koocha ba koocha dar-badar kab se

by waheed_rose2004 on November 18, 2004, 05:28:28 PM
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koocha ba koocha dar-badar kab se bhatuk raha hai dil
hum ko bhula ke rah wo apni dagar chala gaya
bharkaain meri piyaas ko aksar teri aankhain
sehra mera chehra hai samandar teri aankhain
phir kon bhala daad-e-tabussam unhain day ga
roain gi bohot mujh say bicher ker teri aankhain
bojhal nazar aati hain bazahir mujhay lakin
khulti hain bohot dil main uttar ker teri aankhain
ab tak meri yaadoon say mitaaye nahi mitta
bheegi huwi ik shaam ka manzar teri aankhain
mumkin ho to ik taza ghazal or bhi keh loon
phir orrh na lain khawaab ki chadar teri aankhain
yaan daikhtay rehna ussay acha nahi muhsin
wo kaanch ka paikar hai to patthar teri aankhain.............
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«Reply #1 on: November 18, 2004, 06:08:43 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob waheed_rose!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: November 19, 2004, 06:55:05 AM »
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Thanx Pooja...........
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«Reply #3 on: November 19, 2004, 07:05:56 PM »
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Waqi Gubsurat...Keep it On...With Love Miss Kismat...
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«Reply #4 on: November 19, 2004, 07:31:00 PM »
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koocha ba koocha dar-badar kab se bhatuk raha hai dil
hum ko bhula ke rah wo apni dagar chala gaya
bharkaain meri piyaas ko aksar teri aankhain
sehra mera chehra hai samandar teri aankhain
phir kon bhala daad-e-tabussam unhain day ga
roain gi bohot mujh say bicher ker teri aankhain
bojhal nazar aati hain bazahir mujhay lakin
khulti hain bohot dil main uttar ker teri aankhain
ab tak meri yaadoon say mitaaye nahi mitta
bheegi huwi ik shaam ka manzar teri aankhain
mumkin ho to ik taza ghazal or bhi keh loon
phir orrh na lain khawaab ki chadar teri aankhain
yaan daikhtay rehna ussay acha nahi muhsin
wo kaanch ka paikar hai to patthar teri aankhain.............


Wow bahut Achchhe Waheed Bhai!! Very Nice!!

Unki Aankhein meri Aankhon mein mujhe Kaisi Lageen,
Kahne ko Dil to bahut Chaahe magar kahein kis se....!
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: November 19, 2004, 08:52:49 PM »
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Nice AKS JI!!!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #6 on: November 20, 2004, 06:03:40 AM »
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Shukriya ji!! Pooja ji!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #7 on: November 20, 2004, 04:17:30 PM »
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koocha ba koocha dar-badar kab se bhatuk raha hai dil
hum ko bhula ke rah wo apni dagar chala gaya
bharkaain meri piyaas ko aksar teri aankhain
sehra mera chehra hai samandar teri aankhain
phir kon bhala daad-e-tabussam unhain day ga
roain gi bohot mujh say bicher ker teri aankhain
bojhal nazar aati hain bazahir mujhay lakin
khulti hain bohot dil main uttar ker teri aankhain
ab tak meri yaadoon say mitaaye nahi mitta
bheegi huwi ik shaam ka manzar teri aankhain
mumkin ho to ik taza ghazal or bhi keh loon
phir orrh na lain khawaab ki chadar teri aankhain
yaan daikhtay rehna ussay acha nahi muhsin
wo kaanch ka paikar hai to patthar teri aankhain.............


Wow bahut Achchhe Waheed Bhai!! Very Nice!!

Unki Aankhein meri Aankhon mein mujhe Kaisi Lageen,
Kahne ko Dil to bahut Chaahe magar kahein kis se....!


bahot touching words aap ne likha hai arun bhai,,,...bahot khoob.........

har dil main aitbaar ki shama roshan nahi hoti.
pyar ke liye zindagi kam nahi hoti.
khwahish par gar kisi ka zor nahi,
wasi khwahish dare khwahish kabhi kam nahi hoti......
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #8 on: November 20, 2004, 06:17:18 PM »
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Shukriya Waheed Bhai!!! very nice written!!!!!

Khud apni Moahabbat pe aitbaar hota to,
Yoon Udaas apni Mehfilein Nahin Hoteen!

Khwahishein hi Bataati hain Ishqq ke raaste,
Raaste Magar Kabhi Manzilein Nahin hoteen!

Hoti hai Mohabbat to gehraaiyon se Dil ki,
Dimaagon ki ismein Daleelein nahin hoteen!

Humein Pataa Kaise Chalti naraazgi Unki,
Mathe pe unke woh Tirchhi Lakeerein nahin hoteen!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #9 on: November 21, 2004, 05:47:53 AM »
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Shukriya Waheed Bhai!!! very nice written!!!!!

Khud apni Moahabbat pe aitbaar hota to,
Yoon Udaas apni Mehfilein Nahin Hoteen!

Khwahishein hi Bataati hain Ishqq ke raaste,
Raaste Magar Kabhi Manzilein Nahin hoteen!

Hoti hai Mohabbat to gehraaiyon se Dil ki,
Dimaagon ki ismein Daleelein nahin hoteen!

Humein Pataa Kaise Chalti naraazgi Unki,
Mathe pe unke woh Tirchhi Lakeerein nahin hoteen!


wow arun bhai..........ek choti se sher humari taraf se.........

be aitbar waqt pe jhunjhla ke ro pade
kho ker kabhi tujhey to kabhi paa ke ro pade

khushian kahan hamare pass rahin
bahir kabhi hanse to ghar aa ke ro pade...............
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: November 21, 2004, 06:27:58 AM »
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wah!!!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #11 on: November 21, 2004, 07:14:44 AM »
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wowow!! Superb!!! Bahut Khoob!!! Waheed Bhai!!!
Shukriya Pooja ji!!!!
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nishita
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«Reply #12 on: November 21, 2004, 09:08:17 AM »
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waaaah all too good
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #13 on: November 21, 2004, 09:20:11 AM »
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Shukriyaaaa! ji!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #14 on: November 21, 2004, 03:51:59 PM »
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Thanx Pooja......Nishita.........Arun Bhai.............
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