Kuch to maraasim hoNge tujhse purane mere" ParwaaZ"

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Kuch to maraasim hoNge tujhse purane mere
KhiNch laate hai jo tujh tak ye bahaane mere

Har jagaaH teri yaadeN mujh ko sataati haiN
YeH Koun batlaata hai unhe thikaane mere

Saathi the raaz e dil ke Dil e azeez bhi the
Sun ke haste haiN wohi dost fasaane mere

Itna kah kar usne rishta hum se tod hii diyaa
Aik tum hi nahi ho "ParwaaZ" diwaane mere


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«Reply #1 on: September 17, 2011, 11:03:17 AM »
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Kuch to maraasim hoNge tujhse purane mere
KhiNch laate hai jo tujh tak ye bahaane mere

Har jagaaH teri yaadeN mujh ko sataati haiN
YeH Koun batlaata hai unhe thikaane mere

Saathi the raaz e dil ke Dil e azeez bhi the
Sun ke haste haiN wohi dost fasaane mere

Itna kah kar usne rishta hum se tod hii diyaa
Aik tum hi nahi ho "ParwaaZ" diwaane mere




      bahut hi sanjida aur khoobsoorat ehsaas..............!!!



               tune hi diye hain bol meri awaaz ko,
               warna bejaan se rahe pahle gaane mere.
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«Reply #2 on: September 17, 2011, 11:03:23 AM »
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Bahut khubsoorat likha aapne Parwaaz Ji...Daad..!!
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«Reply #3 on: September 17, 2011, 11:05:32 AM »
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bahut khoob parwaaz sahab Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2011, 11:07:59 AM »
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Parwaaz saheb,bahut khoobsurat kalaam pesh kiya hai.Doosra she'r aur maqta khaas taur se qaabil e muarakbaad hain.yuunhi apne kalaam se nawaazte rahiye.HASAN
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2011, 11:21:58 AM »
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bahut bahut aur bahut khub parwazji...

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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2011, 11:40:56 AM »
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Kuch to maraasim hoNge tujhse purane mere
KhiNch laate hai jo tujh tak ye bahaane mere

Har jagaaH teri yaadeN mujh ko sataati haiN
YeH Koun batlaata hai unhe thikaane mere

Saathi the raaz e dil ke Dil e azeez bhi the
Sun ke haste haiN wohi dost fasaane mere

Itna kah kar usne rishta hum se tod hii diyaa
Aik tum hi nahi ho "ParwaaZ" diwaane mere




Bahut Bahut Khoob Parwaaz Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: September 17, 2011, 11:57:26 AM »
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Kuch to maraasim hoNge tujhse purane mere
KhiNch laate hai jo tujh tak ye bahaane mere

Har jagaaH teri yaadeN mujh ko sataati haiN
YeH Koun batlaata hai unhe thikaane mere

Saathi the raaz e dil ke Dil e azeez bhi the
Sun ke haste haiN wohi dost fasaane mere

Itna kah kar usne rishta hum se tod hii diyaa
Aik tum hi nahi ho "ParwaaZ" diwaane mere



ati sunder Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: September 17, 2011, 05:27:13 PM »
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      bahut hi sanjida aur khoobsoorat ehsaas..............!!!



               tune hi diye hain bol meri awaaz ko,
               warna bejaan se rahe pahle gaane mere.


Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!

Tah e dil se shukriyaa janab ke aapko kalaam ke ahsaas
sanjida lage.. Usual Smile

Behad khub sher kaha aapne.. aap shayari se kafi judi hai
yeH aapke is sher se samajh aata hai.. Usual Smile

Bahut khoob daad Usual Smile

Aage bhi apna saath banaaye rakhiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #9 on: September 17, 2011, 05:37:11 PM »
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bahooooooot khoob janab daad kabool karen..... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 18, 2011, 04:46:42 AM »
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Parwaaz Ji,

Waah..waah bahut khoob kya kahne
yoon to har sher bahut achchha hai
par maqte ka jawab naheen.

Dili daad o mubarkbaad qubool farmaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #11 on: September 18, 2011, 05:22:06 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: September 18, 2011, 05:26:08 AM »
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Parwaaz Saheb Aadaab!

Janab Bauht Hi Khoob Ehsasoo Se Bandi Kalam Hai

Dil Se Daad
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: September 19, 2011, 07:51:31 AM »
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Kuch to maraasim hoNge tujhse purane mere
KhiNch laate hai jo tujh tak ye bahaane mere

Har jagaaH teri yaadeN mujh ko sataati haiN
YeH Koun batlaata hai unhe thikaane mere

Saathi the raaz e dil ke Dil e azeez bhi the
Sun ke haste haiN wohi dost fasaane mere

Itna kah kar usne rishta hum se tod hii diyaa
Aik tum hi nahi ho "ParwaaZ" diwaane mere







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«Reply #14 on: September 20, 2011, 09:51:17 AM »
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Bahut khubsoorat likha aapne Parwaaz Ji...Daad..!!

G P JEe Aadaab!

Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab... aage bhi saath dete rahiye..
HouNslaa afzai karte rahiye...

Khush O aabaad rahiye... Khudaa Hafez.. Usual Smile         

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