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TOOT NINDIYA GAYI HAI ACHANAK MERI, KYA PRIYE TUMNE HUMKO KIYA YAAD HAI. NEEND GAHRI MEIN THA SWAPN DEKHA NHI PHIR AACHANAK KHULI AANKH KYA BAAT HAI.
MANPATAL MEIN GHIRI THI NHI BAADRI WAH SAMAY AUR.. HAI JUB KI THA WAADRI DIL DHADAKNE LAGA HAI HUMARA PRIYE BAAT AAPNI KAHO KAISI HO NAAGRI.
TOOT NIDIYAAN GAYI HAI AACHANAK MERI KYA PRIYE TUMNE HUMKOKIYA YAAD HAI
WAYU BHI SHANT HAI AUR.. PRAKRITI SHANTI HAI JAG RAHA HU AAKELA BADI BRANTI HAI YAAD RAH RAH KE AATI HAI UR SHOOL SI MAN MEIN AATI NHI AB CHARIK SHANTI HAI MAN MEIN EK TOOK HAI KYA HUI CHOOK HAI NAIN JHAPKAAU TO HOTI BARSAAT HAI.
TOOT NIDIYAA GAYI HAI AACHANAK MERI KYA PRIYE TUMNE HUMKO KIYA YAAD HAI.
BHOR KAB HO LIKHU PATRA EK AAJ HI IS GARAJ SE NIHARU MAIN AAMBAR SAHI SYAAH SAYAHI MEIN BOONDOON KI NARWAT LAGI YAMINI PAG UTHATI HAI GUMSIN SI PRATIMA DEKHU TERE PAAU KI CHAND MEIN HAATH HILTA DIKHE KYA TERA HAATH HAI
TOOT NIDIYAA GAYI HAI AACHANAK MERI KYA PRIYE TUMNE HUMKO KIYA YAAD HAI.
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Aryaan
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«Reply #1 on: April 12, 2006, 11:33:42 AM » |
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Bohat khoob Bhondu...
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BHONDU
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2006, 03:12:20 PM » |
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Bohat khoob Bhondu... thankz yaar
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«Reply #3 on: August 13, 2006, 05:46:16 AM » |
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bahut khoob kavi ji..........
yun hi badi mushkil se hamne apni aankho ko sulaaya thaa beran nindiya ko kitni mushkil se hamne manaaya thaa
dekh li jab khawab mein ek jhalak tumhari yeh neendiya ho gayi beran hamaari
ab aate hain bas din raat in aabkho mein sapane tumhare bas ab yahan palko mein tasveer tumhari hi saj jaati hai
beran hi gaya hai yeh tera yaad aana humko ab in aankho mein sajan neend nahi aati hai
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«Reply #4 on: August 13, 2006, 07:36:22 AM » |
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bahut khoob kavi ji..........
yun hi badi mushkil se hamne apni aankho ko sulaaya thaa beran nindiya ko kitni mushkil se hamne manaaya thaa
dekh li jab khawab mein ek jhalak tumhari yeh neendiya ho gayi beran hamaari
ab aate hain bas din raat in aabkho mein sapane tumhare bas ab yahan palko mein tasveer tumhari hi saj jaati hai
beran hi gaya hai yeh tera yaad aana humko ab in aankho mein sajan neend nahi aati hai good one ranjana ji. need aati nhi humko chinta badi. yaad aati ho tum hume her ghadi. ghoote hai hai tumhe her jagah gaur se, bhag jaati ho tum dhadkan ki shor se. srry beech mein chor raha hu ...... kyn ki aabhi jaana hai
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«Reply #5 on: August 13, 2006, 04:52:39 PM » |
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teri dharkan sach mein shor bahut machaati hai aadhi raat ko yeh aadhi baat keh jaati hai
jab se piya gaye hain pardesh mein in aankho mein ab neend nahi aati hai
aa ke kar do baat apni tum puri sanam ki ab toh yeh raat bhi beeti jaati hai :D
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«Reply #6 on: August 15, 2006, 11:42:50 AM » |
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teri dharkan sach mein shor bahut machaati hai aadhi raat ko yeh aadhi baat keh jaati hai
jab se piya gaye hain pardesh mein in aankho mein ab neend nahi aati hai
aa ke kar do baat apni tum puri sanam ki ab toh yeh raat bhi beeti jaati hai :D aaj kerni hai tumse kuch baat, dhal na jaaye phir ye suhani raat. aapni khusiyon ka ab ambaar gadhna hai. aaj aapne pyaar ka ijhaar kerna hai. kehna hai dil se ab tumhari yaadein nhi jaati hai, jaagte hai raat bhar need nhi aati hai. her raat tujhe sooch sooch hand ka deedar kerte hai. kya kehe hum sanam tumko jo pyaar kertein hai.
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«Reply #7 on: August 15, 2006, 06:11:23 PM » |
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hui jab raat toh saath mein tere khawabo ka ek silsila sa thaa us chamkate chand ke sang mere saath beetaaye lamho ka basrea thaa
kar raha thaa woh bhi mere sang sitaaro se pyaar ki baate yeh pyaar ke khel mein kya rang khila khila sa thaa
neend beran ho gayi hai ab toh hamaari yeh teri jadu gari thee ya nasha teri mohbbat ka thaa
dil dharak raha thaa sirf teri baato ko yaad karke aur labo per bas naam ek tera hi thaa
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2006, 12:37:14 PM » |
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TOOT NINDIYA GAYI HAI ACHANAK MERI, KYA PRIYE TUMNE HUMKO KIYA YAAD HAI. NEEND GAHRI MEIN THA SWAPN DEKHA NHI PHIR AACHANAK KHULI AANKH KYA BAAT HAI.
