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"kyun udaas sa rehta hoon main aajkal" wo kabhi to ye baat poochhenge humse
"achche nahi lagte hain hum gumsum se" ye baat kabhi to jarur kahenge humse kuch khayaal aise hi mere dil me aate jaate hain
kuch unki yaadon me doobke hum muskuraate hain
kabhi kho jaate hain hum unki tasveer me aur
kabhi unhi ke naam se khushi ke geet gaate hain
haan humein mohabbat nahi hai usne ye kehte hain
aur tasveer se unhi ke baatein karte rehte hain
ye kaisa ajeeb ehsaas hai jo ho ke bhi nahi hai
kuch dil me rakhte hain kuch zubaan se kehte hain
dekh le unhe to bas unhe dekhte hi reh jaate hain
chaah ke bhi hum unse kuch bhi nahi keh paate hain
mil lete hain unse banke koi khaas dost unke magar
jo rishta hai unse mera wo samjhaa nahi paate hain
log kehte hain ki hum kahi baaton ko dohraate hain
maaloom nahi dil ki baaton ko kaise chhipaate hain
koshish bahut karte hain ki pataa na chale kisi ko
par hum har kisi ko apne dil ka haal sunaate hain...... |
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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2012, 12:15:14 PM » |
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«Reply #3 on: August 17, 2012, 12:59:20 PM » |
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bahut sunder nazm kiyaa hai khyaalon ko badhaai ho
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«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2012, 03:15:50 PM » |
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 "kyun udaas sa rehta hoon main aajkal" wo kabhi to ye baat poochhenge humse
"achche nahi lagte hain hum gumsum se" ye baat kabhi to jarur kahenge humse kuch khayaal aise hi mere dil me aate jaate hain
kuch unki yaadon me doobke hum muskuraate hain
kabhi kho jaate hain hum unki tasveer me aur
kabhi unhi ke naam se khushi ke geet gaate hain
haan humein mohabbat nahi hai usne ye kehte hain
aur tasveer se unhi ke baatein karte rehte hain
ye kaisa ajeeb ehsaas hai jo ho ke bhi nahi hai
kuch dil me rakhte hain kuch zubaan se kehte hain
dekh le unhe to bas unhe dekhte hi reh jaate hain
chaah ke bhi hum unse kuch bhi nahi keh paate hain
mil lete hain unse banke koi khaas dost unke magar
jo rishta hai unse mera wo samjhaa nahi paate hain
log kehte hain ki hum kahi baaton ko dohraate hain
maaloom nahi dil ki baaton ko kaise chhipaate hain
koshish bahut karte hain ki pataa na chale kisi ko
par hum har kisi ko apne dil ka haal sunaate hain...... "Mat kaid karu yu muthi may yeh shokh havahey behnay doe"
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2012, 03:39:48 PM » |
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Bahut khoobsurat Nazm pesh kee hai..
Kya kahne.
Bahut bahut mubaarakbaad
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2012, 07:27:16 PM » |
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Nice hriday ji
Love u
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2012, 09:03:14 PM » |
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"kyun udaas sa rehta hoon main aajkal" wo kabhi to ye baat poochhenge humse
"achche nahi lagte hain hum gumsum se" ye baat kabhi to jarur kahenge humse kuch khayaal aise hi mere dil me aate jaate hain
kuch unki yaadon me doobke hum muskuraate hain
kabhi kho jaate hain hum unki tasveer me aur
kabhi unhi ke naam se khushi ke geet gaate hain
haan humein mohabbat nahi hai usne ye kehte hain
aur tasveer se unhi ke baatein karte rehte hain
ye kaisa ajeeb ehsaas hai jo ho ke bhi nahi hai
kuch dil me rakhte hain kuch zubaan se kehte hain
dekh le unhe to bas unhe dekhte hi reh jaate hain
chaah ke bhi hum unse kuch bhi nahi keh paate hain
mil lete hain unse banke koi khaas dost unke magar
jo rishta hai unse mera wo samjhaa nahi paate hain
log kehte hain ki hum kahi baaton ko dohraate hain
maaloom nahi dil ki baaton ko kaise chhipaate hain
koshish bahut karte hain ki pataa na chale kisi ko
par hum har kisi ko apne dil ka haal sunaate hain......
mohbbat ko alfaaz nahin ehsaas chahiye.!
dil ke dharakney ka buss aaghaaz chahiye.!!  |
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2012, 01:52:33 PM » |
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very nice Hriday ji!!
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2012, 03:04:32 PM » |
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bohat khoob....
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«Reply #11 on: August 21, 2012, 07:09:46 PM » |
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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
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«Reply #12 on: August 25, 2012, 09:45:06 AM » |
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thanks a lot Shireen ji.....!!! |
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«Reply #13 on: August 26, 2012, 03:42:05 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji.....!!! bahut sunder nazm kiyaa hai khyaalon ko badhaai ho
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«Reply #14 on: August 26, 2012, 03:51:54 PM » |
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