Kuchh Yun................. {Angel}

by angel4u on June 28, 2009, 07:37:16 AM
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #15 on: June 28, 2009, 04:27:24 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Angel Ji
Achchha likha hai
SARVESH RASTOGI
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angel4u
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«Reply #16 on: June 28, 2009, 04:47:39 PM »
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Thank you Sarvesh Ji...
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Deepati
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«Reply #17 on: June 28, 2009, 10:58:52 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on June 28, 2009, 07:37:16 AM
Meri Dhadkano Ki Pyaas JaanaM Kuch To Bujhe,
Barse Teri Chahaton Ka Pyaara Sa Saawan Yun,

Ek MasooM Si Kali Ban Gayi Ho Itrake Gulaab Jaise,
Mehka Jaa SanaM Tu Meri Barson Ki Tishnagi Yun,

Geele Geele Se Ho Bhi Gaye Meri TaMannaon Ke Khat,
Sargoshi Ki Hai Mujhse Khwahish-E-Baarish Ne Yun,

Aaj Lagte Hai Mera Har Ashq Banjar Ho Gaya Ho Jaise,
Meri Nazron Pe Teri Palkon Ki Chaadar Bichi Hai Yun,

SaMa Leti Hai Jaise ZaMeen Har Ek Boond Baarish Ki,
Apni Aagosh Mein SaMa Le Meri Barasti Wafa Ko Yun...


Bahut khoob, Angel Ji! Applause
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #18 on: June 28, 2009, 11:10:03 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on June 28, 2009, 07:37:16 AM
Meri Dhadkano Ki Pyaas JaanaM Kuch To Bujhe,
Barse Teri Chahaton Ka Pyaara Sa Saawan Yun,

Ek MasooM Si Kali Ban Gayi Ho Itrake Gulaab Jaise,
Mehka Jaa SanaM Tu Meri Barson Ki Tishnagi Yun,

Geele Geele Se Ho Bhi Gaye Meri TaMannaon Ke Khat,
Sargoshi Ki Hai Mujhse Khwahish-E-Baarish Ne Yun,

Aaj Lagte Hai Mera Har Ashq Banjar Ho Gaya Ho Jaise,
Meri Nazron Pe Teri Palkon Ki Chaadar Bichi Hai Yun,

SaMa Leti Hai Jaise ZaMeen Har Ek Boond Baarish Ki,
Apni Aagosh Mein SaMa Le Meri Barasti Wafa Ko Yun...


Tamam ghazal hi khoob hai, mgar ye "Palkon ki chaadar" or "Barasti Wafa" jese umda alfaaz ne kamaal hi kardiya, bohot umda angel ji.
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«Reply #19 on: June 29, 2009, 04:02:37 AM »
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Angelllllllllll....... Wow Dear.. Bahut hi Pyaar Bhari Rachna Likhi hai Dear.. Har Lafz mohabbat me Bhiga Nazar aa raha Hai.. Ehasaason Ko aur Pyaar Bhare Jazzbaaton ko Bakhooobi Pesh kiya hai Dear.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooooooob.... Applause Applause

Aaj Ki Ice-Cream meri Taraf se tujhe..  Winking Winking icon_thumleft icon_thumleft


**~** Mann **~**
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Talat
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«Reply #20 on: June 29, 2009, 11:45:29 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on June 28, 2009, 07:37:16 AM
Meri Dhadkano Ki Pyaas JaanaM Kuch To Bujhe,
Barse Teri Chahaton Ka Pyaara Sa Saawan Yun,

Ek MasooM Si Kali Ban Gayi Ho Itrake Gulaab Jaise,
Mehka Jaa SanaM Tu Meri Barson Ki Tishnagi Yun,

Geele Geele Se Ho Bhi Gaye Meri TaMannaon Ke Khat,
Sargoshi Ki Hai Mujhse Khwahish-E-Baarish Ne Yun,

Aaj Lagte Hai Mera Har Ashq Banjar Ho Gaya Ho Jaise,
Meri Nazron Pe Teri Palkon Ki Chaadar Bichi Hai Yun,

SaMa Leti Hai Jaise ZaMeen Har Ek Boond Baarish Ki,
Apni Aagosh Mein SaMa Le Meri Barasti Wafa Ko Yun...


