Kuch Na Kahengey - R. Rangila

by Rustum Rangila on June 15, 2016, 06:37:49 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 22, 2016, 06:34:32 AM »
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Likhiye Kisi Bhi Andaaz me, baat jab Ishq ki hogi toh Dilo'n tak pahuch hi jayegi,poetry me comparison bahot accha kiya Rustum ji Aapne Khuda se jannat ke Badle Mehboob se wisaal hi maang li, abb aise Aashiq kha Dikhtey hai aap hi bolo...ha per comparision Accha hai...sabse alag, hatke. aur baat agar ho ek tarfa Mohobatt Ki tog Mashah-allah is Jaisa Dard Or Shiddat bhari chahat Aur kahi nhi....Aakhir me yahi kahengey Jo pehle bhi ek din kaha tha "likha hai aapne kuch itna gehra jise padh har koi le,samajh sirf Tum Sako" (Yaha "tum" se matlab ishq kerne wala hai) Honi Chahiye Kuch Poetry tricky bar-bar padhne ki chahat badh jati hai....Likhtey Rahiye Rustum ji... 

Pooja ji aapne hamen lajawab kar diya... yahan ham apna hi ek sher likhengey...
Ham'pe Ye Aap'ki Jo Inayat Hai Karam Hai
Iske Liye Hi Aap pe Ab Ham'ko Bharam Hai Usual Smile

Bahot bahot shukriya Usual Smile
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