KII THI SURUAAT EK CHOTI SII MAZAK SE..

by redwhitegang on June 28, 2006, 04:27:24 PM
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ranjana
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«Reply #15 on: June 29, 2006, 06:27:07 AM »
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good one........Fahi dear......

apni har chahat ko bas mohabbat ka rang de de
mere husan ko aaj apne ishqe ke rang se bhar de

mita de aaj is pal sab duriyon  ko sanam
main hun ek  mitti ki murat ,mujhe apne pyaar se khuda kar de

yeh aag hai mohabbat ki yun na bujh paayegi
mujhe nazaro se pyaar karke mom sa kar de

chhoo le meri rooh ko apne pyaar se kuch aise
meri har saans ab tu bas apne naam kar de.....
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«Reply #16 on: June 29, 2006, 10:17:02 AM »
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bahut ache sahid ji ,jeet ji ,and ranjana........(sahid bhai spelling thik hai na)..........

 dheere dheere woh humse nazre churane lage
dheere dheere woh dil mai samane lage

 jis baat per woh hamesha has diya karte the
dheere dheere usi baat per sharmaane  lage.

karte the jo shararate woh saath mai hamare
dheere dheere unhe karne se ghabraane lage

jin hontho se karte the woh betakalluf batein
dheere dheere unhi labo pe kuch dabane lage

aankhon ki unki shokiya to aaj bhi wahi hai
dheere dheere per unhe nigahao se woh bachane lage

samajhte the mujhe mehaz dost jo chand dino pehle
dheere dheere ab wahi hai mujhe chahne lage

................@fahi@....................


bohot khub doston bohot achcha likha hein aap logo ne!

Aur fahi ji!...................emmmm...........spell to aabhi bhi thoda galat ho gaya!...sahii spell hein..shahid :D
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ranjana
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«Reply #17 on: June 29, 2006, 12:00:22 PM »
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shukriya ssssshahid :D
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Anushka
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«Reply #18 on: June 29, 2006, 01:24:13 PM »
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KII THI SURUAAT EK CHOTI SII MAZAK SE..
MAZAK DARD BAN JAYEGA YE MALUM NA THA..
SAMAJHTE THE JISE HUM APNA YAAR..
WO EK DIN PYAR BAN JAYEGA YE MALUM NA THA...
GIRI THI EK CHOTII SII CHINGARII HAMARE GHAR MEIN
YEH CHINGARII AAG BANJAYEGA YEH MALUM NA THA...
LAGII JO AAG DIL MEIN USSE BUJHANE KO KIYA KHUD KO DURR
PAR YE AAG AUR BHI SULAGH JAYEGA YE MALUM NA THA..............
.....................ye meri aankahii pyar ke liye likha hein meine! Usual Smile


Jenab Shahid kya baat hai baat yaha tak ponchgyeeeeeeeeee

Shidat-e-gham ka mujh mai abb woh zor nahi raha
Iss qadar thak gaya kay pairo mai koi safar nahi raha
Mere hallat nay saith merey uss ko bhe bhula diyeh tha
Aik woh kay kisi hal mai mujh say bekhabar nahi raha

Iklhas,dosti,muhabbat,wafa sabhi kuch tha uss mai
Yeh alag baat hai mere dil mai aghar woh nahi raha
Mai wapsi ka irada bandho bhe toh kaise "Zafar"
Woh jahan jahan tha,suna hai ab koi wahan nahi raha..
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«Reply #19 on: June 29, 2006, 02:07:12 PM »
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KII THI SURUAAT EK CHOTI SII MAZAK SE..
MAZAK DARD BAN JAYEGA YE MALUM NA THA..
SAMAJHTE THE JISE HUM APNA YAAR..
WO EK DIN PYAR BAN JAYEGA YE MALUM NA THA...
GIRI THI EK CHOTII SII CHINGARII HAMARE GHAR MEIN
YEH CHINGARII AAG BANJAYEGA YEH MALUM NA THA...
LAGII JO AAG DIL MEIN USSE BUJHANE KO KIYA KHUD KO DURR
PAR YE AAG AUR BHI SULAGH JAYEGA YE MALUM NA THA..............
.....................ye meri aankahii pyar ke liye likha hein meine! Usual Smile


