lagan(gul)

by gulzargul on September 15, 2008, 12:31:54 PM
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zindigi ki lagan main zinda na raha
apni hi magan main apna na raha

kho gai matti ki khushboo tab sy
jab sy ghar apna kacha na raha

sach lagta hy sab jhoti duniyaan main
sach main koi yahan sacha na raha

kitny rasty hain iss zameen per
phir bhi koi yahan rasta na raha

kitni chahat sy banaya tha ashiyan
rehny ko ab yahaan banda na raha

dhundhlaa nazar ata hy aaeeny main
dekhny ko  apna chehra na raha

bichar gaya wo bhi duniyaan main figar
aik pal jo kisi sy juda na raha





































































































































































































































































































































































































kho gai matti ki khushbo tab sy
jab sy ghar apna kacha na raha

sach lagta hy sab jhoti duniyaan main
sach main koi yahaan sacha na raha
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Kanta
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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2008, 08:32:51 PM »
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great kiya kehne tumhare gulzar mahashay, jeevan pe adarit he puri kavita  icon_thumleft
ye etna space kyu diya or repeat bhi kya?

atma or sharir se bana prani
jalao to rakh bane jism fani

sanjog he per nischit he judai
maran jeevan gupt nahi ye kahani
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gulzargul
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«Reply #2 on: September 16, 2008, 12:52:00 PM »
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ye do ashaar mujhy zaati tor per buht passand thy isslye apny liye sab sy chupa ker repeat kiye thy jo aap ny dekh hi li liye
so main ny aap ko bata diya, aor jwab jawb jo aap ny likha hy hindi shaaeri main buht acha laga

gul
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Kanta
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«Reply #3 on: September 16, 2008, 04:20:08 PM »
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danyavad, jankari ke liye gulzar mahashay
or bhi ege likhugi aj kuch mood teek he
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gulzargul
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2008, 01:25:08 PM »
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aap khush raha karen kuch log hansty hi achy lagty hain
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2008, 01:44:28 PM »
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Very nice gul ji...

Nice lines kanta sis...
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gulzargul
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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2008, 01:48:32 PM »
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u r wellcome honey ji

gul
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Kanta
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«Reply #7 on: September 17, 2008, 05:27:21 PM »
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yep, I am happy as always no worries.
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gulzargul
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«Reply #8 on: February 04, 2009, 07:13:37 AM »
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where u kanta ji

gul
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