kuchch faisle

by saaz_haldwanvi on April 13, 2009, 04:50:31 AM
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Kuchch faisle waqt per bhi chhod de
Wada-o-paima chahe to tod de,
Ek umr se hoon hansi ko bhi mahrum
Tu ab to mere dil ko dukhana chhod de,
khalis se nikal kar riste mayne pate hain
Tere dil mein jo hai bol de,
Waqt jaya karne mein hai kahan ki hosiyari
manzil gar nahi milti to rah mod de
Main waqt mein rakhta hoon har aadhi baat
jo waqt padne par mujhe fir se jod de,
Main sach hoon'saaz' koi jajbaat nahi
jise dil pakde aur juban chhod de,   "saaz haldwanvi" wriiten on 22 jan 00
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«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2009, 05:59:15 AM »
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Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on April 13, 2009, 04:50:31 AM
Kuchch faisle waqt per bhi chhod de
Wada-o-paima chahe to tod de,
Ek umr se hoon hansi ko bhi mahrum
Tu ab to mere dil ko dukhana chhod de,
khalis se nikal kar riste mayne pate hain
Tere dil mein jo hai bol de,
Waqt jaya karne mein hai kahan ki hosiyari
manzil gar nahi milti to rah mod de
Main waqt mein rakhta hoon har aadhi baat
jo waqt padne mein mujhe fir se jod de,
Main sach hoon'saaz' koi jajbaat nahi
jise dil pakde aur juban chhod de,   "saaz haldwanvi" wriiten on 22 jan 00
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saaz sahab bhut khoob, mashallah bhut hi achi ghazal kahi hai aapne keep writing................
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2009, 06:24:43 AM »
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Wah subhan_allah Saaz.. miya makhte me kya badi baat keh gaye, maza aa gaya padhkar....
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«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2009, 06:37:35 AM »
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Wah wah saaz Ji kya bat hai.. bahoot khoob likha hai aapne. Keep writing............Winking
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2009, 06:48:20 AM »
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Nice one Saaz
Likhte rahiye
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saaz_haldwanvi
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«Reply #5 on: April 13, 2009, 04:43:31 PM »
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sukriya sajid,masaylo se bhari padi duniya mein sh_eron mein daat dene wale bhi hain ;jankar achcha laga
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«Reply #6 on: April 13, 2009, 04:45:27 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on April 13, 2009, 06:37:35 AM
Wah wah saaz Ji kya bat hai.. bahoot khoob likha hai aapne. Keep writing............Winking
sukriya sophi ji,hairan hoon daat dene walo ki kami nahi hai
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«Reply #7 on: July 21, 2009, 08:04:48 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on April 13, 2009, 05:59:15 AM
saaz sahab bhut khoob, mashallah bhut hi achi ghazal kahi hai aapne keep writing................
shukriya aaina ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 21, 2009, 08:24:10 AM »
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Wah Saaz ji very nice and beautiful creation,bahut acha likhte ho aap. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent.
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«Reply #9 on: July 21, 2009, 10:26:12 AM »
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NICE ONE SAAZ JI Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 21, 2009, 10:57:04 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 21, 2009, 08:24:10 AM
Wah Saaz ji very nice and beautiful creation,bahut acha likhte ho aap. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent.
honsla afzai ka shukriya madhu ji
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«Reply #11 on: July 21, 2009, 10:59:01 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on July 21, 2009, 10:26:12 AM
NICE ONE SAAZ JI Clapping Smiley Applause
welcome sheba thanx and be with us
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«Reply #12 on: July 21, 2009, 12:17:41 PM »
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VERY NICE SAAZ JI Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 21, 2009, 05:54:10 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on July 21, 2009, 12:17:41 PM
VERY NICE SAAZ JI Applause
shukriya dost,aur yo india mein aapko khushamdeed hai
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«Reply #14 on: July 22, 2009, 02:24:26 AM »
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Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on April 13, 2009, 04:50:31 AM
Kuchch faisle waqt per bhi chhod de
Wada-o-paima chahe to tod de,
Ek umr se hoon hansi ko bhi mahrum
Tu ab to mere dil ko dukhana chhod de,
khalis se nikal kar riste mayne pate hain
Tere dil mein jo hai bol de,
Waqt jaya karne mein hai kahan ki hosiyari
manzil gar nahi milti to rah mod de
Main waqt mein rakhta hoon har aadhi baat
jo waqt padne par mujhe fir se jod de,
Main sach hoon'saaz' koi jajbaat nahi
jise dil pakde aur juban chhod de,   "saaz haldwanvi" wriiten on 22 jan 00
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Very good  Applause. Nice creation Saaz ji  Usual Smile
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