Jenab Shahid kya baat hai baat yaha tak ponchgyeeeeeeeeee

Shidat-e-gham ka mujh mai abb woh zor nahi raha
Iss qadar thak gaya kay pairo mai koi safar nahi raha
Mere hallat nay saith merey uss ko bhe bhula diyeh tha
Aik woh kay kisi hal mai mujh say bekhabar nahi raha

Iklhas,dosti,muhabbat,wafa sabhi kuch tha uss mai
Yeh alag baat hai mere dil mai aghar woh nahi raha
Mai wapsi ka irada bandho bhe toh kaise "Zafar"
Woh jahan jahan tha,suna hai ab koi wahan nahi raha..


kya baat hein!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anu :D

MOHABBAT KI AAG JALAKE TO DEKHO,
ZARA DIL KI DUNIYA ME BASA KAR TO DEKHO,
TUMHE HAM SE HO NA JAYE PYAR TO KEHNA
ZARA HUMSE NAZAREN MILAKE TO DEKHO
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Anushka
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«Reply #20 on: June 29, 2006, 02:20:33 PM »
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KII THI SURUAAT EK CHOTI SII MAZAK SE..
MAZAK DARD BAN JAYEGA YE MALUM NA THA..
SAMAJHTE THE JISE HUM APNA YAAR..
WO EK DIN PYAR BAN JAYEGA YE MALUM NA THA...
GIRI THI EK CHOTII SII CHINGARII HAMARE GHAR MEIN
YEH CHINGARII AAG BANJAYEGA YEH MALUM NA THA...
LAGII JO AAG DIL MEIN USSE BUJHANE KO KIYA KHUD KO DURR
PAR YE AAG AUR BHI SULAGH JAYEGA YE MALUM NA THA..............
.....................ye meri aankahii pyar ke liye likha hein meine! Usual Smile


Jenab Shahid kya baat hai baat yaha tak ponchgyeeeeeeeeee

Shidat-e-gham ka mujh mai abb woh zor nahi raha
Iss qadar thak gaya kay pairo mai koi safar nahi raha
Mere hallat nay saith merey uss ko bhe bhula diyeh tha
Aik woh kay kisi hal mai mujh say bekhabar nahi raha

Iklhas,dosti,muhabbat,wafa sabhi kuch tha uss mai
Yeh alag baat hai mere dil mai aghar woh nahi raha
Mai wapsi ka irada bandho bhe toh kaise "Zafar"
Woh jahan jahan tha,suna hai ab koi wahan nahi raha..


kya baat hein!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anu :D

MOHABBAT KI AAG JALAKE TO DEKHO,
ZARA DIL KI DUNIYA ME BASA KAR TO DEKHO,
TUMHE HAM SE HO NA JAYE PYAR TO KEHNA
ZARA HUMSE NAZAREN MILAKE TO DEKHO


Wah kya baat hai Shahid
 :D
ham aapake kadamon para, gir jaayenge Gash khaa kar
is par bhii na ham apane, aanchal kii havaa den to
ham aapakii aaNkhon men, is dil ko basaa den to
ham muuNd ke palakon ko, is dil ko sazaa den to
Kebi yeh pyaar kaam to na hoga?
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«Reply #21 on: June 29, 2006, 02:45:23 PM »
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KII THI SURUAAT EK CHOTI SII MAZAK SE..
MAZAK DARD BAN JAYEGA YE MALUM NA THA..
SAMAJHTE THE JISE HUM APNA YAAR..
WO EK DIN PYAR BAN JAYEGA YE MALUM NA THA...
GIRI THI EK CHOTII SII CHINGARII HAMARE GHAR MEIN
YEH CHINGARII AAG BANJAYEGA YEH MALUM NA THA...
LAGII JO AAG DIL MEIN USSE BUJHANE KO KIYA KHUD KO DURR
PAR YE AAG AUR BHI SULAGH JAYEGA YE MALUM NA THA..............
.....................ye meri aankahii pyar ke liye likha hein meine! Usual Smile


