~~~~Lafz Ho Rahe Hai Goom~~~~

by Pooja on August 13, 2009, 08:00:03 PM
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Tere sath main,
sanwar rahi hu main
Kahna chahu bahooth kuch
Per jhikjhak rahi hu main

Najare teri utar jaati hai
Dil ke paar kahin
Dekh kar tujhe
Tujh main simat rahi hu main

Sargoshian tere pehlu main
mehka rahi hai mujhe
Dheere dheere teri bahon mai
Pighal rahi hu main

Sansein teri,
mil kar meri sanson main
dehak rahi hu main

Lafaz bhi
Hosh bhi
Ho rahe hai goom…....
Behak rahi hu main…
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«Reply #1 on: August 13, 2009, 08:03:41 PM »
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"QayamaT"

Ek yahi lafz yaad aaya aapki ye nazm padh ke !! Bohot Khoob Pooja  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: August 13, 2009, 08:06:26 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 13, 2009, 08:03:41 PM
"QayamaT"

Ek yahi lafz yaad aaya aapki ye nazm padh ke !! Bohot Khoob Pooja  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks Celmira!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 13, 2009, 10:23:33 PM »
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really Romantic
thought heartfelt
Applause Applause

Aisi hi shayari ke hum kaayal hain
aise hi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: August 13, 2009, 10:33:33 PM »
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Wah wah Pooja ji,really touching,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:excellent
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«Reply #5 on: August 14, 2009, 07:03:24 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 13, 2009, 08:00:03 PM
Tere sath main,
sanwar rahi hu main
Kahna chahu bahooth kuch
Per jhikjhak rahi hu main

Najare teri utar jaati hai
Dil ke paar kahin
Dekh kar tujhe
Tujh main simat rahi hu main

Sargoshian tere pehlu main
mehka rahi hai mujhe
Dheere dheere teri bahon mai
Pighal rahi hu main

Sansein teri,
mil kar meri sanson main
dehak rahi hu main

Lafaz bhi
Hosh bhi
Ho rahe hai goom…....
Behak rahi hu main…




KYA BAAT HAI   POOJA JI......

TERE SAAMNE,
SANWAR RAHI HU MAIN.
TERE DIL MAIN AAG LAGAA NE KO
BAN  RAHI HUN MAIN
PAR MERA MAN TUJHE KAHENE MAIN NA JAANE KYUN DAR TA HAI.

TERI NAZREN MERE ANG ANG MAIN UTER TI JAA RAHI HAI,
DHEERE DHEERE ARMAAN JAGAA RAHI HAI.
YEH TERA MADHOSHI KA AALAM DEKHKAR,
TERI BHAHON MAIN SIMAT TI JAA RAHI HUN MAIN.

TERI BHAHON MAIN KHUD KO PAAKAR
YAHISTA YAHISTA PIGAL RAHI HUN MAIN,
DHEERE DHEERE APNA HAR ANG TUJHPEY
 NISHAVAR KAR RAHI HUN MAIN.

LAFZ BHI HOSH BHI HO RAHE HAI GOOM,
CHAL TA RAHE, BAS YEH HI LAMHA CHAHATI HUN MAIN
 KI IK PAL BHI NA CHODO MUJHKO TUM.
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«Reply #6 on: August 14, 2009, 07:55:27 AM »
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bahut achche di sach main behkaane wali poem hai

nazre oonse mila kar khud ko bhula beithe
jaane kya kashish thi sudh budh gawaan beithe
kehte thay log ishq ka jaadu ajab hai
aaj aaya samajh main jab dil gawaan beithe
roka oonhe kehne k liye jab dil kii baat humne
toh masoomiyat unki dekh lafzon ko gawaan beithr
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fairykhan
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«Reply #7 on: August 14, 2009, 08:10:19 AM »
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ap ne bht acha likha hai...nice wordinggg so keep it up..
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«Reply #8 on: August 14, 2009, 12:57:05 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 13, 2009, 08:00:03 PM
Tere sath main,
sanwar rahi hu main
Kahna chahu bahooth kuch
Per jhikjhak rahi hu main

Najare teri utar jaati hai
Dil ke paar kahin
Dekh kar tujhe
Tujh main simat rahi hu main

Sargoshian tere pehlu main
mehka rahi hai mujhe
Dheere dheere teri bahon mai
Pighal rahi hu main

Sansein teri,
mil kar meri sanson main
dehak rahi hu main

Lafaz bhi
Hosh bhi
Ho rahe hai goom…....
