Kya karoon main

by aryasudhanshu on July 02, 2007, 09:01:05 PM
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Ashq giren to chunn bhi loon main
Lafz bahen to sunn bhi loon main
Kya karoon unn ankahi baaton kaa
Kya unse sapne bunn bhi loon main?

Unn aankhon me jhaank loon to
Saansen tham si jaati hain
'Gar imtihaan dena ho kabhi
To saansen apni rok bhi doon main

Manzil ka ehsaas hi nahi
Shayad manzil paas bhi nahi
Dooriyon se beparwaah hun par
Koi raah dikhe to chal bhi doon main

Zameen asmaa nigalti si lagti hai
Hawa aag ugalti si lagti hai
Harr pal isi kashmakash me guzarta hai
Kya dil ki baaten bol bhi doon main
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2007, 11:14:41 AM »
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Sudhanshu ji..

Very nice thoughts ..
I specially liked.. first and last stanza !
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2007, 11:16:52 AM »
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Shukriya ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2007, 11:27:09 AM »
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KAYA KAROON MAIN ??
Sudhanshu ji aap kuch mat karo bas youn hi achchi achchi lines likhte rahiye aur hum read karate rahenge bahut kamaal ka likha hai aapne
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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2007, 10:18:31 PM »
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Ji bilkul, hamari taraf se poori koshish rahegi...
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