kuch saal pehle ki baat

by @kaash on June 02, 2009, 12:15:21 PM
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kuch saal pehle ki baat ab puraani hone lagi
zindagi doston ki dua se zindagaani lagne lagi

nahi kasak rahi ab jo usne peeche mudke bhi na dekha
apno ka saath pake magar ab uske lie bhi dua uthne lagi


vo zakhm ab dhul gaye akhon se pani bhi na gira
kya kahen kuch apno ki aisi meherbaani hone lagi


ab hum nahi tanha na hi shikwa hai tujhse e gaye din
ab hume bhi mahsus chaand ki chaandni hone lagi


ye zindagi pichhle saal se humne aisi sawaari hai
ab hamesha hi hawaon me khushbu ki rawaani milne gali


ye ehsaas hai kisi andekhe khwaab ka "kaash" tera
mohabbat kabhi,kabhi khumaari hi deewaani lagne lagi
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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2009, 12:34:01 PM »
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gud one kaash

e guzre din teri yaad mein ab mein rota nahin
kii mere ashqon ko poonchne wala mil gaya
jis takdeer ko kosta rehta tha raat din
aaj mujhe oose likhne wala mil gaya
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2009, 12:37:02 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on June 02, 2009, 12:15:21 PM
kuch saal pehle ki baat ab puraani hone lagi
zindagi doston ki dua se zindagaani lagne lagi

nahi kasak rahi ab jo usne peeche mudke bhi na dekha
apno ka saath pake magar ab uske lie bhi dua uthne lagi


vo zakhm ab dhul gaye akhon se pani bhi na gira
kya kahen kuch apno ki aisi meherbaani hone lagi


ab hum nahi tanha na hi shikwa hai tujhse e gaye din
ab hume bhi mahsus chaand ki chaandni hone lagi


ye zindagi pichhle saal se humne aisi sawaari hai
ab hamesha hi hawaon me khushbu ki rawaani milne gali


ye ehsaas hai kisi andekhe khwaab ka "kaash" tera
mohabbat kabhi,kabhi khumaari hi deewaani lagne lagi



bahut khoob Kaash ji
likhte rahiye aise hi... Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2009, 12:39:05 PM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on June 02, 2009, 12:34:01 PM
gud one kaash

e guzre din teri yaad mein ab mein rota nahin
kii mere ashqon ko poonchne wala mil gaya
jis takdeer ko kosta rehta tha raat din
aaj mujhe oose likhne wala mil gaya

nice lines Salil ji
too good Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2009, 12:39:35 PM »
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Aapke yeh Andekhe Khwaab Behad Khubsoorat hain KAASH Bhai..aur Yeh inhe aapne Lafzon me behad Khubsoorati se utaara hai.. Bahut Khooooooooob dost.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2009, 06:59:48 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Kaash Ji.
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«Reply #6 on: June 02, 2009, 08:38:48 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Kaash ji,wonderful, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2009, 10:15:36 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on June 02, 2009, 12:15:21 PM
kuch saal pehle ki baat ab puraani hone lagi
zindagi doston ki dua se zindagaani lagne lagi

nahi kasak rahi ab jo usne peeche mudke bhi na dekha
apno ka saath pake magar ab uske lie bhi dua uthne lagi


vo zakhm ab dhul gaye akhon se pani bhi na gira
kya kahen kuch apno ki aisi meherbaani hone lagi


ab hum nahi tanha na hi shikwa hai tujhse e gaye din
ab hume bhi mahsus chaand ki chaandni hone lagi


ye zindagi pichhle saal se humne aisi sawaari hai
ab hamesha hi hawaon me khushbu ki rawaani milne gali


ye ehsaas hai kisi andekhe khwaab ka "kaash" tera
mohabbat kabhi,kabhi khumaari hi deewaani lagne lagi



Very nice work...Bohot Khoob Kaash Ji
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«Reply #8 on: June 02, 2009, 10:17:02 PM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on June 02, 2009, 12:34:01 PM
gud one kaash

e guzre din teri yaad mein ab mein rota nahin
kii mere ashqon ko poonchne wala mil gaya
jis takdeer ko kosta rehta tha raat din
aaj mujhe oose likhne wala mil gaya

Nice one Salil
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«Reply #9 on: June 02, 2009, 10:47:59 PM »
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vo zakhm ab dhul gaye akhon se pani bhi na gira
kya kahen kuch apno ki aisi meherbaani hone lagi

kaash ji
bahut achi ghazal likhi hai
har sher behtareen hain
daad kabool farmayen
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«Reply #10 on: June 08, 2009, 04:18:07 PM »
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Nice work Kaash
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