Laut aao Jaana(n)....!!!

by Talat on December 16, 2006, 11:35:34 AM
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Meri ruswaaiyon ke saamaan na bhejo
Hawaaon ke haathon paigham na bhejo

Tere naam se bikhar jaati hain dhadkane
Qurbat main aane ke ehkaam na bhejo

Meri haya ko berukhi na samjho Jaana(n)
Jafaparasti ke mujh pe ilzaam na bhejo

Tu na ho sath to yeh zindagi adhoori hai
Bin tere guzar jaaye, aisi shaam na bhejo

Laut aao safar se ki dil bechain bohot hai
Chahat ke yoon door se payaam na bhejo !!!!
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vikas2210
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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2006, 12:08:30 PM »
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bahut khoob Talat
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Tosha
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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2006, 12:15:41 PM »
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wha ji wah !! talat ji aap kis time pe likhti hai humme bhi bataye. hamme to time hi nahi milta [:p]
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«Reply #3 on: December 16, 2006, 01:26:26 PM »
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hmmmmmm.........   superbssssss  Talat........   very  nice  wordings...........
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2006, 09:59:09 PM »
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Vikas, Tosha, Waheed...Thanks a lot Usual Smile
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Aryaan
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«Reply #5 on: December 17, 2006, 03:00:59 AM »
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Bohat khubsoorat Talat...
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«Reply #6 on: December 17, 2006, 02:04:26 PM »
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bahut accha ikha hay aapney talat.....salaam alaikum
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: December 17, 2006, 04:13:34 PM »
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Thanks  a lot Aryaan.....and Salaam.....!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: December 18, 2006, 08:11:17 AM »
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bahut hi Khaas hai talat...
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Talat
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«Reply #9 on: December 18, 2006, 08:39:17 AM »
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Thanks a lot paani Usual Smile
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #10 on: December 18, 2006, 09:23:16 AM »
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Quote from: "Talat"
Meri ruswaaiyon ke saamaan na bhejo
Hawaaon ke haathon paigham na bhejo

Tere naam se bikhar jaati hain dhadkane
Qurbat main aane ke ehkaam na bhejo

Meri haya ko berukhi na samjho Jaana(n)
Jafaparasti ke mujh pe ilzaam na bhejo

Tu na ho sath to yeh zindagi adhoori hai
Bin tere guzar jaaye, aisi shaam na bhejo

Laut aao safar se ki dil bechain bohot hai
Chahat ke yoon door se payaam na bhejo !!!!


Waah Talat ji!! bahut umdaa Likha hai aapne!! bahut badhiya!!!

Main tere bina ab aur jahan mein rah nahin sakta!
magar yeh apna soorat-e-haal bhi main kisi se kah nahin sakta!

Jaanta hoon ab apna milan yahan mumkin nahin, lekin,
Tu ho jaye kisi aur ki yeh bhi main sah nahin sakta!

Le jaye saath apne baha kar sailaab chahe kisi ko,
main woh patthar hoon jo usmein bhi bah nahin sakta!

Ho tumhari ruswai yeh bhi hargiz  mujhe manzoor nahin,
isliye khamosh maut marta hoon kisi se kah nahin sakta![/color]
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ranjana
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«Reply #11 on: December 18, 2006, 09:59:48 AM »
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TALAT ITS WONDERFUL ......EK EK LINE DIL KO CHHOO GAYI
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«Reply #12 on: December 18, 2006, 10:44:31 AM »
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Meri ruswaaiyon ke saamaan na bhejo
Hawaaon ke haathon paigham na bhejo

Tere naam se bikhar jaati hain dhadkane
Qurbat main aane ke ehkaam na bhejo

Meri haya ko berukhi na samjho Jaana(n)
Jafaparasti ke mujh pe ilzaam na bhejo

Tu na ho sath to yeh zindagi adhoori hai
Bin tere guzar jaaye, aisi shaam na bhejo

Laut aao safar se ki dil bechain bohot hai
Chahat ke yoon door se payaam na bhejo !!!!


WAH WAH!!!!! kya baat hai TALAT JI.. kamaal kar diya...
behad khubsoorat kalaam likha hai aapne....

bahut bahut khoob..........!!!!!!!!!!:)
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Talat
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«Reply #13 on: December 18, 2006, 07:44:17 PM »
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Arunji...Ranju...and Vicky !!! Thanks a lot pasand karne ke liye...!!

Arunji, aapne bohot achcha likha hai...bohot achcha laga ek baar phir se aap ki shayari parh ke...Hum jaldi hi jawab dene ki koshish karenge ! Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: December 21, 2006, 03:53:10 AM »
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Quote from: "Talat"
Meri ruswaaiyon ke saamaan na bhejo
Hawaaon ke haathon paigham na bhejo

Tere naam se bikhar jaati hain dhadkane
Qurbat main aane ke ehkaam na bhejo

Meri haya ko berukhi na samjho Jaana(n)
Jafaparasti ke mujh pe ilzaam na bhejo

Tu na ho sath to yeh zindagi adhoori hai
Bin tere guzar jaaye, aisi shaam na bhejo

Laut aao safar se ki dil bechain bohot hai
Chahat ke yoon door se payaam na bhejo !!!!


Waah Talat ji!! bahut umdaa Likha hai aapne!! bahut badhiya!!!

Main tere bina ab aur jahan mein rah nahin sakta!
magar yeh apna soorat-e-haal bhi main kisi se kah nahin sakta!

Jaanta hoon ab apna milan yahan mumkin nahin, lekin,
Tu ho jaye kisi aur ki yeh bhi main sah nahin sakta!

Le jaye saath apne baha kar sailaab chahe kisi ko,
main woh patthar hoon jo usmein bhi bah nahin sakta!

Ho tumhari ruswai yeh bhi hargiz  mujhe manzoor nahin,
isliye khamosh maut marta hoon kisi se kah nahin sakta![/color]



MAI Quote use karna pasand nahi karati... magar wah kaya Talat ji apne likha hai aor kaya kamal ka jawab AKS ji apne diya hai... bahoot hi khubsoorat.... simple, full of love and emotions.. Good job!!!!
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