lakhon mein kisi ek ki talash hai.... soudagar

by soudagar on September 06, 2012, 05:31:12 PM
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lakhon ki bheed mein dil ko kisi ek ki talash hai
keh raha hai dil wo yahin kahin mere aas pass hai

har taraf is bheed mein dhundh raha hun usi najar ko
jis najar ko meri mohabbat meri chahat ki pyas hai

yun to charon aur laga hai dosto ka hujum mere
phir bhi dil dhundh raha hai use jo bahut khas hai

umar beet rahi hai uske aane ka intzar karte karte
ek roj wo chalkar aayega pass mere dil ko yeh aas hai

aane se uske mehak jayegi yeh mere dil ki bagiya
meri chahat ek din rang layegi mujhe yeh vishwas hai

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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2012, 06:00:16 PM »
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Wah wah wah saudagar jee
bahut hi jabardast kalaam pesh kee hai aapne.
har din aapki kalaam me behtaree..khuda aapki kalam men aur josh bhare..
khush rahiye...likhte rahiye

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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2012, 06:11:21 PM »
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bahut khubsurat andaz hai , soudagar ji. bahut bahut badhai aur duaaein.
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2012, 07:09:04 PM »
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bohat khoob .....
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2012, 07:31:28 PM »
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very very beautiful Soudagar ji..
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«Reply #5 on: September 07, 2012, 12:41:55 AM »
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wah wah saudagar ji, dhero dad evam mubarakbad
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«Reply #6 on: September 07, 2012, 02:19:36 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2012, 03:17:21 AM »
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nice creation love4 love4 love4
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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2012, 03:17:47 AM »
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bohut khub saudagar ji
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«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2012, 04:10:34 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob jio Soudagar beta
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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2012, 10:04:00 AM »
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Bht bht shukriya mkv ji
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«Reply #11 on: September 07, 2012, 10:04:34 AM »
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Bht bht shukriya mkv ji
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«Reply #12 on: September 07, 2012, 10:25:12 AM »
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Saudagar Jee Aadaab!


bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... kafi achchi kalaam
kahi hai aapne...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez.. Usual Smile 

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«Reply #13 on: September 07, 2012, 11:04:25 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya hasan sir
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«Reply #14 on: September 07, 2012, 03:25:10 PM »
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