Kyun Jalta hai yah dil

by Pooja on March 30, 2009, 07:57:24 PM
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kisi dost ki gujarish aai hai ki irsha per kuch likhu... so koshish ki hai...
ajj kal khuamr-e-ishaq main kam he likha ja raha hai...

Ho bas mere yah dil janta hai,
Jaise sadio se tujhko apna yah manta hai
Par dekhein jab tujhe kisi aor se karte baat
Kyun Jalta hai yah dil, is kadar her baar
Na jaane kitne shabdo se phir taane yah tujhko marta hai
Ho bas mere yah dil janta hai,


Karu jo shikayat to hanste ho tum mujh per
Ankhon se ashaq lakh yah dil phir nikalta hai
Ho bas mere yah dil janta hai,
Jaise sadio se tujhko apna yah manta hai

Kaise roku isko, kuch to batla ja piya
Na behle tujh bin ek pal bhi, ab yah mera jiya
Her baar bas tujhko apne pass dekhna mangta hai
Karo jo tum kisi aor se baat,
To taano se tujhe marna chahta hai

Ho bas mere yah dil janta hai,
Jaise sadio se tujhko apna yah manta hai
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«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2009, 08:06:21 PM »
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kisi dost ki gujarish aai hai ki irsha per kuch likhu... so koshish ki hai...
ajj kal khuamr-e-ishaq main kam he likha ja raha hai...

Ho bas mere yah dil janta hai,
Jaise sadio se tujhko apna yah manta hai
Par dekhein jab tujhe kisi aor se karte baat
Kyun Jalta hai yah dil, is kadar her baar
Na jaane kitne shabdo se phir taane yah tujhko marta hai
Ho bas mere yah dil janta hai,


Karu jo shikayat to hanste ho tum mujh per
Ankhon se ashaq lakh yah dil phir nikalta hai
Ho bas mere yah dil janta hai,
Jaise sadio se tujhko apna yah manta hai

Kaise roku isko, kuch to batla ja piya
Na behle tujh bin ek pal bhi, ab yah mera jiya
Her baar bas tujhko apne pass dekhna mangta hai
Karo jo tum kisi aor se baat,
To taano se tujhe marna chahta hai

Ho bas mere yah dil janta hai,
Jaise sadio se tujhko apna yah manta hai

Nice One Poojaji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 30, 2009, 09:07:01 PM »
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bahoot achi line likhi hai Pank ji... magar yah Khumar-e-Isha qmain Judai ki lines kyun???
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2009, 10:33:09 PM »
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bahoot achi line likhi hai Pank ji... magar yah Khumar-e-Isha qmain Judai ki lines kyun???
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2009, 02:34:47 AM »
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Sorry


Why say sorry Pank ji... fir Ishq mein likhne ka... !!  love9
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«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2009, 04:56:05 AM »
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Bohat khoob Pooja... Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2009, 05:30:08 AM »
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Bhoot khoob Pooja di. Realy nice one
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«Reply #7 on: March 31, 2009, 07:15:34 AM »
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 aisa nahin honaa chahiye....!!

   
  isiii liye kahtey hain......

   teri chahat main khud ko itnaa jalaya mainey,
   
   aaj lahu mera badlaa badlaa saa hai...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: March 31, 2009, 10:52:58 AM »
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kisi dost ki gujarish aai hai ki irsha per kuch likhu... so koshish ki hai...
ajj kal khuamr-e-ishaq main kam he likha ja raha hai...

Ho bas mere yah dil janta hai,
Jaise sadio se tujhko apna yah manta hai
Par dekhein jab tujhe kisi aor se karte baat
Kyun Jalta hai yah dil, is kadar her baar
Na jaane kitne shabdo se phir taane yah tujhko marta hai
Ho bas mere yah dil janta hai,


Karu jo shikayat to hanste ho tum mujh per
Ankhon se ashaq lakh yah dil phir nikalta hai
Ho bas mere yah dil janta hai,
Jaise sadio se tujhko apna yah manta hai

Kaise roku isko, kuch to batla ja piya
Na behle tujh bin ek pal bhi, ab yah mera jiya
Her baar bas tujhko apne pass dekhna mangta hai
Karo jo tum kisi aor se baat,
To taano se tujhe marna chahta hai

Ho bas mere yah dil janta hai,
Jaise sadio se tujhko apna yah manta hai


Very beautiful creation Pooja Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: March 31, 2009, 12:11:39 PM »
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nice post pooja ji!
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«Reply #10 on: March 31, 2009, 12:23:26 PM »
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Bohat Achche Pooja Didi,.
Ek Arse Ke Baad Aapki Khumar Ishq Me Shayari pardh raha Hoon,.

Bohat Achcha LIkha Hai Aapne Nice One,.
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«Reply #11 on: April 01, 2009, 02:28:58 AM »
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beautiful creation poojaji Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: April 22, 2009, 04:17:51 PM »
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Thanks Lil bro, AD and jannatjahan!!
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2009, 10:58:35 AM »
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Nice work Pooja....
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Very Nice Pooja.. Applause
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