masoom sa dil duniadaari se mahroom lage 

Waah bohot khoob...Husn ko bakhoobhi byaan kiya hai aapne, Kaash Ji.. Bohot Khoob !!
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: June 29, 2009, 11:53:07 AM »
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Khwabeeda si nazren,khwabeeda hi tasveer hai,
khwabeeda hai alam,khwabeeda jisse khyalon ki jheel hai,

khwabeeda si palken jinme khwaab yun dikhte hai,
raat se payi jaise shabnam ne koi tabeer hai

Bohot khoob Kaash Ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 01, 2009, 02:03:33 PM »
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Kaash Ji,

Nice creation
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