MANPATAL MEIN GHIRI THI NHI BAADRI WAH SAMAY AUR.. HAI JUB KI THA WAADRI DIL DHADAKNE LAGA HAI HUMARA PRIYE BAAT AAPNI KAHO KAISI HO NAAGRI.
TOOT NIDIYAAN GAYI HAI AACHANAK MERI KYA PRIYE TUMNE HUMKOKIYA YAAD HAI
WAYU BHI SHANT HAI AUR.. PRAKRITI SHANTI HAI JAG RAHA HU AAKELA BADI BRANTI HAI YAAD RAH RAH KE AATI HAI UR SHOOL SI MAN MEIN AATI NHI AB CHARIK SHANTI HAI MAN MEIN EK TOOK HAI KYA HUI CHOOK HAI NAIN JHAPKAAU TO HOTI BARSAAT HAI.
TOOT NIDIYAA GAYI HAI AACHANAK MERI KYA PRIYE TUMNE HUMKO KIYA YAAD HAI.
BHOR KAB HO LIKHU PATRA EK AAJ HI IS GARAJ SE NIHARU MAIN AAMBAR SAHI SYAAH SAYAHI MEIN BOONDOON KI NARWAT LAGI YAMINI PAG UTHATI HAI GUMSIN SI PRATIMA DEKHU TERE PAAU KI CHAND MEIN HAATH HILTA DIKHE KYA TERA HAATH HAI
TOOT NIDIYAA GAYI HAI AACHANAK MERI KYA PRIYE TUMNE HUMKO KIYA YAAD HAI. wah bhondu ji jawaab nahi aapka kya likha hai janaab..bahut khoob....
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2006, 12:38:47 PM » |
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bahut khoob kavi ji..........
yun hi badi mushkil se hamne apni aankho ko sulaaya thaa beran nindiya ko kitni mushkil se hamne manaaya thaa
dekh li jab khawab mein ek jhalak tumhari yeh neendiya ho gayi beran hamaari
ab aate hain bas din raat in aabkho mein sapane tumhare bas ab yahan palko mein tasveer tumhari hi saj jaati hai
beran hi gaya hai yeh tera yaad aana humko ab in aankho mein sajan neend nahi aati hai wah ranju ji... excellent work.. ek baar fir se kahoongi aapka ek ek sher dil ko chhooo jaata hai.. aapki bahut badhi pankha hain hum..... :D
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«Reply #10 on: August 19, 2006, 04:01:32 AM » |
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bahut khoob kavi ji..........
yun hi badi mushkil se hamne apni aankho ko sulaaya thaa beran nindiya ko kitni mushkil se hamne manaaya thaa
dekh li jab khawab mein ek jhalak tumhari yeh neendiya ho gayi beran hamaari
ab aate hain bas din raat in aabkho mein sapane tumhare bas ab yahan palko mein tasveer tumhari hi saj jaati hai
beran hi gaya hai yeh tera yaad aana humko ab in aankho mein sajan neend nahi aati hai wah ranju ji... excellent work.. ek baar fir se kahoongi aapka ek ek sher dil ko chhooo jaata hai.. aapki bahut badhi pankha hain hum..... :D :D shukriya Gesu .....aur tumhara yeh pyaar mujhe chhoo jaata hai .... :oops:
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«Reply #11 on: August 25, 2006, 05:27:47 AM » |
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hui jab raat toh saath mein tere khawabo ka ek silsila sa thaa us chamkate chand ke sang mere saath beetaaye lamho ka basrea thaa
kar raha thaa woh bhi mere sang sitaaro se pyaar ki baate yeh pyaar ke khel mein kya rang khila khila sa thaa
neend beran ho gayi hai ab toh hamaari yeh teri jadu gari thee ya nasha teri mohbbat ka thaa
dil dharak raha thaa sirf teri baato ko yaad karke aur labo per bas naam ek tera hi thaa
bahut aache rajana ji, lab ye lete hai ab to tera naam jo, lab ne pe thi teri aankho se ek jaam jo, ab tasrasti hai aankhe tumhe kuch kahe, lab ye ho gaye hai ab naakaam jo.
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«Reply #12 on: August 25, 2006, 05:32:59 AM » |
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wah kay abaat hai ranju and dost kavi... bahoot khoob..
Lub per jo tera naam ayya dil ne dhadkno ko paigam sunaya nasha phir jo meri ankhon mai ayya jhoom kar tune jo mera sath nibhaya
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«Reply #13 on: August 25, 2006, 05:39:22 AM » |
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wah kay abaat hai ranju and dost kavi... bahoot khoob..
Lub per jo tera naam ayya dil ne dhadkno ko paigam sunaya nasha phir jo meri ankhon mai ayya jhoom kar tune jo mera sath nibhaya aaj bhi tere ishq mein her geet gaa rahe hai, lub khamosh hai lekin muskura rahe hai. nasha aankho ka her dum badta jaa raha hai. khush hai ye dil jo tu saath nibha raha hai.
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«Reply #14 on: August 25, 2006, 05:41:26 AM » |
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sath apka umarbhar nibhaya jayega kiya hai jo wada, nibhaya jayega nasha ankhon ka teri meri ankhon mai utarne de badai is raat ke sath aor khumar chadne de
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