Kyaa naheen ham ney kiyaa, un ko manaaney key liye?

by abdbundeli on May 28, 2008, 06:55:52 PM
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 Kyaa naheen ham ney kiyaa, un ko manaaney key liye?
 Jaan beychain rahee, apnaa banaaney key liye?

 Baad-e-mashriq hai, saamney hai mousum-e-baaraan;
 Aatish-e-barq hai har simt jalaaney key liye!

 Koshisheyn, un ko bhulaaney keen bahut keen; leikin,
 Barq, har baar jagee, yaad dilaaney key liye?

                                     - abd bundeli
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2008, 09:10:10 PM »
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Beautiful work Applause
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #2 on: May 29, 2008, 09:48:08 AM »
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Celmira Ji,
 Shukriya!

Apnee aik gazal ka aik sheir yun hai, mulaahiza ho:

 Tujhey bhool jaaney ki koshish ka yeh hal niklaa:
 Bey khabar, yaad hi kartaa chalaa gayaa teyree!

                                    - abd bundeli

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«Reply #3 on: May 30, 2008, 05:35:11 AM »
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'Kyaa naheen hum ney kiyaa, un ko manaaney key liye?
 Jaan beychain ruhee, apnaa banaaney key liye?

 Baad-e-mushriq hai, saamney hai mousum-e-baaraan;
 Aatish-e-burq hai hur simt jalaaney key liye!

 Koshisheyn, un ko bhulaaney keen bhut keen; leikin,
 Burq, hur baar jugee, yaad dilaaney key liye?'

such a nice creation bundeli ji
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2009, 03:16:19 PM »
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such a nice creation bundeli ji

Thanks a lot kaushikbhawna008 ji!
                   - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2009, 03:32:59 PM »
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Kyaa naheen ham ney kiyaa, un ko manaaney key liye?
 Jaan beychain rahee, apnaa banaaney key liye?

 Baad-e-mashriq hai, saamney hai mousum-e-baaraan;
 Aatish-e-barq hai har simt jalaaney key liye!

 Koshisheyn, un ko bhulaaney keen bahut keen; leikin,
 Barq, har baar jagee, yaad dilaaney key liye?

                                     - abd bundeli


Wah Nice lines Uncle ji
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2009, 03:36:10 PM »
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Wah Nice lines Uncle ji
Thanks Roja!
       - abd bundeli
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