lafzon mein asar.....

by sideffect assured on June 26, 2010, 08:27:57 PM
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Wapis na lautne ki khabar chod gaye ho
Humsafar ban kar ye safar chod gaye ho

Ye tanhaiyan tumko mujh me dhoondh rahi hein
Tum ho jo khud ko na jane kidhar chod gaye ho

Nazarein churane wale mujhko yeh to bata
kyu mere peeche apni nazar chod gaye ho

Manzil ki hai khabar na rasto ka hai pata
kyu zindgi mein aise nisha chod gaye ho

Janta hu kyu log meri kalam chum rahe hein
Tum mere lafzon mein wo asar chod gaye ho
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«Reply #1 on: June 26, 2010, 08:32:10 PM »
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BEHATAREEN PESHKSH.........ASARON N E JADUI ASAR CHODA HAI........BAHUT KHOOB...
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«Reply #2 on: June 26, 2010, 10:55:31 PM »
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Wah wah Sideffect ji,bahut khoob,mindblowing creation excellent.bahut pasand aayi aapke poem. Hats off to you!  icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2010, 09:38:03 AM »
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 Bahut bahut shukriya Shihab bhai...
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«Reply #4 on: June 27, 2010, 09:44:34 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Madhuwesh ji, waise to hum apki gazalo ke kayal hein...
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«Reply #5 on: June 27, 2010, 10:23:19 AM »
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Bahut khoob SE Ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 27, 2010, 12:19:36 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob s.a ji...
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«Reply #7 on: June 27, 2010, 04:55:26 PM »
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Priya Rajesh ji aur  Broken ji  apki is zarra nawazi ka bahut bahut shukriya, humari koshish aap sabko pasand ayi is se humara hausla aur badha hai...
thanks again..
warm regards
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2010, 02:56:03 PM »
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aapka matla aur maqta dono hi bhut achay lage ek achi takhleeq par aapki khidmat mai daad hazir qubool keejiye


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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2010, 07:29:50 PM »
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Shukraguzar hein hum apke Aslam bhai, apka hausla afzai karne ka tareeka bhi utna hi nirala hai...
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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2010, 07:39:41 PM »
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Aina ji aap jaise bade shayar ki daad humare liye bahut mayne rakhti hai, hum apka tahe dil se shukriya ada karte hein ....
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«Reply #11 on: June 29, 2010, 05:25:22 AM »
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bilkul sahi kaha aap ne janab,aslam bhai ki daad miljaye to yun samjho ke koshish kaamyab hogai...bahot khoob likha aap ne janab..daad khobol karein.
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«Reply #12 on: June 29, 2010, 08:53:01 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Nazar bhai...yu hi hausla badhate rehin..
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«Reply #13 on: June 29, 2010, 09:36:01 AM »
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very nice sideeffect
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