"Koi ruk jaye to jaane...."

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"Na ashq bahata to tum tak aata main kaise,
ki aarzoo tere chuan ki chupata hu main kaise!

badi aasan hai mohabbat,zamana kehta hoga,
main kafir hi janta hu,nibhta hu main kaise!

ik salaab uthega tamannao ka dil me,kya kahu,
yehi dar mitane ko tumhe bhulata hu main kaise!

mujhe shayar keh chod jaata hai,koi ruk jaye to jaane,
gazalo se raat bhar zakhmo ko  bahlata hu main kaise!"
                
                                       -pragati(ek vikas) happy9
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2013, 09:25:17 PM »
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बेहतरीन वाह वाह!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2013, 09:36:02 AM »
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Shukariya dosto honsla badane ke liye happy9  :icon_salut
Tahe dil she aapko duaaye happy9   wave
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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2013, 01:39:34 PM »
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boht khub likha hai
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2013, 02:03:20 PM »
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Very nice thoughts ....:sensitive and perceptive....well written !!!
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"thankyou so much" happy9
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