Jenab Shahid kya baat hai baat yaha tak ponchgyeeeeeeeeee

Shidat-e-gham ka mujh mai abb woh zor nahi raha
Iss qadar thak gaya kay pairo mai koi safar nahi raha
Mere hallat nay saith merey uss ko bhe bhula diyeh tha
Aik woh kay kisi hal mai mujh say bekhabar nahi raha

Iklhas,dosti,muhabbat,wafa sabhi kuch tha uss mai
Yeh alag baat hai mere dil mai aghar woh nahi raha
Mai wapsi ka irada bandho bhe toh kaise "Zafar"
Woh jahan jahan tha,suna hai ab koi wahan nahi raha..


kya baat hein!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anu :D

MOHABBAT KI AAG JALAKE TO DEKHO,
ZARA DIL KI DUNIYA ME BASA KAR TO DEKHO,
TUMHE HAM SE HO NA JAYE PYAR TO KEHNA
ZARA HUMSE NAZAREN MILAKE TO DEKHO


Wah kya baat hai Shahid
 :D
ham aapake kadamon para, gir jaayenge Gash khaa kar
is par bhii na ham apane, aanchal kii havaa den to
ham aapakii aaNkhon men, is dil ko basaa den to
ham muuNd ke palakon ko, is dil ko sazaa den to
Kebi yeh pyaar kaam to na hoga?


bohot hoga...bohot hoga.......... :D ...tumhara rply pad kar mujhe ye line yaad aaya

MERA HAR PAL TERI YAAD MEIN GUZARTA HAI,
TERI HAR MEHAK TERI HAR KHUSHBU HAWAON ME MEHAKTE HAI,
TERI HAR BATEIN TERI HAR HASI FIZAON ME CHAHAKTE HAI,
TERA HAR GUM TERE HAR AANSHU MERE KHWABON MEIN SISKATE HAI,
AB TUM HI KAHO HUM KYA KARE JAB HAMARA DIL
SIRF AAP KE LIYE DHADAKTA HAI. .......
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #22 on: June 29, 2006, 02:47:24 PM »
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very nice ranjana ,shahid ji and anushka ji (ab to sahi hai na shahid bhai)..............

 jim gumo ke daag chute na meri man  se
 unhe teri aankhon ki ek barish ne dho diya

......................@fahi@....................
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #23 on: June 29, 2006, 03:08:33 PM »
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very nice ranjana ,shahid ji and anushka ji (ab to sahi hai na shahid bhai)..............

 jim gumo ke daag chute na meri man  se
 unhe teri aankhon ki ek barish ne dho diya

......................@fahi@....................


Bohot khub fahi ji! ....ji aab bilkul sahii hein... :D .... :wink:
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #24 on: June 30, 2006, 03:20:56 AM »
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Good One Ranjana ji ....

Teri ankhon mein appne liye be-inteha pyaar
anjaan ban kar,dewaangi ki hadh tak dekha hai
Appne khyalon mein tere khayalon ke mahal ko
Hazaar bar sajtte-sawartte ,har pal dekha hai
hai meri yeh sarri duniya tujhi se ,mere mehboob
tuj mein maine aapne khawabon ka humsafar dekha hai...!!!


Good job all.... Jeet this one is just gr888888888888. bahoot hi ach alikha hai apne...

