kya haal hai dil ka yeh kaise bataaye..........

by ranjana on July 31, 2006, 09:41:08 AM
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ghir ke aayi hain kaali ghataaye
asie mein ab hum kisko bulaaye
kya haal hai dil ka yeh kaise bataaye

ek sagar sa chipaa hai mann ki leher mein
lamba sa safar hai zindagi ki dagar mein
apna hamrahi ab kise banaaye
kya haal hai dil yeh kaise bataaye


yeh barish ke jhonke
yeh madmast hawae.n
mere jiya ko aur bhi tadapaye
jidhar ko chala hai hawa ka rukh
ab hum bhi udher ko hi jaaye
kya haal hai dil ka yeh kaise bataaye

khawabo ki halchal machti hai dil mein
haqikat ki surat mein yeh duniya dhalti nahi hai
jo chale saath mere humsafar ban ke
unki manzil meri raha se nikalti nahi hai
kisi ko hum wapas kaise bualaaye
kya haal hai dil ka yeh kaise bataaye...
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«Reply #1 on: July 31, 2006, 09:44:34 AM »
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Ranju

Kya baat hai !

Kya haal hai dil ka yeh kaise bataaye...

Bahut he khoobsurat !

Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: July 31, 2006, 10:14:27 AM »
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Wow Ranjana ji.... bahut achha likha hai....
Aajkal ka jo mausam hai ussey bhi kaafi match karta hai.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: July 31, 2006, 12:28:59 PM »
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RANJANA aapne bahut khubsoorat likha hai....
waqai is madmast mausam me tadpa ke rakh diya apne....
behtreen shayari ki hai aapne......

Har lafz ko tere, baar-baar padhta hoon,
likhe jazbaaton ki teri, tareef karta hoon.....
kuch to hai teri kalam me jadugari dost,
ki shayari ko teri main salam karta hoon......
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«Reply #4 on: July 31, 2006, 01:58:42 PM »
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Very Nice Ranjana & Nice Reply Vicky...
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«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2006, 02:00:11 PM »
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shukriya Rajbir.......sachmuch kya haal hain dil ka kaise bataye. :D


shukriya Jagdish [natural]..haan kuch mausam ka asar hi hai... :D

shukriya Vicky .....aapne tareef kuch jayada kar di.. :oops:  :oops:
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«Reply #6 on: July 31, 2006, 02:11:42 PM »
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chand lamaho ki mulakat itne tufaan jaga jaayegi
yeh kab mere masoom se dil ne socha thaa

kisko malum thaa ki yah hoga aur ......
ek pal ka milna  zindagi bhar ki tadap ban ke reh jaayega

subeh hote hi unko talashegi meri nazare.n
raat ko fir khawab sunhere saja lenegi

har shaye mein dikhega aqs bas unka
sab taraf bas unki awaz ka jadu sa chhaa jaayega

na jaane ab fir kab yeh asi mehekti barsti fiza ka daur aayega
kab fir asi chalegi madmast hawa aur teri kushbu se mera badan mehek jaayega
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«Reply #7 on: August 01, 2006, 04:39:26 AM »
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Quote from: "Aryaan"
Very Nice Ranjana & Nice Reply Vicky...



shukriya Aryaan ................ Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: August 01, 2006, 05:05:37 AM »
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chand lamaho ki mulakat itne tufaan jaga jaayegi
yeh kab mere masoom se dil ne socha thaa

kisko malum thaa ki yah hoga aur ......
ek pal ka milna  zindagi bhar ki tadap ban ke reh jaayega

subeh hote hi unko talashegi meri nazare.n
raat ko fir khawab sunhere saja lenegi

har shaye mein dikhega aqs bas unka
sab taraf bas unki awaz ka jadu sa chhaa jaayega

na jaane ab fir kab yeh asi mehekti barsti fiza ka daur aayega
kab fir asi chalegi madmast hawa aur teri kushbu se mera badan mehek jaayega

Very Nice Ranjana ji.... :D
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«Reply #9 on: August 01, 2006, 06:45:17 AM »
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kaya baat hai ranju  and nice reply viky

na kahiye kuch samjh jayenge samjhne wale
ba ek baar muskurake dekh jayegi
jiske bhi aap chaenge lag jayegi aag.....
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«Reply #10 on: August 01, 2006, 07:27:07 AM »
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shukriya Natural and Vikas ...... Usual Smile


kai baar ungliyaab uthi kuch likhne ko
bas naam baar unka hi likh paaye hum
pyaar chalka meri har nazm se jab
toh har nazm ab unke naam kar aaye hum...
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«Reply #11 on: August 01, 2006, 11:24:53 AM »
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arey yahaan to sabke dil ka haal bahut hi bura hai.. allah bachaye..ek koshish hamari bhi...

Kya haal hai dil ka yeh kaise batayein,
Dil ki dhadkane har pal betaabiyon ko aur badhayein,
Sahi nahi jaaye yeh dooriyan yeh hijr-e-mausam hum kaise bitayein,
Baharon mein itraate firey door kahin waadiyon mein chalo kho jaayein,
Pass tum rehna aanchal mein chupke hamare
Fir dekhein yeh zamana  hamein kaise dhoond paayein...

gesu's koshish!!!!!!! :D
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«Reply #12 on: August 01, 2006, 11:32:23 AM »
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Ranju, Vikas, Vicky, Gesu

Bahut khoob ! Khumar ka daur joron shoron se chal raha hai !

Saawan ki rut hai aur mausam suhana hai  :D

Too good and suits the mood also !

Rajbir
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«Reply #13 on: August 01, 2006, 11:33:35 AM »
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shukriya bhai jaan.. kabhi do lines aap bhi likh diya kijiye.......... :D  :D
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«Reply #14 on: August 01, 2006, 05:36:36 PM »
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arey yahaan to sabke dil ka haal bahut hi bura hai.. allah bachaye..ek koshish hamari bhi...

Kya haal hai dil ka yeh kaise batayein,
Dil ki dhadkane har pal betaabiyon ko aur badhayein,
Sahi nahi jaaye yeh dooriyan yeh hijr-e-mausam hum kaise bitayein,
Baharon mein itraate firey door kahin waadiyon mein chalo kho jaayein,
Pass tum rehna aanchal mein chupke hamare
Fir dekhein yeh zamana  hamein kaise dhoond paayein...

gesu's koshish!!!!!!! :D



bahut khoob gesu ....very nice....


raat bhar aa aa ke jagata hai hame koi
de de meethi se awaze hame bulata hai koi
kahi yun hi andharo mein dub ke reh na jaau main
yah soch kar pyaar ki shama jalata hai koi
de ke naye kahwab roz naye jaga diya mere armaano ko
saath na de saka mera saya na meri tanhai ab
per subeh hone se pehle roz haseen khawb dikhata hai koi
yeh haal hai ab dil ka koi kaise smajhaye
lagta nahi dil mera ab koi toh haqikat ab mujhe bataaye
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