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Bahut sochta hai mera dil tumhare liye.........
bahut si batten keh kar bhi kuch unkaha sa reh jata hai..............
mere dil mein tumhare liye ek pyar ka sagar leherta hai...........
fir bhi na jane yeh dil unchahaa sa sawaal kyu kar jata hai......
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puchata hai dil aksar kai sawaal.........
kya mere pyar ka gehra sagar pyas bujha sakta hai tumhari.........?
mera pyar kya tumhare angan mein bandh kar geet khushi ke ga sakta hai.......?
chaaya rehta hai tumhare jehan par bhi mere pyar ka gehara kala badal...........
per kya yeh mujh per baras sakata hai?
kya yeh mujko bheego sakata hai........?
aksar bebas se kar jate hain yeh sawaal mujko...........
dil mein ek anjaani si chubhan de jate hain mujhko......
Fir na jane kye soch kar........
yeh dil khil sa jata hai...................
jab kabhi tumhari dil ki laharo se uthata pyar .......
mere dil ki laharo se takara jata hai........
tumhara bas yahi ek pal ka pyar ..........
jaise meri duniya hi badal jata hai......................
aur mere sare sawaalo ko jaise ek nayi raha dikha jata hai....
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2006, 06:00:36 AM » |
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hhmmm
gud going dear keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2006, 06:43:18 AM » |
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Beauty ... ranjana ji . bhut kuch chupa hai appki is kavita hai...
very nice .... :D
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2006, 04:40:38 PM » |
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shukriya Nitiesh ...........shukriya Jeet................kuch likhiye na in chipe sawalo per..............  |
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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2006, 05:16:52 PM » |
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Bahut sochta hai mera dil tumhare liye.........
bahut si batten keh kar bhi kuch unkaha sa reh jata hai..............
mere dil mein tumhare liye ek pyar ka sagar leherta hai...........
fir bhi na jane yeh dil unchahaa sa sawaal kyu kar jata hai......
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puchata hai dil aksar kai sawaal.........
kya mere pyar ka gehra sagar pyas bujha sakta hai tumhari.........?
mera pyar kya tumhare angan mein bandh kar geet khushi ke ga sakta hai.......?
chaaya rehta hai tumhare jehan par bhi mere pyar ka gehara kala badal...........
per kya yeh mujh per baras sakata hai?
kya yeh mujko bheego sakata hai........?
aksar bebas se kar jate hain yeh sawaal mujko...........
dil mein ek anjaani si chubhan de jate hain mujhko......
Fir na jane kye soch kar........
yeh dil khil sa jata hai...................
jab kabhi tumhari dil ki laharo se uthata pyar .......
mere dil ki laharo se takara jata hai........
tumhara bas yahi ek pal ka pyar ..........
jaise meri duniya hi badal jata hai......................
aur mere sare sawaalo ko jaise ek nayi raha dikha jata hai....
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ranjana Brilliant Ranju........ Yeh Sawaal tumhare lagte dunia ko kuch ajeeb hai..... Ek saye se hai Pyar tumhe hota woh tanhaion me tumhare kareeb hai..... Le jata hai tumhe door kahin wadion mein...... Khushnaseeb hai tu tujhe Pyar uska naseeb hota hai..... Yeh Dil bhi parwane ki tarah tujhe chahta hai.... Par sunke baatein teri yeh khamoshi me kho jata hai........ |
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«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2006, 05:25:59 PM » |
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tumhe dekhta hun tau ek sawaal sa uthta hai
mere bina kya tu bhi baichain rehta hai
meri kya aukaat hai tere jeevan mein
yeh dil bhi namumkin sapne sajaye rehta hai
teri basti mein veeranio ko dekh kar lagta hai
ki tu bhi dil mein sailaab chupaye rehta hai
aaj todd de khamoshi ki chaadar ko
yeh kaise kafan mein khud ko sanjoye baitha hai
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«Reply #6 on: May 19, 2006, 05:31:21 PM » |
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hmmm.... ranjana... aahlaadaniy...ullasaniy..
murjha gaya phool ek aaj khila hain phir se
priyatham ke chahat mein aasra mein...
sundar sa madhu bikhra hain madhuvan mein
chandrama ke youvan mile toh jeevan paavan...
is sita ka jeevan mein tu bani janakiram
andhkaar ke jeevan ke asha ke chiraag
murjha...
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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2006, 02:10:05 AM » |
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Brilliant Ranju........
Yeh Sawaal tumhare lagte dunia ko kuch ajeeb hai.....