Behak rahi hu main…






Aaye Haye.. Kya Baat hai Pooja Ji.. Bahut Bahut Bahut Mohabbat se Bhari Rachna Yahan Pesh Ki hai aapne.. Bilkul Khumaar se Bhari Hui... Qasam se.. Padh kar Maza aa gaya... Bahut Hi Lajawab Likha hai.. Applause Applause


Wo Kahate Hain, Ki Bahut Kuch Mujhse Kahana Chaahte Hain,
Shayad Meri Baahon Me Simat, Toot Ke Bikharna Chaahte Hain....

Izhaar Aankhon Se Karenge Wo, Ya Labon se Iqraar Ka Intzaar,
Bas Yehi Soch-Soch Mere Dil Ke Parinde Chahakna Chaahte Hain...

Sargoshiyaan Karne Lagi Hai Yeh Fiza, Tere Aane Ki Aahat Par,
Ya-Khuda Kaise Kahen, Ki Hum Bhi Tujhpe Mar Mitna Chaahte Hain...!!


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #9 on: August 14, 2009, 12:59:39 PM »
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Cara ji & Salil Bhai.. aap Dono ne Bhi Kamaal Ka likha hai doston.. Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #10 on: August 14, 2009, 05:16:18 PM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 13, 2009, 10:23:33 PM
really Romantic
thought heartfelt
Applause Applause

Aisi hi shayari ke hum kaayal hain
aise hi likhte rahiye

Thanks thegrimreaper!! App bhi bahot acha likhte hai.. kuch yaha bhi ho jaata to acha lagta !!!
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«Reply #11 on: August 14, 2009, 05:16:39 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 13, 2009, 10:33:33 PM
Wah wah Pooja ji,really touching,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:excellent

Thanks Madhu!!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 14, 2009, 05:18:20 PM »
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Quote from: cara on August 14, 2009, 07:03:24 AM
KYA BAAT HAI   POOJA JI......

TERE SAAMNE,
SANWAR RAHI HU MAIN.
TERE DIL MAIN AAG LAGAA NE KO
BAN  RAHI HUN MAIN
PAR MERA MAN TUJHE KAHENE MAIN NA JAANE KYUN DAR TA HAI.

TERI NAZREN MERE ANG ANG MAIN UTER TI JAA RAHI HAI,
DHEERE DHEERE ARMAAN JAGAA RAHI HAI.
YEH TERA MADHOSHI KA AALAM DEKHKAR,
TERI BHAHON MAIN SIMAT TI JAA RAHI HUN MAIN.

TERI BHAHON MAIN KHUD KO PAAKAR
YAHISTA YAHISTA PIGAL RAHI HUN MAIN,
DHEERE DHEERE APNA HAR ANG TUJHPEY
 NISHAVAR KAR RAHI HUN MAIN.

LAFZ BHI HOSH BHI HO RAHE HAI GOOM,
CHAL TA RAHE, BAS YEH HI LAMHA CHAHATI HUN MAIN
 KI IK PAL BHI NA CHODO MUJHKO TUM.



wah cara ji kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #13 on: August 14, 2009, 05:19:29 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on August 14, 2009, 07:55:27 AM
bahut achche di sach main behkaane wali poem hai

nazre oonse mila kar khud ko bhula beithe
jaane kya kashish thi sudh budh gawaan beithe
kehte thay log ishq ka jaadu ajab hai
aaj aaya samajh main jab dil gawaan beithe
roka oonhe kehne k liye jab dil kii baat humne
toh masoomiyat unki dekh lafzon ko gawaan beithr

wah wah kaya kamaal likha hai aor yah last line:

toh masoomiyat unki dekh lafzon ko gawaan beithr


bahoot khoob!!!
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«Reply #14 on: August 14, 2009, 05:19:55 PM »
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Quote from: fairykhan on August 14, 2009, 08:10:19 AM
ap ne bht acha likha hai...nice wordinggg so keep it up..

shukaria fairykhan!!
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