Kya karte ho...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on February 13, 2011, 04:46:24 PM
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Lehja lehja ye tum kya karte ho,
beheti hawa ko rokne ki koshish kyun karte ho,

merre saade se alfazo mein,
apni mhbt kar rang kyun bharte ho,

khwaishe jo tumhare bus mein nhi,
unhe zaahir karne se tum kyun darte ho,

jab zindgi tumhari hai merri baho mein,
tou mujhse door rehkar pal pal kyun marte ho,

kabhi GEET ki sargam mein kabhi nazm ki laye mein,
kabhi ghazal ki udasi mein tum ehsas banke kyun ubharte ho,

lehja lehja ye tum kya karte ho,
beheti hawao ko rokne ki koshish kyun karte ho.........
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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2011, 04:57:57 PM »
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Thanx a lott Geeta ji--
aapke iss kalaam ne 2-3 din ki meri bechaini ko ek azeeb sa sukoon dia hai.
pata nhi kyun par bahut relax sa feel hua.
khus rahiye ji--
god bless u dear
sukriya
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2011, 05:06:17 PM »
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Thanx a lott Geeta ji--
aapke iss kalaam ne 2-3 din ki meri bechaini ko ek azeeb sa sukoon dia hai.
pata nhi kyun par bahut relax sa feel hua.
khus rahiye ji--
god bless u dear
sukriya

Bahut bahut shukriya killbill ji aur mujhe behad khushi hai ki merre alfaz apke kaam aa sake..god bless u too..take care..
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2011, 05:31:24 PM »
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ji aapka suriya geeta ji.
really bahut bahut relax feel hua Usual Smile
shayd aapke kalaam ke ehsaaso ka hi asar hua.
wese bhi mai bahut feel ke saath padhta hu post ko aisa kahte hai kuch log--aur bas iska hi fal mila aaj Usual Smile
khus rahiye nd take care too
sukriya
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«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2011, 05:34:09 PM »
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ji aapka suriya geeta ji.
really bahut bahut relax feel hua Usual Smile
shayd aapke kalaam ke ehsaaso ka hi asar hua.
wese bhi mai bahut feel ke saath padhta hu post ko aisa kahte hai kuch log--aur bas iska hi fal mila aaj Usual Smile
khus rahiye nd take care too
sukriya

Shukriya...Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: February 14, 2011, 03:10:23 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 13, 2011, 04:46:24 PM

Lehja lehja ye tum kya karte ho,
beheti hawa ko rokne ki koshish kyun karte ho,

merre saade se alfazo mein,
apni mhbt kar rang kyun bharte ho,

khwaishe jo tumhare bus mein nhi,
unhe zaahir karne se tum kyun darte ho,

jab zindgi tumhari hai merri baho mein,
tou mujhse door rehkar pal pal kyun marte ho,

kabhi GEET ki sargam mein kabhi nazm ki laye mein,
kabhi ghazal ki udasi mein tum ehsas banke kyun ubharte ho,

lehja lehja ye tum kya karte ho,
beheti hawao ko rokne ki koshish kyun karte ho.........



Good One .... broken ji !

bahut hi khoobsurat likhaa hai aapne ... dil se daad !

Very Nice Poetry .......... !
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«Reply #6 on: February 14, 2011, 06:32:52 AM »
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ah bahuk kuhb geet bahut umda....

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: February 14, 2011, 08:39:23 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Vadhiyaji..

Humesha Di tarah lajawaab Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: February 14, 2011, 04:11:01 PM »
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Wah Geet Ji.. Pyaar ke Ehasaason se Saji aapke Yeh Alfaaz dil ko chhoo gaye... Bahut Pyaar peshkash hai.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2011, 12:31:43 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji,naresh ji,manju maan ji,khwaish ji n mann ji...
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«Reply #10 on: February 15, 2011, 08:45:17 PM »
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Bahut Khub Geet Ji
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«Reply #11 on: February 17, 2011, 02:47:06 PM »
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Shukriya rishi ji...
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