kyooN muskura rahe ... Zarraa

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«Reply #15 on: October 03, 2013, 03:58:32 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on October 02, 2013, 04:49:30 PM
farmaa rahe karam kabhi barpaa rahe qeher
donoN hi sooratoN meiN humeiN aazmaa rahe

waah waah zarra ji bohut umda kalaam pesh kiya hai,

bas itna tha ke agar aap "HAIN"  end mein to sentence complete
lagta , aisa mujhe laga ,, baki lajawaab hai kalaam.
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Sahal bhai, aapne itna ghaur kiya aur itne dil se daad di, kis qadar mamnoon hoon bayaan naheen kar sakta.

Waise aap ka mashwara beshak qaabil e ghaur hai, par beher ki majbooree filhaal "hain" ke wazn ka lafz daalne ki ijaazat naheen de rahi Usual Smile

Aapke saath aur hauslafzaayee ka fir se tah e dil se shukriya ada karta hoon !
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«Reply #16 on: October 03, 2013, 11:25:47 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on October 02, 2013, 08:48:09 PM
bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Nandbahu ji
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«Reply #17 on: October 04, 2013, 01:36:11 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 02, 2013, 08:48:32 PM

Zarra Sahaab Aadaab...!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne ... bade hi umdaa ashaar rahe janab behad shayraana aur behad khoobsurat...

Puri kalaam hi behad umdaa rahi.. is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khudaa Hafez...


Janaab Parwaaz sahaab ... Aadaab ... Aap ka reply dekh kar bahaut achchha laga ... Ji aapki inaayat aur hauslafzaayee ka behad mamnoon hoon .... Aapko meri jaanib se dheron duaein ... Zarraa
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«Reply #18 on: October 04, 2013, 07:50:19 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on October 02, 2013, 09:45:58 PM
Zarraa ji tareef ke liye alfaaz hi nahi mil rahe so Rau se kaam chala raha hoon  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Iqtedaar ji ..  aapki hauslafzaayee ka tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon
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«Reply #19 on: October 05, 2013, 01:30:33 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 02, 2013, 10:10:30 PM
Hamesha ki tarah khubsurat ghazal .
Bahut bahut mubarakbad Zarra saheb .

Hasan sahab ... aap ki hauslafzaayee se bahaut sahaara milta hai ... tah e dil se aapka shukrguzaar hoon
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«Reply #20 on: October 05, 2013, 12:53:21 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on October 02, 2013, 10:46:32 PM
Janaab sirf ek hi lafz kahuNga- Lajawaab, ek Rau ke sath.

Iftakhar ji ... Itni mohabbat bhari daad aur rau ka tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon
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«Reply #21 on: October 05, 2013, 03:53:52 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 03, 2013, 09:05:05 AM
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«Reply #22 on: October 05, 2013, 04:55:22 PM »
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Aqsh ji ..  Bahaut bahaut shukriya aapka in inaayat bhare alfaaz ka .. Ye aapki hauslafzaayee aur qadradaanee aur nawazish hai ki aapne is ghazal ko kisi laayak samjha ... Dua ke saath ... Zarraa


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Waaaaaaaaaaah zarra ji.. khoobsurat ghazal se nawaza hai aapne.. khoobsurat khayaal aur khoobsurat ashaar... aapko is lajawab peshkash par hazaron dili daaaad qubool ho.. in ashaaron par khaaaaaas daaaaaaad...

ab ye khudaa hi jaane wo kyooN muskuraa rahe
paas aa rahe haiN ya ke haiN jee ko jalaa rahe

farmaa rahe karam kabhi barpaa rahe qeher
donoN hi sooratoN meiN humeiN aazmaa rahe

chehre pe berukhee hai to aaNkhoN meiN hasrateiN
hum ko fareb de rahe ya khud hi khaa rahe

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«Reply #23 on: October 05, 2013, 05:00:30 PM »
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waah zarra jee..kya khoob likha hai..

maza aa gaya padh ke..

dhero daad qubool farmaye..happy9
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«Reply #24 on: October 05, 2013, 05:33:11 PM »
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waah zarra jee..kya khoob likha hai..

maza aa gaya padh ke..

dhero daad qubool farmaye..happy9


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