Kya gazal likhein, kya geet gungunaayein !

by Rishi on October 15, 2004, 03:00:09 PM
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #15 on: October 17, 2004, 01:47:31 PM »
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Shukriya Waheed Bhai! & Pooja ji!!!
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Rishi
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«Reply #16 on: October 17, 2004, 02:53:11 PM »
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Thanx everyone !
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tere hi khayaalon mein khoya rahoon main,
teri hi baatein rehti hain yaadon mein meri,
badhta rahe yun hi pyaar humara pal pal,
teri hi bahon mein gujre ab jindagi meri..
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #17 on: October 17, 2004, 06:09:11 PM »
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Wah! Nice written!!!Rishi!
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Rishi
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«Reply #18 on: October 19, 2004, 09:07:33 AM »
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Thanx Arun !
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Tum aatey ho Hauley sey, Dheerey sey aisey
Raaton Ko Neend, Chupkey sey aatee Ho Jaisey.
Yun Lagta Hai Jab Hawa Takraatee Hai Rukh Sey
Tere Narm Hothon Ney Mujhe Chhuaa Ho Jaise
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nishita
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«Reply #19 on: October 19, 2004, 10:22:36 AM »
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wah rishi
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Talat
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«Reply #20 on: October 19, 2004, 01:27:06 PM »
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Wah!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #21 on: October 19, 2004, 01:45:00 PM »
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Very Nice Rishi!

Kya shabaab Tha ki Phool-Phool Pyar kar Utha!
Kya Suroop tha ki Dekh aaina Sihar Utha!
Is taraf Zameen Uthee aur Aasmaan Udhar Utha!
Thaam kar Jigar Utha ki Jo Mila Nazar Utha!


(NM)
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Rishi
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«Reply #22 on: October 19, 2004, 02:59:36 PM »
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Thanx everyone nd nice words Arun !
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jin rahon pe hans ke chalo tum, phool wahaan khil jaate hain,
damm lene ko jahaan ruko tum,madhushaale ban jaate hain,
tum ko chhukar pawan jhakore,khushboo lekar jaate hain,
jab jab dekhein teri surat, hum dil thaame reh jaate hain....
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Talat
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«Reply #23 on: October 19, 2004, 03:03:48 PM »
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Nice Arunji & Rishi...

phoolon se bhari raahain bin tere pathar ki hain
chaand sa chehra na tum dekho to maddham hai!!
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Rishi
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«Reply #24 on: October 19, 2004, 03:18:31 PM »
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Thanx nd Nice One Talat !
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jab tum nazron se durr hote ho, jiya mera ghabrata hai,
neend aankhon se udd jaati hai, chandaa agan barsata hai,
dono pehloo jal jaate hain, saawan aag mein aag lagata hai,
jaise tadpe jal bin machhali, tera pyaar mujhe tadpataa hai....
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Talat
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«Reply #25 on: October 19, 2004, 03:24:20 PM »
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Wah! Rishi..

door ho jaayen kabhi intezaar karna
apne dil ko na yoon beqaraar karna
laut ke aayenge hum jahan bhi jaayen
chahat pe meri bas aitebaar karna
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Rishi
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«Reply #26 on: October 19, 2004, 03:48:25 PM »
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Thanx Talat nd Nice one !
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bas tumhare intezaar mein, har ek pal guzara karein,
bin tumhare jee nahin lagta humara kyaa karein,
bada naaz tha humein apne jis sabr par,
wahi sabr khota dekh dil ghabra raha hai kya karein,
padh kar tere khat purane, jee ko behlane chale,
jee na behla, tum aur bhi yaad aane lage ho kya karein....
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Talat
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«Reply #27 on: October 19, 2004, 03:53:17 PM »
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Thanks Rishi...good one...
ye waqt nahin aasaan par guzar jaayega ye bhi
yoon sabr ka daaman na chorhna tum kabhi
bechain hai milne ko ye dil, rooh beqarar hai
is pal ke baad jo aayega us pal ka intezaar hai
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Rishi
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«Reply #28 on: October 19, 2004, 04:07:59 PM »
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Thanx Talat ! Nice one !
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kaise sabr paoon ke tum bin ye dil kahin lagta hi nahi,
lakh karta hoon koshish par ye hai ke sambhalta hi nahi,
jaanta hai ke ek pal ki judai hai, phir ta-jindagi ka saath hai,
par kya karoon ye ek pal bhi to kambakht guzarta hi nahi....
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #29 on: October 19, 2004, 06:25:51 PM »
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Zabardast!!!!! gazab!!! Very Nice!! Talat ji! & Rishi!
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