Kiyaa Thaa wadaa....!

by sharmaarunkumar on October 11, 2004, 06:26:52 AM
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Wadaa woh Kar Gaye the Suno Mujhse Shaam ka!
Kaise katenge Chaar pahar Intezaar ke!!
Kiya Thaa Wadaa Ki Aayenge woh Chiraagh jale,
Tamaam raat Chiraaghon se Dil Ke Daagh jale!



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mnajmi
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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2004, 11:49:14 AM »
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wah
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2004, 11:58:20 AM »
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Wahaa .. Wahaa.. Great.. good..

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Kiya Thaa Wadaa Ki Aayege woh Chiraagh jale,
Tamaam raat Chiraaghon se Dil Ke Daagh jale!

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Bahout koob..

Ques...
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2004, 03:59:54 PM »
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bahoot khoob AKS JI...
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #4 on: October 11, 2004, 06:15:15 PM »
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Shukriyaa! Doston!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2004, 08:11:44 AM »
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Wah!!!!!!!!!!!  Arun Bhai.........  Bahot Khoobsurat Likha Aap Ne......

Ik Khwab Zindagi K Subhi Khwab Le Gaya...
Uss Khwab Ko Bhi Neend Ka Selab Le Gaya
Aaya To Sath Hijer Ki Raatein Liye Huye....
Rukhsat Hua To Anjum O Mahtab Le Gaya..........................
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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2004, 08:18:06 AM »
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woow.. great well said waheed..

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Ik Khwab Zindagi K Subhi Khwab Le Gaya...
Uss Khwab Ko Bhi Neend Ka Selab Le Gaya
Aaya To Sath Hijer Ki Raatein Liye Huye....
Rukhsat Hua To Anjum O Mahtab Le Gaya..........................

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Aaya To Sath Hijer Ki Raatein Liye Huye....
Rukhsat Hua To Anjum O Mahtab Le Gaya..........................

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This is the best and I like the most...

Good..

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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2004, 09:25:51 AM »
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Thanks Waheed Bhai!
Very Nice Written!!!
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Neelam
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«Reply #8 on: October 13, 2004, 10:14:40 AM »
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nice Sharma jee........
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #9 on: October 13, 2004, 10:27:54 AM »
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Thanks Neelam Ji!
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: October 13, 2004, 05:15:37 PM »
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Quote from: "Qutubuddin"

Ik Khwab Zindagi K Subhi Khwab Le Gaya...
Uss Khwab Ko Bhi Neend Ka Selab Le Gaya
Aaya To Sath Hijer Ki Raatein Liye Huye....
Rukhsat Hua To Anjum O Mahtab Le Gaya..........................
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wowowow bahoot hi khoob Qutubuddin ji....

Ops...Edit on 10/14/04: wowowow bahoot hi khoob Waheed_rose ji....
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #11 on: October 13, 2004, 06:01:05 PM »
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Nice Qutubuddin ji!
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #12 on: October 14, 2004, 05:59:05 AM »
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Pooja this is from waheed not from me..

The Daad should go to him..

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Ik Khwab Zindagi K Subhi Khwab Le Gaya...
Uss Khwab Ko Bhi Neend Ka Selab Le Gaya
Aaya To Sath Hijer Ki Raatein Liye Huye....
Rukhsat Hua To Anjum O Mahtab Le Gaya..........................
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Waheed very well said.. keep it up..

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«Reply #13 on: October 14, 2004, 06:55:57 AM »
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nahin Qutubuddin Bhai..............aap hi ke liye hai......... pooja ne sahi kaha hai..........
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«Reply #14 on: October 14, 2004, 07:02:23 AM »
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Jab bhi chahay naee duniya basa laitay hain log
Ek chehray pe kaee chehray laga laitay hain log
Yaad rehta hai kissay guzray zamaanay ka chalan
Sard par jaati hai chaahat haar jaati hai lagan
Ab muhabbat bhi hai kya, ek tijaarat ke siwa
Hum bhi nadaan thay jo odh baithe yaadon ka kafan ...........
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