Kuchh Yun................. {Angel}

by angel4u on June 28, 2009, 07:37:16 AM
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Meri Dhadkano Ki Pyaas JaanaM Kuch To Bujhe,
Barse Teri Chahaton Ka Pyaara Sa Saawan Yun,

Ek MasooM Si Kali Ban Gayi Ho Itrake Gulaab Jaise,
Mehka Jaa SanaM Tu Meri Barson Ki Tishnagi Yun,

Geele Geele Se Ho Bhi Gaye Meri TaMannaon Ke Khat,
Sargoshi Ki Hai Mujhse Khwahish-E-Baarish Ne Yun,

Aaj Lagte Hai Mera Har Ashq Banjar Ho Gaya Ho Jaise,
Meri Nazron Pe Teri Palkon Ki Chaadar Bichi Hai Yun,

SaMa Leti Hai Jaise ZaMeen Har Ek Boond Baarish Ki,
Apni Aagosh Mein SaMa Le Meri Barasti Wafa Ko Yun...
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2009, 08:14:38 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Angel Ji. Applause Applause
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2009, 10:02:50 AM »
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Wah wah Angel ji,very beautiful creation.bahut achi lagi . Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2009, 10:43:30 AM »
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bahut hi khub Angel ji Applause Applause Applause
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pandit
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2009, 12:29:30 PM »
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bahut acche angel...
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2009, 01:09:48 PM »
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Meri Dhadkano Ki Pyaas JaanaM Kuch To Bujhe,
Barse Teri Chahaton Ka Pyaara Sa Saawan Yun,

Ek MasooM Si Kali Ban Gayi Ho Itrake Gulaab Jaise,
Mehka Jaa SanaM Tu Meri Barson Ki Tishnagi Yun,

Geele Geele Se Ho Bhi Gaye Meri TaMannaon Ke Khat,
Sargoshi Ki Hai Mujhse Khwahish-E-Baarish Ne Yun,

Aaj Lagte Hai Mera Har Ashq Banjar Ho Gaya Ho Jaise,
Meri Nazron Pe Teri Palkon Ki Chaadar Bichi Hai Yun,

SaMa Leti Hai Jaise ZaMeen Har Ek Boond Baarish Ki,
Apni Aagosh Mein SaMa Le Meri Barasti Wafa Ko Yun...



bahut bahut khoob Angel ji
really too good...
Applause Applause Applause
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angel4u
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2009, 03:41:21 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Angel Ji. Applause Applause

Thank you sam...
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2009, 03:42:48 PM »
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Wah wah Angel ji,very beautiful creation.bahut achi lagi . Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks Madhu...
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2009, 03:43:46 PM »
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bahut hi khub Angel ji Applause Applause Applause

Thank you Popz...
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angel4u
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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2009, 03:44:33 PM »
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bahut acche angel...

Thanks Pandit ji
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angel4u
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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2009, 03:46:23 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Angel ji
really too good...
Applause Applause Applause

Thanks Kashish...
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«Reply #11 on: June 28, 2009, 03:47:29 PM »
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Bahot khoob likha hai aapne Angel ji, very nice

Thank you Kaash ji...
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«Reply #12 on: June 28, 2009, 03:54:07 PM »
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Meri Dhadkano Ki Pyaas JaanaM Kuch To Bujhe,
Barse Teri Chahaton Ka Pyaara Sa Saawan Yun,

Ek MasooM Si Kali Ban Gayi Ho Itrake Gulaab Jaise,
Mehka Jaa SanaM Tu Meri Barson Ki Tishnagi Yun,

Geele Geele Se Ho Bhi Gaye Meri TaMannaon Ke Khat,
Sargoshi Ki Hai Mujhse Khwahish-E-Baarish Ne Yun,

Aaj Lagte Hai Mera Har Ashq Banjar Ho Gaya Ho Jaise,
Meri Nazron Pe Teri Palkon Ki Chaadar Bichi Hai Yun,

SaMa Leti Hai Jaise ZaMeen Har Ek Boond Baarish Ki,
Apni Aagosh Mein SaMa Le Meri Barasti Wafa Ko Yun...


Hey Shona kitna Payara likha hai.. bahoot bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #13 on: June 28, 2009, 03:57:32 PM »
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Behad Khubsoorat kalam hai Angel di...Applause
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«Reply #14 on: June 28, 2009, 04:01:54 PM »
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Hey Shona kitna Payara likha hai.. bahoot bahoot Khoob!

Thanks Sweety...
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