kisi aur ki mohabat

by SUMBUL QAISER on January 09, 2010, 04:46:49 PM
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Meri tarha kisi aur ko bhius say mohabat thi
wo ek tha aur dono ko hi uski zarorat thi.

Usay banti bhi toh kaisay mei kisi say,
woh mera kab tha mujhe jis say mohabat thi.

Tasweer kashi kay liay mujh say kalam utthaya na gaya,
meri aankho mei basi bas ek hi soorat thi.

kaisay karti juda usay apni zaat say,
Meray har khawab par jis ki hokomat thi.

Wo bhi bakhabar thameri dil ki dharkano say,
meri mohabat say zayda asar andaz kisi ki chahat thi.

Wo jata gaya door aur mei kuch na kar saki,
jo lay gai usay mujh say door kisi ki mohabat mei itni taqat thi
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SUMBUL QAISER
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«Reply #1 on: January 09, 2010, 04:47:31 PM »
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Meri tarha kisi aur ko bhius say mohabat thi
wo ek tha aur dono ko hi uski zarorat thi.

Usay banti bhi toh kaisay mei kisi say,
woh mera kab tha mujhe jis say mohabat thi.

Tasweer kashi kay liay mujh say kalam utthaya na gaya,
meri aankho mei basi bas ek hi soorat thi.

kaisay karti juda usay apni zaat say,
Meray har khawab par jis ki hokomat thi.

Wo bhi bakhabar thameri dil ki dharkano say,
meri mohabat say zayda asar andaz kisi ki chahat thi.

Wo jata gaya door aur mei kuch na kar saki,
jo lay gai usay mujh say door kisi ki mohabat mei itni taqat thi
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«Reply #2 on: January 09, 2010, 04:47:55 PM »
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Meri tarha kisi aur ko bhius say mohabat thi
wo ek tha aur dono ko hi uski zarorat thi.

Usay banti bhi toh kaisay mei kisi say,
woh mera kab tha mujhe jis say mohabat thi.

Tasweer kashi kay liay mujh say kalam utthaya na gaya,
meri aankho mei basi bas ek hi soorat thi.

kaisay karti juda usay apni zaat say,
Meray har khawab par jis ki hokomat thi.

Wo bhi bakhabar thameri dil ki dharkano say,
meri mohabat say zayda asar andaz kisi ki chahat thi.

Wo jata gaya door aur mei kuch na kar saki,
jo lay gai usay mujh say door kisi ki mohabat mei itni taqat thi
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«Reply #3 on: January 09, 2010, 04:51:37 PM »
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Wah Sumbul ji bahut achhi ghazal likhi hai aapne. Nice creation.

Nasib mein jiske jo likha tha wo teri mehfil mein kaam aaya
Kisi ke hisse mein pyas aai Kisi ke hisse mein jaam aaya
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«Reply #4 on: January 10, 2010, 01:07:21 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Sumbul ji,lovely creation,beautiful lines by Riyaz ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: January 10, 2010, 06:46:42 AM »
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beautiful ghazal sumbul gudddd Applause
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #6 on: January 10, 2010, 08:53:45 AM »
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Pliz Sophi ji delete this post.
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riyaz106
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«Reply #7 on: January 10, 2010, 09:42:43 AM »
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Sophi ji, please erase this nonsense.
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cara
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«Reply #8 on: January 10, 2010, 10:46:58 AM »
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monitor ji yeh abhi tak nahi delete hua hai...

please delete kar dijiye..

sophi ji please erase it..
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«Reply #9 on: January 10, 2010, 11:40:08 AM »
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Thanks for erasing.. Pl. Take some remedial action to prevent the site from such nonsenre postings.
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #10 on: January 11, 2010, 11:21:44 AM »
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Bahut Hi SUndar Creation hai Sumbul JI
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«Reply #11 on: January 13, 2010, 06:52:53 AM »
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Nice creation Qaiser Ji
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