Bohot pyara likha hai Angel, bohot khoob !!
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«Reply #21 on: June 29, 2009, 12:48:29 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on June 28, 2009, 07:37:16 AM
Meri Dhadkano Ki Pyaas JaanaM Kuch To Bujhe,
Barse Teri Chahaton Ka Pyaara Sa Saawan Yun,

Ek MasooM Si Kali Ban Gayi Ho Itrake Gulaab Jaise,
Mehka Jaa SanaM Tu Meri Barson Ki Tishnagi Yun,

Geele Geele Se Ho Bhi Gaye Meri TaMannaon Ke Khat,
Sargoshi Ki Hai Mujhse Khwahish-E-Baarish Ne Yun,

Aaj Lagte Hai Mera Har Ashq Banjar Ho Gaya Ho Jaise,
Meri Nazron Pe Teri Palkon Ki Chaadar Bichi Hai Yun,

SaMa Leti Hai Jaise ZaMeen Har Ek Boond Baarish Ki,
Apni Aagosh Mein SaMa Le Meri Barasti Wafa Ko Yun...


WAAH WAAH BAHUT KHOOB BAHUT ACHCHEY.....SUBHAAN ALLAH ..KYAA KAHNEY...A..!!
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angel4u
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«Reply #22 on: June 29, 2009, 04:16:19 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on June 29, 2009, 04:02:37 AM
Angelllllllllll....... Wow Dear.. Bahut hi Pyaar Bhari Rachna Likhi hai Dear.. Har Lafz mohabbat me Bhiga Nazar aa raha Hai.. Ehasaason Ko aur Pyaar Bhare Jazzbaaton ko Bakhooobi Pesh kiya hai Dear.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooooooob.... Applause Applause

Aaj Ki Ice-Cream meri Taraf se tujhe..  Winking Winking icon_thumleft icon_thumleft


**~** Mann **~**

Ohhhh... Thank you so much, itne pyaare words kehne ke liye...

bahut bahut bahut shukriya Usual Smile

chalo abhi icecrem dena tongue3
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«Reply #23 on: June 29, 2009, 04:16:44 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on June 28, 2009, 10:58:52 PM
Bahut khoob, Angel Ji! Applause

Thanks Deepti..
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«Reply #24 on: June 29, 2009, 04:17:24 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 28, 2009, 11:10:03 PM
Tamam ghazal hi khoob hai, mgar ye "Palkon ki chaadar" or "Barasti Wafa" jese umda alfaaz ne kamaal hi kardiya, bohot umda angel ji.

Bahut bahut shukriya Sayyid ji. pasand karne ke liye aur saraahne ke liye bhi...
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«Reply #25 on: June 29, 2009, 04:17:45 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 29, 2009, 11:45:29 AM
Bohot pyara likha hai Angel, bohot khoob !!

Thank you so much Talat Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: June 29, 2009, 04:18:08 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 29, 2009, 12:48:29 PM
WAAH WAAH BAHUT KHOOB BAHUT ACHCHEY.....SUBHAAN ALLAH ..KYAA KAHNEY...A..!!

Thanks KA... Thank you so much.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #27 on: June 29, 2009, 04:23:51 PM »
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Angel......behad....behad...behad....achcha laga aapko padh-kar......aur jais ki randeri ji ne kaha....shabdon ka kya hi khoob istemaal kiya hai aapne....
bahoot umda
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«Reply #28 on: June 29, 2009, 04:44:32 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya, aapka comment dekhke sach mein bahut bahut achha laga...

Thankyou !
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«Reply #29 on: June 29, 2009, 04:47:27 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Angel!!!Bahut Hi Khoobsurat..

har Lafz Mein Pyaar basa hai..Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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