koi shakhs nahi

by @kaash on June 05, 2009, 02:46:00 PM
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koi shakhs nahi ehsaas-e-khwaab hai mohabbat meri
jo kuch aisa samaya mujhme ho gayi use bhi chahat meri


ye khumaariyan jisme hum chand ko jheel kahte hain
aur phir usi khyaal se dil ki chandni mita.ti hai pyaas meri


afsoorda-dili se door bahot door aashna jazbaton ko dia hai
guzrun jo maykade se,jhoom uthti hai gali sunke khanak meri


ye kalam ki bekhudi hai jo sarmaya hai shab ki khushbu pe yun
siyaahi se aarzoo poori ho rahi kaisi shabnam se ibadat meri




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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2009, 01:53:19 AM »
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Wah wah Kaash ji,really very very nice,
last 2 lines are very touching, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #2 on: June 06, 2009, 01:54:35 AM »
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VERY GOOD KAASH JI
SARVESH RASTOGI
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: June 06, 2009, 08:42:33 PM »
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koi shakhs nahi ehsaas-e-khwaab hai mohabbat meri
jo kuch aisa samaya mujhme ho gayi use bhi chahat meri


ye khumaariyan jisme hum chand ko jheel kahte hain
aur phir usi khyaal se dil ki chandni mita.ti hai pyaas meri

Ye do sher achche lage, Kaash Ji Bohot Khoob !
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2009, 07:24:35 AM »
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Kaash Bhai... Lajawab Alfaaz Pesh Kiye Hain Dost..!! Lafzon Ka Chunaaw Behad Khubsoorat hai.. Bahut Khooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #5 on: June 08, 2009, 04:12:12 PM »
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Wah Kaash wah dil khush kar diya yaar, bas mujhe lagta hain agar tum isi tarah kalam ko thoda waqt do to tumhara har kalam isse bhi ziyada khoobsurat hoga. Maza aa gaya yeh kalam padhkar........
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MHussain
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«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2009, 11:24:49 PM »
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Well, I appreciate your entire effort, but if you want to get my real feedback, please let me know.
Thanks
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