Kya ho tum

by Noorafza on August 24, 2010, 09:19:44 PM
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Kya ho tum kaise kahun?
Bin tumhare bas reh na sakun!

Gar kashti hun toh tum sahil ho,
Mere har sur mein shamil ho;
Sama mehka de woh phool ho tum,
Meri zindagi ka noor ho tum;
Rab se mangi dua ka jawaab ho tum,
Hakeekat mein badla kwaab ho tum;

Kaise kahun lafzon mein kya ho tum?
Bas sun lo dhadkanon mein kya ho tum…
Dekh lo in nainon mein kya ho tum.
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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2010, 10:13:34 PM »
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Noorafza Jee Aadaab!

Bahut pyaari nazm kahi hai aapne... Behad achchi lagi hume...
Is achchi nazm per dil se daad hazir hai..
kabool kijiye..
       
Likhate rahiye..
Khush rahiye...
Khuda Hafez....   




Kuch hum bhi arz kareN humara behad purana kalaam hai yeh, par aajtak adhura hi raha hai....

Kaise kahuN ke tum mere liye kyaa ho
Khudaa ne kabool ki ek aisi duaa ho

Ek hurf nahi mere dil kii kitaab ho
GazaloN meiN jaise ek gazal khushnumaa ho

Meri tabeeroN meiN saji huyi pari ho
Khawaab mera jaise hakhqeekhat bana ho
         


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«Reply #2 on: August 25, 2010, 04:36:23 PM »
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Kya ho tum kaise kahun?
Bin tumhare bas reh na sakun!

Gar kashti hun toh tum sahil ho,
Mere har sur mein shamil ho;
Sama mehka de woh phool ho tum,
Meri zindagi ka noor ho tum;
Rab se mangi dua ka jawaab ho tum,
Hakeekat mein badla kwaab ho tum;

Kaise kahun lafzon mein kya ho tum?
Bas sun lo dhadkanon mein kya ho tum…
Dekh lo in nainon mein kya ho tum.

Bahut Khoob
Bas yun hi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #3 on: August 25, 2010, 04:39:12 PM »
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kya baat hai noorafzaa ji....dil chhu gai aapki nazm......
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«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2010, 04:39:33 PM »
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parwaz ji bada pyar bhara reply ji
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2010, 10:31:03 PM »
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Bahut khoob noorafza ji...
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Noorafza
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«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2010, 02:27:31 PM »
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Noorafza Jee Aadaab!

Bahut pyaari nazm kahi hai aapne... Behad achchi lagi hume...
Is achchi nazm per dil se daad hazir hai..
kabool kijiye..
       
Likhate rahiye..
Khush rahiye...
Khuda Hafez....   




Kuch hum bhi arz kareN humara behad purana kalaam hai yeh, par aajtak adhura hi raha hai....

Kaise kahuN ke tum mere liye kyaa ho
Khudaa ne kabool ki ek aisi duaa ho

Ek hurf nahi mere dil kii kitaab ho
GazaloN meiN jaise ek gazal khushnumaa ho

Meri tabeeroN meiN saji huyi pari ho
Khawaab mera jaise hakhqeekhat bana ho
         

Parwaaz ji, aapka tahe dil se shukriya! Aapka bhi kalam bahut hi pyara hai! Bahut khoob! Share karne ke liye shukriya! Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2010, 02:42:46 PM »
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Rajesh ji, Kasak ji, aur brokenbyluv, mujhe bahut achcha laga ki aapko mera kalam pasand aaya. Apke saath aur encouragement ke liye bahut bahut shukriya!
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