kuch khaas nahin

by rita mal on July 04, 2013, 06:13:03 PM
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Aainon mein bhi kabhi unhen hum dikha karte the
khud ko wo jab dhoondhte the to hume paate the

mile arse baad to baat karne ko bhi nahi thi bus
hamare darmiyaan sirf dooriyan aur sannaate the

haath thama to jaana haathon me taqdir basti hai
magar uski girfat ke zakhm meri hatheli jalaate the

jisne is dil se khela wo humse koi paraaya na tha
raahzan nikla woh jise humsafar hum banaate the

kuch khaas nahin bus ek jaan pahchaan rah gayi ab
us shaks se jo kabhi meri zindgi ko apna bataate the


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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2013, 08:11:57 PM »
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Aainon mein bhi kabhi unhen hum dikha karte the
khud ko wo jab dhoondhte the to hume paate the

mile arse baad to baat karne ko bhi nahi thi bus
hamare darmiyaan sirf dooriyan aur sannaate the

haath thama to jaana haathon me taqdir basti hai
magar uski girfat ke zakhm meri hatheli jalaate the

jisne is dil se khela wo humse koi paraaya na tha
raahzan nikla woh jise humsafar hum banaate the

kuch khaas nahin bus ek jaan pahchaan rah gayi ab
us shaks se jo kabhi meri zindgi ko apna bataate the




bahut khoob..........!
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2013, 09:38:53 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2013, 10:03:01 PM »
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Bahot khoob...
apne hi girate hain nasheman pe bijliyan...
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2013, 10:09:27 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoobsoorat rachna ... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rita ji....!!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2013, 10:53:51 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB...... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 05, 2013, 04:36:37 PM »
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बहुत खूब
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