Kuch Na Kahengey - R. Rangila

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Ashkon Ki Badh Apney Hi Ham La Ke Bahengey
Par Dard-e-Jigar Unse Kabhi Kuch Na Kahengey

Waese Bhi Unhen Ilm Nahi Hai Is Ishq Ka
Ek Tarfa Mohabbat Hai Isey Ham Hi Sahengey

Unse Na Gila Koi Na Shikwah Na Shikayat
Karni Hamare Dil Ki Hai Ham Chup Hi Rahengey

Suntey Ye Aaey Hain Wahan Andher Nahi Hai
To Theek Hai Ham Sabr Ke Sang Aur Rahengey

Mil Jaengey Wo Ham’ko, Hoga Wisaal Bhi
Jab Badla Rab Se Swarg Ka Ham Unko Kahengey

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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2016, 06:42:20 AM »
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wah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Rustum ji, dil khush ho gayaa padh ke.... bahut achchaa likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2016, 09:23:16 AM »
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Ashkon Ki Baad Apney Hi Ham La Ke Bahengey
Par Dard-e-Jigar Unse Kabhi Kuch Na Kahengey

Waese Bhi Unhen Ilm Nahi Hai Is Ishq Ka
Ek Tarfa Mohabbat Hai Isey Ham Hi Sahengey

Unse Na Gila Koi Na Shikwah Na Shikayat
Karni Hamare Dil Ki Hai Ham Chup Hi Rahengey

Suntey Ye Aaey Hain Wahan Andher Nahi Hai
To Theek Hai Ham Sabr Ke Sang Aur Rahengey

Mil Jaengey Wo Ham’ko, Hoga Wisaal Bhi
Jab Badla Rab Se Swarg Ka Ham Unko Kahengey

Self: R. Rangila.

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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2016, 10:58:32 AM »
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Ashkon Ki Baad Apney Hi Ham La Ke Bahengey
Par Dard-e-Jigar Unse Kabhi Kuch Na Kahengey

Waese Bhi Unhen Ilm Nahi Hai Is Ishq Ka
Ek Tarfa Mohabbat Hai Isey Ham Hi Sahengey

Unse Na Gila Koi Na Shikwah Na Shikayat
Karni Hamare Dil Ki Hai Ham Chup Hi Rahengey

Suntey Ye Aaey Hain Wahan Andher Nahi Hai
To Theek Hai Ham Sabr Ke Sang Aur Rahengey

Mil Jaengey Wo Ham’ko, Hoga Wisaal Bhi
Jab Badla Rab Se Swarg Ka Ham Unko Kahengey

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First line hum samaj nahi paaye
Plz samjao
IIm ka meaning kya hota hai?
Wisaal ka meaning kya hai?
Really sorry
Itna kuch samjane ko Bol rahe hai rustumji

Bahot hi khubsurat rustumji
Ishq muje hua hai to ye durd sirf muje hi sahena hai..sirf itni baat ko aapne bahot khubsurati se Alfazo Mai sanjoya hai...
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2016, 09:08:27 PM »
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kyaa baat hai waah waah waah bahut umdah Rangila Jee.
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«Reply #5 on: June 16, 2016, 11:06:12 AM »
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Quote from: Shikha sanghvi on June 15, 2016, 10:58:32 AM
First line hum samaj nahi paaye
Plz samjao
IIm ka meaning kya hota hai?
Wisaal ka meaning kya hai?
Really sorry
Itna kuch samjane ko Bol rahe hai rustumji

Bahot hi khubsurat rustumji
Ishq muje hua hai to ye durd sirf muje hi sahena hai..sirf itni baat ko aapne bahot khubsurati se Alfazo Mai sanjoya hai...

Shikha ji koshish karonga aapko samjhane ki, detailed nahi jaonga kyonke also you know it ke poetry means "kuzah me dariya ko samana ya band karna hota hai" - ab aap sonch rahi hongi ke ye "kuzah" kya hai (kuzah means pot or jug)... chalen poetry ki taraf...

Ashkon Ki Badh Apney Hi Ham La Ke Bahengey
(Ashkon = Aansoaon/Tears) (Badh = Toofan/Flood)
Ham apne hi aasoaon ka toofan la’ke us’me bahengey (means itna roengey ke ham apne hi aansoaon ka toofan/sailab/flood laengey aur us’me bah’jaengey)
Par Dard-e-Jigar Unse Kabhi Kuch Na Kahengey
Waese Bhi Unhen Ilm Nahi Hai Is Ishq Ka
(Ilm = maloom/information/knowledge) (Ilm nahi hai = maloom nahi hai / pata nahi hai)
Waese bhi unhen pata nahi hai is pyar/ishq ka (is pyar/ishq ke barey me unhen maloom nahi hai)
Ek Tarfa Mohabbat Hai Isey Ham Hi Sahengey
(Ek-Tarfa = One way)
One way mohabbat hai is liye isey ham hi sahengey
Unse Na Gila Koi Na Shikwah Na Shikayat
Karni Hamare Dil Ki Hai Ham Chup Hi Rahengey
Suntey Ye Aaey Hain Wahan Andher Nahi Hai
To Theek Hai Ham Sabr Ke Sang Aur Rahengey
Mil Jaengey Wo Ham’ko, Hoga Wisaal Bhi
Wisaal = Meeting/Intercourse
(Wo mujhe mil jaengey, aur unse mera wisaal bhi hoga)
(Jab marne ke baad, main Rab se unhen swarg/Jannat ke badley manglonga)
Jab Badla Rab Se Swarg Ka Ham Unko Kahengey

Phir bhi kuch clear nahi hai to puchiye, batane ki koshish karonga Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2016, 11:25:11 AM »
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Quote from: Rustum Rangila on June 16, 2016, 11:06:12 AM
Shikha ji koshish karonga aapko samjhane ki, detailed nahi jaonga kyonke also you know it ke poetry means "kuzah me dariya ko samana ya band karna hota hai" - ab aap sonch rahi hongi ke ye "kuzah" kya hai (kuzah means pot or jug)... chalen poetry ki taraf...

