Lafz Ho Rahe Hai Goom

by Pooja on August 13, 2009, 08:00:03 PM

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Pooja

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«Reply #30 on: August 21, 2009, 10:10:33 PM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on August 20, 2009, 07:23:58 AM

Wah wah bahut khoob,beautiful lines,Cara ji,Mann ji,Reaper ji,Diljala ji.
Saahil ji,excellen icon_thumleft

:clapping:t

Thanks Madhu ji!!

Quote from: Jiya on August 20, 2009, 01:27:07 PM

wow,, Di bohot achha likha hai aapne,, Usual Smile

Thanks Jiya


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Re: ~~~~Lafz Ho Rahe Hai Goom~~~~

«Reply #31 on: August 21, 2009, 11:27:23 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on August 13, 2009, 08:00:03 PM

Tere sath main,
sanwar rahi hu main
Kahna chahu bahooth kuch
Per jhikjhak rahi hu main

Najare teri utar jaati hai
Dil ke paar kahin
Dekh kar tujhe
Tujh main simat rahi hu main

Sargoshian tere pehlu main
mehka rahi hai mujhe
Dheere dheere teri bahon mai
Pighal rahi hu main

Sansein teri,
mil kar meri sanson main
dehak rahi hu main

Lafaz bhi
Hosh bhi
Ho rahe hai goom…....
Behak rahi hu main…

Bahut Khoob Pooja Ji


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Re: ~~~~Lafz Ho Rahe Hai Goom~~~~

«Reply #32 on: August 23, 2009, 02:53:18 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on August 14, 2009, 05:21:46 PM

ab apko kaya kahu khumar-e-King!!! bahoot khoob likha hai apne... jawab bhi jalad dene ki koshish hogi.... Khush rahe!!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja Ji..

Ab Dekhte hain aapki Koshish Kab Poori Hoti hai.. Besabri se intzaar hai Is Koshish ke Poori hone ka..

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: ~~~~Lafz Ho Rahe Hai Goom~~~~

«Reply #33 on: August 23, 2009, 02:54:56 PM »

Quote from: Roja on August 17, 2009, 02:18:15 PM

It is very very romantic... Ishq pe likhna koyi aapse seekhe..

Ab Kya Karen Roja Sis.. is Dil Me to Sirf Mohabbat Hi Mohabbat Bhari Hai.. wahi Lafzon me Utar Jati hai Bassssss... Waise Is Taareef ke Liye Shukriya...

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: ~~~~Lafz Ho Rahe Hai Goom~~~~

«Reply #34 on: August 23, 2009, 02:56:03 PM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on August 20, 2009, 07:23:58 AM

Wah wah bahut khoob,beautiful lines,Cara ji,Mann ji,Reaper ji,Diljala ji.
Saahil ji,excellen icon_thumleft

:clapping:t

Madhu Ji Is Hausla Afzaai Ka Bahut Bahut Shukriya..

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: ~~~~Lafz Ho Rahe Hai Goom~~~~

«Reply #35 on: August 23, 2009, 03:22:18 PM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 21, 2009, 11:27:23 PM

Bahut Khoob Pooja Ji

shukaria Rajesh ji


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Re: ~~~~Lafz Ho Rahe Hai Goom~~~~

«Reply #36 on: August 23, 2009, 06:27:53 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on August 13, 2009, 08:00:03 PM

kya khoob likha pooja ji........khumar ho to aisa jo sar chadh ke bole.....behatreen ... Applause


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Re: ~~~~Lafz Ho Rahe Hai Goom~~~~

«Reply #37 on: August 23, 2009, 07:59:20 PM »

Lafz ho rahe hai gum..
Kya baat hai.. khbusoorat naam diya hai ..

Do line hamari taraf se, shayad kuch alheda baat kahein per koshish hai ek.

Hua kuch aisa humare saath bhi,
Mausam bhi tha khushnuma aur kushnuma log the,
Bas the nahi hum aur naa hi hamare alfaaz the..
Ho raha tha kuch gum..par lafz nai.. wo hamare ahsaas the..