~~"Kyun Itna Tadpati Ho"~~by Mann

by k.shael on July 02, 2009, 12:38:36 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 04, 2009, 05:22:37 PM »
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so sweet! kya baat hai!

rub aap dono ki dosti yunhi barkaraar rahkke, sada! ameen

waise, shally aur mann bhai, aap dono yoindia k subse pyaare members hain! ek mera bahot kareebi bhai, ek bahot pyaari behan.... I love you both with all my heart!

yunhi rehna, ka b mat badalna, plz!

luv u guys

Love u Too Sidraah Sis.. Aapne Humeri dosti ke liye dua Ki.. uske Liye aur is Rachna ko Saraahne ke liye Tahe dil se Tumhara shukriya sis.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Humehsha khush raho sis..  icon_flower icon_flower



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«Reply #16 on: July 05, 2009, 07:50:03 AM »
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bhut khoobsurat ehsasaat mann well said, nd nice work shally ji


Shukriya Aslam Bhai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #17 on: July 07, 2009, 07:35:45 AM »
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Beautifully written Mann.. Tum to hamesha hi achha likhte ho, par tumhare alfazon mein jaise shally ne jaan daal di ho...

Really very beautiful gift.. God bless...

Sahi kaha Angel.. Shally Ne In Alfaazon Me Jaan Daal di hai.. Behad Khubsoorati se Phir se In Alfaazon Ko Pesh kiya hai.. !! Usual Smile Usual Smile

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Angel Ki tumko Likha pasand aaya..  icon_flower


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #18 on: July 07, 2009, 09:01:26 PM »
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Good Creation Mann ji and Good work with Poem Shally!!
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«Reply #19 on: July 08, 2009, 02:31:38 AM »
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Wowww Shally Ji... Bahut he sundarta se sajaaya hai aapne Mann Ji ki is pyaari Ghazal ko!  Very nice work! Applause

Mann Ji... Bahut he khoobsurat likha hai aapne, hamesha ki tarah! Applause
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«Reply #20 on: July 08, 2009, 09:56:06 AM »
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Kyun Inn Palon Ko Intzaar Ke Saye Me Bita-ti Ho,
Aa Jao Lipat Jao Mujhse Kyun Itna Tad-pati Ho,

Jo Saja Liya Hai Ang Ang Ko, Aab Tum Ise Kyun Chupati Ho,
DULHAN Ho Tum Meri, Phir Googant Kyun Nahi Uthati Ho,

Ab Ishq Ki Raahon Se Juda Koun Tumhe Hone Dega,
Har Pal Ham Honge Sath, Tum Kyun Ghabrati Ho,

Sine Ki Bekarari, Dahake Labo Se Kab Mujhe Jalaogi,
Gar Bekarari Ki Inteha Hai, To Kyun Nahi Chali Aati Ho..

~~*Mann*~~

Mann This is a gift for u..i like ur written these lines so much, so i designed them and post here..

Hope u like ur gift..

Thanx

Shally.


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Bohot khoobsurat presentation Shally dear....Bohot Khoob.

Aur Vicky, aap ke liye kya kahen....bohot hi khoobsurat shayari....Bohot haseen jazbaat...bohot bohot khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: July 09, 2009, 08:35:50 AM »
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MashAllah kya tofa diya hai Shally tumne Vikas bhai ko...Dosti salamaat rahe aap dono ki Ameen...Ohh by they way very well written Vikas bhaijan..:Applause


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rahim Bhai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


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«Reply #22 on: September 09, 2013, 02:45:41 AM »
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NOTHING TO SAY MUCH... ITS AWESOME
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