Kya jaane meri mohabbat ka bana fasaana kaise...

by Ravi_Dave on July 28, 2010, 01:06:24 PM
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Kya jaane meri mohabbat ka banaa fasaana kaise,
Dushman ban gaya apna zamaana kaise,

Har koi ban gaya deewana,
Tir-e-nazar se jaane takaa usne nishaana kaise,

Neend bhi nahin hain woh, ke aankh kholke udaa de,
Ab to rabb hi bataaye usko bhoolaana kaise,

Humein to ishq ni zanjeer ne baandh rakha hain warna,
Shikhaate panchiyon ko bhi hawa mein udjaana kaise,

Jab woh humaare zikr se hi anjaan ho jaate hain,
To aise mein rahega aana jaana kaise,

Aur woh dard pe dard, ghum pe ghum sehte hain,
Mujhe aayega aise mein muskuraana kaise,

Yahaan to hain aur bhi pade teri raahon mein,
To bataa tune mujhe pehchaana jaise,

The jo itne kareeb aakhir
'Qazaa' choota apna dostanaa kaise,

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«Reply #1 on: July 29, 2010, 07:56:52 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Ravi ji... bahut sundar peshkash hai aapki... bahut bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 29, 2010, 08:04:04 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Raviji..

bahut Hi Khoobsurat peshkash!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: July 29, 2010, 08:10:49 AM »
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bht hi pyara likha hai Ravi ji aapne....pyaar ki ek aur anokhi feeling...very good ji
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«Reply #4 on: July 29, 2010, 08:34:19 AM »
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Dil ko chhuti achhi kavita hai aapki Ravi..... Applause Applause Applause

Kya jaane meri mohabbat ka banaa fasaana kaise,
Dushman ban gaya apna zamaana kaise,

Har koi ban gaya deewana,
Tir-e-nazar se jaane takaa usne nishaana kaise,

Neend bhi nahin hain woh, ke aankh kholke udaa de,
Ab to rabb hi bataaye usko bhoolaana kaise,

Humein to ishq ni zanjeer ne baandh rakha hain warna,
Shikhaate panchiyon ko bhi hawa mein udjaana kaise,

Jab woh humaare zikr se hi anjaan ho jaate hain,
To aise mein rahega aana jaana kaise,

Aur woh dard pe dard, ghum pe ghum sehte hain,
Mujhe aayega aise mein muskuraana kaise,

Yahaan to hain aur bhi pade teri raahon mein,
To bataa tune mujhe pehchaana jaise,

The jo itne kareeb aakhir
'Qazaa' choota apna dostanaa kaise,


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«Reply #5 on: August 01, 2010, 09:00:27 PM »
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Shukriya doston, padne ke liye aur daad dene ke liye
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«Reply #6 on: November 11, 2010, 12:43:40 PM »
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Kya jaane meri mohabbat ka banaa fasaana kaise,
Dushman ban gaya apna zamaana kaise,

Har koi ban gaya deewana,
Tir-e-nazar se jaane takaa usne nishaana kaise,

Neend bhi nahin hain woh, ke aankh kholke udaa de,
Ab to rabb hi bataaye usko bhoolaana kaise,

Humein to ishq ni zanjeer ne baandh rakha hain warna,
Shikhaate panchiyon ko bhi hawa mein udjaana kaise,

Jab woh humaare zikr se hi anjaan ho jaate hain,
To aise mein rahega aana jaana kaise,

Aur woh dard pe dard, ghum pe ghum sehte hain,
Mujhe aayega aise mein muskuraana kaise,

Yahaan to hain aur bhi pade teri raahon mein,
To bataa tune mujhe pehchaana jaise,

The jo itne kareeb aakhir
'Qazaa' choota apna dostanaa kaise,


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