-----/// Kyaa tum mujhe aazmaate ho ///----- Hriday

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kabhi khwaab sajaate ho,  kabhi  haqeeqat  ban  jaate ho
kabhi duur baithe baithe mujhe  dekh ke  muskuraate  ho

kyaa yeh mohabbat  hai  yaa  hai koi  sharaarat  tumhaari
kabhi  nazar   milaate ho,  kabhi  mujh  se  hi  churaate ho

tasveer  tumhaari dekhun to usmein hi  kho  jaataa  hoon
paagal main hoon nahi, magar  tum  hi  mujhe banaate ho

suraj ki   kirno  mein  to  kabhi  baarish   ki boondon mein
tum  nazar aate ho, mujhe  tum chhoo  ke chale  jaate ho
 
kabhi ladkhadaataa hoon to kabhi main sambhaltaa hoon
besudh ho jaataa hoon main, jab  tum saamne aajaate ho

baahen failaa  ke jab  main  aawaaz  tumhe lagaataa hoon
banke tum  koi  paagal hawaa mere seene  se lag jaate ho

yeh aadat  achchi   nahi  tumhaari  humein yun  sataane ki
tum khud hi pyaas  badhaate  ho  fir  khud hi bujhaate ho

dil se khel  jaate  ho  jaanaa  dil mein  samaake  tum  mere
yeh khel hai  tumhaaraa koi  yaa  fir  mujhe   aazmaate  ho


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«Reply #1 on: June 26, 2013, 03:25:17 AM »
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kabhi khwaab sajaate ho,  kabhi  haqeeqat  ban  jaate ho
kabhi duur baithe baithe mujhe  dekh ke  muskuraate  ho

kyaa yeh mohabbat  hai  yaa  hai koi  sharaarat  tumhaari
kabhi  nazar   milaate ho,  kabhi  mujh  se  hi  churaate ho

tasveer  tumhaari dekhun to usmein hi  kho  jaataa  hoon
paagal main hoon nahi, magar  tum  hi  mujhe banaate ho

suraj ki   kirno  mein  to  kabhi  baarish   ki boondon mein
tum  nazar aate ho, mujhe  tum chhoo  ke chale  jaate ho
 
kabhi ladkhadaataa hoon to kabhi main sambhaltaa hoon
besudh ho jaataa hoon main, jab  tum saamne aajaate ho

baahen failaa  ke jab  main  aawaaz  tumhe lagaataa hoon
banke tum  koi  paagal hawaa mere seene  se lag jaate ho

yeh aadat  achchi   nahi  tumhaari  humein yun  sataane ki
tum khud hi pyaas  badhaate  ho  fir  khud hi bujhaate ho

dil se khel  jaate  ho  jaanaa  dil mein  samaake  tum  mere
yeh khel hai tumhaaraa koi  yaa  fir  humein  aazmaate  ho


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bahut khoob.....!
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«Reply #2 on: June 26, 2013, 03:28:23 AM »
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waa nyc ,................bohat c daad,.............
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«Reply #3 on: June 26, 2013, 05:18:43 AM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #4 on: June 26, 2013, 08:22:30 AM »
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waah waah bahut sunder
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«Reply #5 on: June 26, 2013, 08:59:22 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB........ Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2013, 09:23:06 AM »
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as usual...the best
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«Reply #7 on: June 26, 2013, 01:12:43 PM »
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Wowwwwwwwwwww. hriday ji badi hi khoobsurat kalaam se nawaza hai aapne. kaafi dino se aapke poetries ko miss kar rahe the. ise padhkar dil khush hua. aapko hamari dili mubarakbad qubool ho.
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«Reply #8 on: June 26, 2013, 02:35:59 PM »
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Kya likha hai Hriday jee..dil ko chhoo gaya..bahut achhi lagi apki ye peshkash..dhero dhero daad rau ke saath..happy9
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«Reply #9 on: June 26, 2013, 03:06:35 PM »
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kp........... after a long time atlast somthing to read from ur side.... will ot say bht acha hai but its good.... tumhari next poem jaldi hi aayegi and mujhse likhwayegi ka wait ab tak hai..... sp plz bring that magic back dear......
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«Reply #10 on: June 26, 2013, 04:37:21 PM »
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Beautiful...............
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2013, 06:47:22 PM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #12 on: June 26, 2013, 11:22:02 PM »
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waah waah... bahut bahut khoob hriday ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: June 26, 2013, 11:46:16 PM »
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hriday saaheb ek arse baad aapka likha kuch padha hai, ahcha laga padh kar, umeed karta huN aage bhi aapna aana yuNhi hota rahegaa.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: July 08, 2013, 04:30:47 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sheba ji....!!!

bahut khoob.....!
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