~~~~Lafz Ho Rahe Hai Goom~~~~

by Pooja on August 13, 2009, 08:00:03 PM
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«Reply #30 on: August 21, 2009, 10:10:33 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob,beautiful lines,Cara ji,Mann ji,Reaper ji,Diljala ji.
Saahil ji,excellen icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:t

Thanks Madhu ji!!

wow,, Di bohot achha likha hai aapne,, Usual Smile

Thanks Jiya
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«Reply #31 on: August 21, 2009, 11:27:23 PM »
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Tere sath main,
sanwar rahi hu main
Kahna chahu bahooth kuch
Per jhikjhak rahi hu main

Najare teri utar jaati hai
Dil ke paar kahin
Dekh kar tujhe
Tujh main simat rahi hu main

Sargoshian tere pehlu main
mehka rahi hai mujhe
Dheere dheere teri bahon mai
Pighal rahi hu main

Sansein teri,
mil kar meri sanson main
dehak rahi hu main

Lafaz bhi
Hosh bhi
Ho rahe hai goom…....
Behak rahi hu main…





Bahut Khoob Pooja Ji
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«Reply #32 on: August 23, 2009, 02:53:18 PM »
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ab apko kaya kahu khumar-e-King!!! bahoot khoob likha hai apne... jawab bhi jalad dene ki koshish hogi.... Khush rahe!!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja Ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Ab Dekhte hain aapki Koshish Kab Poori Hoti hai.. Besabri se intzaar hai Is Koshish ke Poori hone ka..  Giggle tongue3


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #33 on: August 23, 2009, 02:54:56 PM »
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It is very very romantic... Ishq pe likhna koyi aapse seekhe.. tongue3


Ab Kya Karen Roja Sis.. is Dil Me to Sirf Mohabbat Hi Mohabbat Bhari Hai.. wahi Lafzon me Utar Jati hai Bassssss... Waise Is Taareef ke Liye Shukriya...  happy3 happy3


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #34 on: August 23, 2009, 02:56:03 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob,beautiful lines,Cara ji,Mann ji,Reaper ji,Diljala ji.
Saahil ji,excellen icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:t

Madhu Ji Is Hausla Afzaai Ka Bahut Bahut Shukriya.. Usual Smile


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #35 on: August 23, 2009, 03:22:18 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Pooja Ji

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«Reply #36 on: August 23, 2009, 06:27:53 PM »
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Tere sath main,
sanwar rahi hu main
Kahna chahu bahooth kuch
Per jhikjhak rahi hu main

Najare teri utar jaati hai
Dil ke paar kahin
Dekh kar tujhe
Tujh main simat rahi hu main

Sargoshian tere pehlu main
mehka rahi hai mujhe
Dheere dheere teri bahon mai
Pighal rahi hu main

Sansein teri,
mil kar meri sanson main
dehak rahi hu main

Lafaz bhi
Hosh bhi
Ho rahe hai goom…....
Behak rahi hu main…




kya khoob likha pooja ji........khumar ho to aisa jo sar chadh ke bole.....behatreen ... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #37 on: August 23, 2009, 07:59:20 PM »
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Lafz ho rahe hai gum..
Kya baat hai.. khbusoorat naam diya hai ..

Do line hamari taraf se, shayad kuch alheda baat kahein per koshish hai ek.

Hua kuch aisa humare saath bhi,
Mausam bhi tha khushnuma aur kushnuma log the,
Bas the nahi hum aur naa hi hamare alfaaz the..
Ho raha tha kuch gum..par lafz nai.. wo hamare ahsaas the..
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«Reply #38 on: August 31, 2009, 12:52:39 AM »
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kya khoob likha pooja ji........khumar ho to aisa jo sar chadh ke bole.....behatreen ... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahoot bahoot shukaria Bekarar ji... App bhi kuch khumar se bhare shabd bikhar dete to acha lagta!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #39 on: August 31, 2009, 12:54:41 AM »
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Lafz ho rahe hai gum..
Kya baat hai.. khbusoorat naam diya hai ..

Do line hamari taraf se, shayad kuch alheda baat kahein per koshish hai ek.

Hua kuch aisa humare saath bhi,
Mausam bhi tha khushnuma aur kushnuma log the,
Bas the nahi hum aur naa hi hamare alfaaz the..
Ho raha tha kuch gum..par lafz nai.. wo hamare ahsaas the..


bahoot bahoot shukaria Sahiba Zehra ji, bahoot achi lines likhi hai apne ..
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