Ashkon Ki Badh Apney Hi Ham La Ke Bahengey
(Ashkon = Aansoaon/Tears) (Badh = Toofan/Flood)
Ham apne hi aasoaon ka toofan la’ke us’me bahengey (means itna roengey ke ham apne hi aansoaon ka toofan/sailab/flood laengey aur us’me bah’jaengey)
Par Dard-e-Jigar Unse Kabhi Kuch Na Kahengey
Waese Bhi Unhen Ilm Nahi Hai Is Ishq Ka
(Ilm = maloom/information/knowledge) (Ilm nahi hai = maloom nahi hai / pata nahi hai)
Waese bhi unhen pata nahi hai is pyar/ishq ka (is pyar/ishq ke barey me unhen maloom nahi hai)
Ek Tarfa Mohabbat Hai Isey Ham Hi Sahengey
(Ek-Tarfa = One way)
One way mohabbat hai is liye isey ham hi sahengey
Unse Na Gila Koi Na Shikwah Na Shikayat
Karni Hamare Dil Ki Hai Ham Chup Hi Rahengey
Suntey Ye Aaey Hain Wahan Andher Nahi Hai
To Theek Hai Ham Sabr Ke Sang Aur Rahengey
Mil Jaengey Wo Ham’ko, Hoga Wisaal Bhi
Wisaal = Meeting/Intercourse
(Wo mujhe mil jaengey, aur unse mera wisaal bhi hoga)
(Jab marne ke baad, main Rab se unhen swarg/Jannat ke badley manglonga)
Jab Badla Rab Se Swarg Ka Ham Unko Kahengey

Phir bhi kuch clear nahi hai to puchiye, batane ki koshish karonga Usual Smile

Wowwww.... Thank you so much rustumji
Aapne to bahot hi achhe se samjaya
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«Reply #7 on: June 16, 2016, 03:37:59 PM »
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kyaa baat hai waah
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«Reply #8 on: June 16, 2016, 07:50:45 PM »
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Quote from: Rustum Rangila on June 15, 2016, 06:37:49 AM
Ashkon Ki Badh Apney Hi Ham La Ke Bahengey
Par Dard-e-Jigar Unse Kabhi Kuch Na Kahengey

naa ji naa main itni bhi zaalim nahin ki dard na samjh sakoo.n per mujhe her aansoo crocodile tears hi lagte hain Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

Waese Bhi Unhen Ilm Nahi Hai Is Ishq Ka
Ek Tarfa Mohabbat Hai Isey Ham Hi Sahengey

Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard mujhe khoob maaloom hai janaab kaa andaaz-e-sukhan is baat kaa gawaah hai ki chot khaaye hue hain per main kisi aur se pyaar karti hoon ji !

Unse Na Gila Koi Na Shikwah Na Shikayat
Karni Hamare Dil Ki Hai Ham Chup Hi Rahengey

correct approach hai ye kambakht dil naa khud sakoo.n se rahne naa kisi ko rahne de Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

Suntey Ye Aaey Hain Wahan Andher Nahi Hai
To Theek Hai Ham Sabr Ke Sang Aur Rahengey

bahut sahi allah ke paas der hai andher nahin icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Mil Jaengey Wo Ham’ko, Hoga Wisaal Bhi
Jab Badla Rab Se Swarg Ka Ham Unko Kahengey

pataa nahin aap kyaa kahnaa chaahte ho iss sher me.n mujhe samjh nahin aayaa icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch!

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«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2016, 08:59:03 AM »
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behad khoobsurat!
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Bahut khoob...
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«Reply #11 on: June 18, 2016, 12:38:43 PM »
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Unse Na Gila Koi Na Shikwah Na Shikayat
Karni Hamare Dil Ki Hai Ham Chup Hi Rahengey

Mil Jaengey Wo Ham’ko, Hoga Wisaal Bhi
Jab Badla Rab Se Swarg Ka Ham Unko Kahengey

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«Reply #12 on: June 19, 2016, 10:28:40 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on June 16, 2016, 07:50:45 PM

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«Reply #14 on: June 21, 2016, 12:48:29 PM »
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Likhiye Kisi Bhi Andaaz me, baat jab Ishq ki hogi toh Dilo'n tak pahuch hi jayegi,poetry me comparison bahot accha kiya Rustum ji Aapne Khuda se jannat ke Badle Mehboob se wisaal hi maang li, abb aise Aashiq kha Dikhtey hai aap hi bolo...ha per comparision Accha hai...sabse alag, hatke. aur baat agar ho ek tarfa Mohobatt Ki tog Mashah-allah is Jaisa Dard Or Shiddat bhari chahat Aur kahi nhi....Aakhir me yahi kahengey Jo pehle bhi ek din kaha tha "likha hai aapne kuch itna gehra jise padh har koi le,samajh sirf Tum Sako" (Yaha "tum" se matlab ishq kerne wala hai) Honi Chahiye Kuch Poetry tricky bar-bar padhne ki chahat badh jati hai....Likhtey Rahiye Rustum ji... 
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