KUCH PAL MILEIN TUMHE DEKHNE KO..SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on August 18, 2013, 03:59:19 PM
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kuch jadu hai uski baton ka jo uski aur khicha chala jata hoon
badi gehri hain uski aakhien main usme dooba chala jata hoon

sang le chalti hai wo mujhe jaane kaunsi kalpna ki dunia mein
loutna chahta hoon par sath uska chhod lout nahi paata hoon

kuch pal mile use dekhne ko kuch pal mile usse batein karne ko
un palon ki chah mein main pura din uski rah taqte bitata hoon

wo aakar jab kuch kehti hia bas besudh ho use sunta rehta hoon
baat chahe samjh naa aaye par uski haan mein haan milata hoon

jab nahi rehti wo saamne tab bhi khyal rehta hai usi ka zehan mein
uski achhi buri baton ko yad kar main apne dil ko behlata hoon

kahin prem rog na lag jaye mujhko dosto.n mere liye yeh dua karna
ishq ke siwa aur bhi bht kaam hai deewane dil ko yeh samjhata hoon
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2013, 04:32:48 PM »
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achchhi poem hai.........nice..
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2013, 05:57:24 PM »
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waah waah bohut khoob soudagar ji..
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2013, 06:02:47 PM »
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good one Saudagar ji
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lovely poetry
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«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2013, 07:05:17 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on August 18, 2013, 03:59:19 PM
kuch jadu hai uski baton ka jo uski aur khicha chala jata hoon
badi gehri hain uski aakhien main usme dooba chala jata hoon

sang le chalti hai wo mujhe jaane kaunsi kalpna ki dunia mein
loutna chahta hoon par sath uska chhod lout nahi paata hoon

kuch pal mile use dekhne ko kuch pal mile usse batein karne ko
un palon ki chah mein main pura din uski rah taqte bitata hoon

wo aakar jab kuch kehti hia bas besudh ho use sunta rehta hoon
baat chahe samjh naa aaye par uski haan mein haan milata hoon

jab nahi rehti wo saamne tab bhi khyal rehta hai usi ka zehan mein
uski achhi buri baton ko yad kar main apne dil ko behlata hoon

kahin prem rog na lag jaye mujhko dosto.n mere liye yeh dua karna
ishq ke siwa aur bhi bht kaam hai deewane dil ko yeh samjhata hoon

Beautiful.....Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ehsaas...

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«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2013, 07:09:08 PM »
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kya baat hai, bahot khoob Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2013, 08:43:19 PM »
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BOHT KHUB KAPIL JI
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«Reply #12 on: August 19, 2013, 02:42:19 AM »
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mastammmmm masttttttttt saudagar ji... kya baat hai kya khuub likha hai aapne.... aur khwaish ji sahi keh rahe hain lag chuka prem rog aapko ab koi dua kaam na aayegi aapke....
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