Ek saye se hai Pyar tumhe hota woh tanhaion me tumhare kareeb hai.....
Le jata hai tumhe door kahin wadion mein......
Khushnaseeb hai tu tujhe Pyar uska naseeb hota hai.....
Yeh Dil bhi parwane ki tarah tujhe chahta hai....
Par sunke baatein teri yeh khamoshi me kho jata hai........ very nice Gaurav.................... ek saya hai jo har dam mere saath rahata hai ajab se sawal aur jawab karta hai mere har dukh-sukh ko hans ke sehata hai le jaata hai woh mujhe un fizaon mein bas pyar hi pyar milta hai mujhe uski chhaw mein........ |
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«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2006, 02:16:40 AM » |
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tumhe dekhta hun tau ek sawaal sa uthta hai
mere bina kya tu bhi baichain rehta hai
meri kya aukaat hai tere jeevan mein
yeh dil bhi namumkin sapne sajaye rehta hai
teri basti mein veeranio ko dekh kar lagta hai
ki tu bhi dil mein sailaab chupaye rehta hai
aaj todd de khamoshi ki chaadar ko
yeh kaise kafan mein khud ko sanjoye baitha hai bahut khub Nitiesh......... jindagi bhi kai baar ajab khel dikahtai hai khud hi sawaal aur khud hi jawab ban jaati hai |
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«Reply #9 on: May 20, 2006, 02:17:42 AM » |
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hmmm.... ranjana... aahlaadaniy...ullasaniy..
murjha gaya phool ek aaj khila hain phir se
priyatham ke chahat mein aasra mein...
sundar sa madhu bikhra hain madhuvan mein
chandrama ke youvan mile toh jeevan paavan...
is sita ka jeevan mein tu bani janakiram
andhkaar ke jeevan ke asha ke chiraag
murjha... shukriya MKji....................bahut accha likha aapne |
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«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2006, 11:57:16 AM » |
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Woh soch nahin hain sajna yaadein hoti hain...
us unkahi baatein hi aise ek kavitha hoti hain...
jahaj banke us leherta hua sagar mein langar daal the hain...
unchaha sa sawaal isliye kar jata hain kyonki tu ne pyar kiya hain..
sawaal mein hi jawaab bhi rehta hain sajna...
jab yeh sagar saare dharti ka pyas bhuja sakti hain toh
yeh tere pyar ka sagar bhi mere pyar bhuja sakta hain..
jab aisa ek geet likh diya tu ne is dil ke kagaz mein toh
khushi ke gana hi hoti hain...
tu sirf kala badal nahin ho mere pyar ke varshdhara ho
chaya toh hamare pyar ka hain...
chalo yeh bhi kya sawal hain sajna, barsa jo hain
yeh tera hi pyar hain aur bheega hoon main...
maan liya teri in bebasi ko aur itna maloom
hain mujhe, tere dil chahte hain mere gaadaalingan ko...
sochna chod do sajna aur dil ko khilne do
pyar ki leharon uthne do aur
mere seene ki kinaron se takarane do...
badla toh meri bhi duniya hain sajna
aur pyar sirf ek pal nahin har pal mein hoga...
tere har sawaalon ka jawab mil gayi par
soch rahin hoon main ab..... :lol: :D
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«Reply #11 on: May 21, 2006, 02:05:48 PM » |
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Nice One Ranjana Lage Raho,..
Chahaton Ne Teri Mujh Pe Aisa Asar Kiya,..
Ke Main Jagte Hue Bhi Tere Khwaab Dekhta Hoon,..
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«Reply #12 on: May 22, 2006, 02:37:08 AM » |
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Nice One Ranjana Lage Raho,..
Chahaton Ne Teri Mujh Pe Aisa Asar Kiya,..
Ke Main Jagte Hue Bhi Tere Khwaab Dekhta Hoon,..
_______________________________-Jaanasheen- shukriya Bhai...............bahut khub.......... jaal shaam ne fir failya aur mujhe ek chehara yaad aaya duniya ka chehara dundhalyaa aur ek chehara yaad aaya..n/m |
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«Reply #13 on: May 22, 2006, 08:21:44 AM » |
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Nice One Ranjana,..
Yaad Tum Hume Nahi Aate Kabhi Jaanasheen,..
Jab Ke Samaai Ho Tum Mere Dil Mein Dhadkan Ki Tarah,..
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«Reply #14 on: May 22, 2006, 01:33:18 PM » |
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ranjana sawal bahut ache karti ho,
waise shayari bhi achi karti ho,
good good
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