Kuhak uthheygee baansuree, lahraayegaa neer!!

by abdbundeli on October 18, 2008, 12:42:32 PM
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Woh aayengey lout kar
Fir Yamunaa key teer!
Kuhak uthheygee baansuree,
Lahraayegaa neer!!
                 - Ramwatiya / abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2008, 06:40:33 PM »
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han umeed to yahi hai ki wo yamuna teer fir aayenge...
unke aate hi aasma me badal gheer aayenge,
jaise hi unki bansuri koi raag chhedegi..mahol badal jayega,
Khushiyo ke din aa jayenge, ghum ka sama dhal jayega.
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2008, 04:38:24 AM »
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Deepak Subi ji,
Hameen kaheen jaatey naheen,
Woh aatey hain roj!
Nazaroun ko failaaiye,
Jaaree rakhiye khoj!!
                           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2008, 10:15:02 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 19, 2008, 04:38:24 AM
Deepak Subi ji,
Hameen kaheen jaatey naheen, woh aatey hain roj!
Nazaroun ko failaaiye, jaaree rakhiye khoj!!
                           - abd bundeli

HOGI GHAZAL MUKAMMAL KYA ITNA YAKEEN NA THA
BAKI BACHI SASO PE KYA TUMKO YAKEEN NA THA
DARTA HU MAIN KAHI YEH NA SOCH BHAITHU
MERE ABD KE PASS, AAJ LIKHNE KO KUCH NA THA.

                       -SG-
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«Reply #4 on: October 19, 2008, 11:44:47 AM »
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sajid_ghayel ji,
Rakhtey hain log rozah, din mein naheen khaatey kuchh:
Par raat mein khaatey hain, jee bhar key, apney man kaa!
Gazlain bahut likheen hain; shaayad hazaar hongeen;
Baaqee bhi bahut kuchh hai rah-e-intizaar fan kaa!!
                            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: October 20, 2008, 07:31:45 AM »
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Nice One Abd Bhaijaan,.
Sajid Bhai,.
Deepak Ji,.

Yunhi Mehfil Sajaate Rahiye,.
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«Reply #6 on: October 20, 2008, 07:41:02 AM »
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Shukriyah Jaanasheen ji!
Abhi akeylaa hai 'abd';
Kaisey goonjey saaz?
Tum to aaougey naheen:
Kisey bulaaye aaj?
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«Reply #7 on: October 20, 2008, 07:55:37 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 20, 2008, 07:41:02 AM
Shukriyah Jaanasheen ji!
Abhi akeylaa hai 'abd';
Kaisey goonjey saaz?
Tum to aaougey naheen:
Kisey bulaaye aaj?
            - abd bundeli


Aaj Saath Apne Rakhlo Tum Us Habeeb Ko,.
Kal Rab Ko Manzoor Hua To Main Zaroor Aaoonga,.
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«Reply #8 on: October 20, 2008, 08:44:18 AM »
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Jaanasheen ji!
Tum aaougey, harshh sey,
Naach uthheyngey mor!
Tanik aadra ho jaayegee,
Fir, aankhoun ki kor!!
     - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli     
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«Reply #9 on: October 20, 2008, 11:10:58 AM »
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Nice One,.
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«Reply #10 on: October 20, 2008, 11:25:45 AM »
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Shukriyah Jaanasheen ji!
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«Reply #11 on: October 20, 2008, 05:03:30 PM »
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Deepak Subi ji,
Hameen kaheen jaatey naheen,
Woh aatey hain roj!
Nazaroun ko failaaiye,
Jaaree rakhiye khoj!!
                           - abd bundeli


AAj kisi ne mujhe mere khuda se milne ka rasta bataya,
kya kami thi meri ibadat me...mujhe samjhaya..
main sochta tha...meri nazron ko ek din deedar nasseeb hoga,
meri iibadat rang layegi...khuda mere kareeb hoga..
par aaj pata chala...khuda to har waqt mere saath hai,
bus itna hai ki mann ki aankhe kholne bhar ki baat hai...
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«Reply #12 on: October 20, 2008, 05:54:18 PM »
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Quote from: Deepak Subi on October 20, 2008, 05:03:30 PM
AAj kisi ne mujhe mere khuda se milne ka rasta bataya,
kya kami thi meri ibadat me...mujhe samjhaya..
main sochta tha...meri nazron ko ek din deedar nasseeb hoga,
meri iibadat rang layegi...khuda mere kareeb hoga..
par aaj pata chala...khuda to har waqt mere saath hai,
bus itna hai ki mann ki aankhe kholne bhar ki baat hai...
Lovely! What a brilliant research it is? The eternal relationship between 'HE' and 'he' (or say 'she') has been beautifully expressed in the manner, 'Teyraa Saayin tujjh mein, jyoun puhupan mein baas!' or 'Dil key aayiney mein hai tashweer-e-yaar: Jab zaraa gardan jhukaayee deikh lee!'
Congrats.!
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«Reply #13 on: October 21, 2008, 10:47:17 AM »
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Nice One Abd Bhai,.
And Deepak Ji,.
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«Reply #14 on: October 21, 2008, 11:07:48 AM »
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Thanks Jaanasheen ji!
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