Sata kar use, maine her baar dekha hai
payar, payar aor sirf payaar hi uski juban per dekha hai
her waqat muskurate, jawabo mai uski
mujh per, khud se jayada aitbaar dekha hai
ek naam mai simat aaya hai sara jahan mera
humne apne naam ke sath, bas ab ek yahi naam dekha hai
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«Reply #25 on: June 30, 2006, 03:49:51 AM »
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Good One Ranjana ji ....

Teri ankhon mein appne liye be-inteha pyaar
anjaan ban kar,dewaangi ki hadh tak dekha hai
Appne khyalon mein tere khayalon ke mahal ko
Hazaar bar sajtte-sawartte ,har pal dekha hai
hai meri yeh sarri duniya tujhi se ,mere mehboob
tuj mein maine aapne khawabon ka humsafar dekha hai...!!!


Good job all.... Jeet this one is just gr888888888888. bahoot hi ach alikha hai apne...

Sata kar use, maine her baar dekha hai
payar, payar aor sirf payaar hi uski juban per dekha hai
her waqat muskurate, jawabo mai uski
mujh per, khud se jayada aitbaar dekha hai
ek naam mai simat aaya hai sara jahan mera
humne apne naam ke sath, bas ab ek yahi naam dekha hai



wah pooja ji .. kamaal@dhamaal.com likh diya aapne...  direct@dil.se nikale aor direct@dil.pe  pe lagga...


kiya aitbar tujhe par khud se jayada
tera bhi naam ban gaya hai mera jahan sara
dekha hai tujhe aapne aks mein har pal maine
rahonga aakhri saans tak tere sang
khud se kiya hai yeh maine waada...!!!
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«Reply #26 on: June 30, 2006, 03:56:47 AM »
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Shukaria Jeet ji..
wah kaya reply hai Jeet.. bahoot khoob...

wo majak mai tera mujko pukar jaana
kis kader ek choti si baat se, zindagi mai aa jaana
ban gaye ho jahan, ki ab duniya ki khabar nahi
na lo jo tum mera naam, yah jee kahi lagta nahi
mile ho kismat se, kismat hi meri ban jaana
ab muje chod kar, kahi kho tum na jaana
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«Reply #27 on: June 30, 2006, 04:11:09 AM »
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Shukaria Jeet ji..
wah kaya reply hai Jeet.. bahoot khoob...

wo majak mai tera mujko pukar jaana
kis kader ek choti si baat se, zindagi mai aa jaana
ban gaye ho jahan, ki ab duniya ki khabar nahi
na lo jo tum mera naam, yah jee kahi lagta nahi
mile ho kismat se, kismat hi meri ban jaana
ab muje chod kar, kahi kho tum na jaana


beautyyyy Pooja ... superb :D

chota sa majak dekho kaise jeevan ban gaya
raha hoga kabhi janamo ka sath,abb meil ho gaya
saaye se bhi bhalla koi door ja saka hai kabhi
tumhara dil hi abb toh JEET ka teekana ban gaya ...!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #28 on: June 30, 2006, 04:14:11 AM »
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:D bahut khub pooja and jeet .......kya baat hai........... Usual Smile
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«Reply #29 on: June 30, 2006, 04:19:45 AM »
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Shukaria Jeet ji..
wah kaya reply hai Jeet.. bahoot khoob...

wo majak mai tera mujko pukar jaana
kis kader ek choti si baat se, zindagi mai aa jaana
ban gaye ho jahan, ki ab duniya ki khabar nahi
na lo jo tum mera naam, yah jee kahi lagta nahi
mile ho kismat se, kismat hi meri ban jaana
ab muje chor kar, kahi kho tum na jaana


beautyyyy Pooja ... superb :D

chota sa majak dekho kaise jeevan ban gaya
raha hoga kabhi janamo ka sath,abb meil ho gaya
saaye se bhi bhalla koi door ja saka hai kabhi
tumhara dil hi abb toh JEET ka teekana ban gaya ...!!!
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