Kisne kaha tha door hamse raha karo

by riyaz106 on January 25, 2010, 01:49:59 PM
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apni kaha karo kabhi meri suna karo
apne ghamo.n mein mujhko bhi shamil kiya karo
akhir akelepan se pareshaan hi huye
kisne kaha tha door yun hamse raha karo
likh de khuda naseeb mein ik wasl-e-jawida.n
karta hun main dua yahi, tum bhi dua karo
ab haal ye hai bhoolna mumkin nahin tumhen
ab chaahe tum wafa karo chahe jafa karo
Yaksa.n nahi jo zahir-o-baatin mein 'Ashna'
unpe na dil ki baat ko zaahir kiya karo

Riyaz 'Ashna'
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«Reply #1 on: January 25, 2010, 01:55:26 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2010, 02:12:43 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI   RIYAZ106 JI.....

KISNE KAHA THA DOOR HAMSE RAHA KARO
MERI NAZRON ME TUM HO APNI NAZRON ME MUJHKO RAKHA KARO
JUDAI KA WAQAT HAI YEA GADI BHI NIKAL JAAEYENGI
MILAN KI GADI BHI JALDI LAUT AAEYENGI
HAM DUA KARTE HAI TUM BHI DUA KARO...
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«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2010, 03:23:39 PM »
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nice work caraji & riyaz ji
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«Reply #4 on: January 25, 2010, 07:08:15 PM »
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Waah Riyaz Sahab Padhkar Maza Agaya Kya Khoob Likha Hai Apnay
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: January 26, 2010, 02:41:15 AM »
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Wah kiya baat hai Riyaz ji,mindblowing creation.bahut khoob.excellent Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Cara ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha.
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«Reply #6 on: January 26, 2010, 04:31:33 AM »
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Waah Waah. Bahoot Khoob Riyaz ji !
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riyaz106
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«Reply #7 on: January 26, 2010, 04:42:11 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Sofi ji pasand farmaane ke liye.
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«Reply #8 on: January 26, 2010, 05:51:39 PM »
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Behad khubsurat, padhkar inspiration mila aur kuchh likhne ka hausla bhi...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #9 on: January 27, 2010, 06:30:00 AM »
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Pasand farmane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya Doctor Sahab.
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #10 on: January 28, 2010, 12:31:46 PM »
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Nice Creation Riyaz Ji
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riyaz106
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«Reply #11 on: February 09, 2010, 12:17:06 PM »
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Thanks Rishi Ji.
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #12 on: March 12, 2010, 07:37:14 AM »
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Bahut khoob Riyaz Ji
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«Reply #13 on: March 12, 2010, 12:50:35 PM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot khoob Riyaz ji.. bahoot Lajawaab ghazal pesh ki hai
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«Reply #14 on: March 12, 2010, 05:12:54 PM »
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Aapka behad shukriya Rajesh ji. Zarranawazish ke ghazal aapko pasand aai..
Bahut khoob Riyaz Ji
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