Kyon ?

by neelgold on May 18, 2010, 12:02:56 AM
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Hamri kahani kyon Hamri na hui
pyar ki voh kyon nishani na hui
chathe rhe jisse umar baar
kyon uske dil main koi rawani na hui

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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2010, 12:12:36 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji...!!! Applause Applause Applause

har kahaani ka rachaita parwardigaar hai,
uska likha har ek pal humein sweekar hai,
hota hai har anjaam bas bhale ke liye hi,
ab humein bas us anjaam ka intezaar hai...
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2010, 12:21:35 AM »
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Gud 1 kapil!!!!!

& Thanx 4 welcoming me bak!!!!!

Quote from: klaskar on May 18, 2010, 12:12:36 AM
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji...!!! Applause Applause Applause

har kahaani ka rachaita parwardigaar hai,
uska likha har ek pal humein sweekar hai,
hota hai har anjaam bas bhale ke liye hi,
ab humein bas us anjaam ka intezaar hai...
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«Reply #3 on: May 18, 2010, 12:23:57 AM »
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Thank u so much Neel ji...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on May 18, 2010, 12:21:35 AM
Gud 1 kapil!!!!!

& Thanx 4 welcoming me bak!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2010, 12:24:28 AM »
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Uska Karam Har paal hum paar rehga
Hum khushiyon ko youn hi gale se lagte rehnge
Har gum ko dil se bhula ke
Khushyion ki mehfil sazate rehnge

Quote from: klaskar on May 18, 2010, 12:12:36 AM
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji...!!! Applause Applause Applause

har kahaani ka rachaita parwardigaar hai,
uska likha har ek pal humein sweekar hai,
hota hai har anjaam bas bhale ke liye hi,
ab humein bas us anjaam ka intezaar hai...
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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2010, 12:31:42 AM »
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bahut khoob Neel ji...!!!

bas muskaan hi hai jo humein jeena sikhaati hai,
har lamha humein khushiyaan baantna sikhaati hai,
hum veeraano me bhi khushiyon ke mele sajaa de,
ab zindagi ka har lamha humein yahi sikhaati hai...

Quote from: neelgold on May 18, 2010, 12:24:28 AM
Uska Karam Har paal hum paar rehga
Hum khushiyon ko youn hi gale se lagte rehnge
Har gum ko dil se bhula ke
Khushyion ki mehfil sazate rehnge
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2010, 01:16:00 AM »
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Gud 1 kapil !!!!!!!

vll reply 2more

Quote from: klaskar on May 18, 2010, 12:31:42 AM
bahut khoob Neel ji...!!!

bas muskaan hi hai jo humein jeena sikhaati hai,
har lamha humein khushiyaan baantna sikhaati hai,
hum veeraano me bhi khushiyon ke mele sajaa de,
ab zindagi ka har lamha humein yahi sikhaati hai...
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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2010, 01:33:45 AM »
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Wah Neel ji bahut khoob,very touching poem,Kapil ji ne bhi khoob saath diya. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 18, 2010, 05:16:00 AM »
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Achchhi mehfil jamai hai aap dono ne
Neel aur Kapil
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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2010, 06:17:43 PM »
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thanx a lot Neel ji... will wait for ur reply...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on May 18, 2010, 01:16:00 AM
Gud 1 kapil !!!!!!!

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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2010, 06:18:12 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 18, 2010, 01:33:45 AM
Wah Neel ji bahut khoob,very touching poem,Kapil ji ne bhi khoob saath diya. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 18, 2010, 06:18:44 PM »
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shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 18, 2010, 05:16:00 AM
Achchhi mehfil jamai hai aap dono ne
Neel aur Kapil
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«Reply #12 on: May 18, 2010, 09:20:53 PM »
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nice Neelgold jii nd Klaskar...........


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«Reply #13 on: May 19, 2010, 09:22:32 PM »
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thnx Aaina ...
Thnx 4 ur tym ..

Quote from: aaina on May 18, 2010, 09:20:53 PM
nice Neelgold jii nd Klaskar...........


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«Reply #14 on: May 19, 2010, 09:23:08 PM »
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Thnx MAdhu ....

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 18, 2010, 01:33:45 AM
Wah Neel ji bahut khoob,very touching poem,Kapil ji ne bhi khoob saath diya. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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