Kitna Karte Hai Tumhe Yaad..!!...............Shireen Hakani

by Shireen Hakani on September 03, 2012, 08:50:04 AM
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Kitna Karte Hai Tumhe Yaad Chand-Tarao Se Pooch Lo,
Yakeen Na Aaye Toh Barasti Barsaato Se Pooch Lo..!!

Hai Woh Gawah Mere Udaas Din Aur Tanha Raaton Ke,
Labo Par Jin Ka Hai Naam, Mere Tarano Se Pooch Lo..!!

Dekh Kar Tumhe Jeeya Karta Tha Dil Pehlu Mein Kabhi,
Bin Tum Hai Kitna Gumsum, Meri Dhadkano Se Pooch Lo..!!

Khamosh Ho Gaye Hai Lab, Jahan Bahare Khila Karti Thi,
Mere Gaalo Se Jo Kho Gayi, Un Muskaano Se Pooch Lo..!!

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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2012, 09:39:15 AM »
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nice........
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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2012, 10:41:52 AM »
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Kitna Karte Hai Tumhe Yaad Chand-Tarao Se Pooch Lo,
Yakeen Na Aaye Toh Barasti Barsaato Se Pooch Lo..!!
 Applause Applause

Hai Woh Gawah Mere Udaas Din Aur Tanha Raaton Ke,
Labo Par Jin Ka Hai Naam, Mere Tarano Se Pooch Lo..!!
 Applause Applause

Dekh Kar Tumhe Jeeya Karta Tha Dil Pehlu Mein Kabhi,
Bin Tum Hai Kitna Gumsum, Meri Dhadkano Se Pooch Lo..!!
 Applause Applause

Pathar Ho Gaye Gaal Jahan Gadde Pada Karte The Jaan,
Mere Labo Se Jo Kho Gayi, Un Muskaano Se Pooch Lo..!!
 Applause Applause

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bahut khoob.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2012, 10:43:41 AM »
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maine bhi ishi khayal me ek ghazal likhi thi.. jarur padhiyega.. "Dil badal Kar Dekh LO"...
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2012, 10:43:54 AM »
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bahut khoob betee
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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2012, 11:09:48 AM »
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Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2012, 04:18:24 PM »
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Bahut hi sundar kalaam
wah wah wah ...
bade dilkash ehsaas piroye hai aapne.

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«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2012, 04:27:24 PM »
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Shukriya Aap sabhi ka. Last two lines mein maine kuch changes kiye hai....
Pehle yeh lines thi....

Pathar Ho Gaye Gaal Jahan Gadde Pada Karte The Jaan,
Mere Labo Se Jo Kho Gayi, Un Muskaano Se Pooch Lo..!!

Aap log please suggest kijiye kaunsi better lag rahi hai..
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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2012, 04:37:56 PM »
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jo line pehle likhi thi wo jyada better lagi mujhe to ...

aur aapki puri rachna to  bahut hi khoob rahi dhero daad aur mubarakbaad

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2012, 05:14:33 PM »
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shireen ji bahut achha bayaan kiyahai aapne  Applause Applause Applause
mere vichar men mere
"labon se jo kho gayee un muskaano se poochho"
ziyadaa achhe hai
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«Reply #10 on: September 03, 2012, 05:38:38 PM »
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Sheerin Saahiba Aadab!

Behad khoob jee bahut khoob... ahsaas e mohobbat badi khoobi
se bayaaN ki hai aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ahsaas O khayaal bahut khoob rahe... Usual Smile

Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..
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«Reply #11 on: September 03, 2012, 08:41:22 PM »
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very very very nice...
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«Reply #12 on: September 04, 2012, 12:39:17 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #13 on: September 04, 2012, 06:05:24 AM »
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Shukriya Aap sabhi dosto ka..!!
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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2012, 06:46:05 AM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on September 03, 2012, 04:27:24 PM
Shukriya Aap sabhi ka. Last two lines mein maine kuch changes kiye hai....
Pehle yeh lines thi....

Pathar Ho Gaye Gaal Jahan Gadde Pada Karte The Jaan,
Mere Labo Se Jo Kho Gayi, Un Muskaano Se Pooch Lo..!!

Aap log please suggest kijiye kaunsi better lag rahi hai..






earlier one is comparatively better.
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