Lets Feel Da HEart BeatzZzZzZzZ

by MentaL on July 01, 2006, 12:36:04 PM
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MOHABBAT KI BAATEIN SAR-E-AAM KER DOUN
HAI JO KUCH B MERA TERE NAAM KER DOUN


IS DIL KA TARAPNA AUR PAL PAL KA RONA
SAB PEENA PILANA TERE NAAM KER DOUN


YAAD MAIN KISI KI LIKHAY THAY JO HUM NE
WOH HAR EK AFSANA TERE NAAM KER DOUN


TERA BAKHSHA HUA EK ANMOL TUHFA
WOH AANSOO BAHANA TERE NAAM KER DOUN...
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«Reply #1 on: July 01, 2006, 12:43:34 PM »
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khoob arz kiya hai ... aap ne :D
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ranjana
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«Reply #2 on: July 01, 2006, 12:57:29 PM »
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bahut khoob ji..............

har kadam per mohabat ki dastan ajeeb hai
jo hai dil ke sabse kareeb ,woh hi kabhi dil ka rakeeb hai
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«Reply #3 on: July 01, 2006, 04:04:44 PM »
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MOHABBAT KI BAATEIN SAR-E-AAM KER DOUN
HAI JO KUCH B MERA TERE NAAM KER DOUN


IS DIL KA TARAPNA AUR PAL PAL KA RONA
SAB PEENA PILANA TERE NAAM KER DOUN


YAAD MAIN KISI KI LIKHAY THAY JO HUM NE
WOH HAR EK AFSANA TERE NAAM KER DOUN


TERA BAKHSHA HUA EK ANMOL TUHFA
WOH AANSOO BAHANA TERE NAAM KER DOUN...


Wah ji Kya baat kahi hai.....really Wonderfull

TU CHAHA TOH HUME CHASHM-O-KHAIRAAT TERE NAAM KAR DOON.....
LIKH DOON TERA NAAM NEELE AMBAR PAR TERA NAAM AAJ GUL RAKH DOON......

KARTA SALAAM TUJHE YEH ASHIQUE HAI......
TERE PYAR ME MAIN BHI EK EK GHAZAL GULZAR KAR DOON.....

HARR DRAKHT-O-DEEWAR KARENGI BAYAN KAHANI HAMARI......
TU KEH TOH SAHI TUJHE NAZAR APNA JEE-JAAN KAR DOON........!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: July 01, 2006, 06:34:20 PM »
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Wah Wah =D> Bohat Aache MentaL malik and Badnaam Sir_g...

Badnaam bhai aap to Nikharne Lagein hain alankaron mein...
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«Reply #5 on: July 01, 2006, 09:16:59 PM »
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Shukriya Neer bhai
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #6 on: July 01, 2006, 09:19:42 PM »
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MOHABBAT KI BAATEIN SAR-E-AAM KER DOUN
HAI JO KUCH B MERA TERE NAAM KER DOUN


IS DIL KA TARAPNA AUR PAL PAL KA RONA
SAB PEENA PILANA TERE NAAM KER DOUN


YAAD MAIN KISI KI LIKHAY THAY JO HUM NE
WOH HAR EK AFSANA TERE NAAM KER DOUN


TERA BAKHSHA HUA EK ANMOL TUHFA
WOH AANSOO BAHANA TERE NAAM KER DOUN...


wah kay abaat hai, kaya zazbaat hai, bahoot khoob Mantal ji!!!

apka Yoindia mai sawagat hai..... Good entery  :lol:
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«Reply #7 on: July 01, 2006, 09:22:14 PM »
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wah kay abaat hai Badnaam shayr ji.... hamesha ki tarah gazab ka likha hai.. apki wordings aor unki rythem kamal ki hoti hai... good job!!!

hey kaya mera pass ab is soch mai baithi hu
kaya karu tere naam, is soch mai baithi hu
khali hatho mai, sirf kuch armaan liye baithi hu
sajana chahu her armaan sung tere, bas ab itna hi kahti hu
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«Reply #8 on: July 01, 2006, 09:29:40 PM »
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wah kay abaat hai Badnaam shayr ji.... hamesha ki tarah gazab ka likha hai.. apki wordings aor unki rythem kamal ki hoti hai... good job!!!

hey kaya mera pass ab is soch mai baithi hu
kaya karu tere naam, is soch mai baithi hu
khali hatho mai, sirf kuch armaan liye baithi hu
sajana chahu her armaan sung tere, bas ab itna hi kahti hu


Shukriya Pooja ji....hum kuch hain but aapse kam....U R Marvalous....

Jab Husn kuch Sawaal Mehboob se kare......
Kya kaha jaye jiss par Husn marr mitt pade.....

Kare jo Tareef uske Chand se noor ki.....
Kya kaha jaye ke Husn usi WaQt Pardanasheen ho Sharma pade......

Kahein kuch Jheel see Aankhon ke baare me.....
Kya kaha jaye ke Husn ki Aankhon se ek Khushi ka AshQ Zameen par jab Gire pade...!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 01, 2006, 09:36:19 PM »
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wah apne to husan-e-zannat ki sair kara di.....

Husan ka her shingaar, sirf ashiq ke dum se hai
wo kare payaar to husan, warna khak husan per hai

Husan ki ada, husan ki shrarat, Ashiq ki nigaho se hi to hai
phair le jo wo nigah, maja phir na kisi kheil mai hai

Chahkta hai husan, sirf  Ashiq se paane ko payaar
bin Ashiq,... wajod husan ka, ek benaam sa hi to hai
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«Reply #10 on: July 01, 2006, 09:41:48 PM »
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Wah aapne sab Sawaalon ke Jawaab badi Khubsurti se de diye.....Bahut khoob

Dil hee Dil me humne bhi ek Haseen Khawaab Sajaya hai.....
Chahata hai use yeh Shaks Jaan se jayada phir bhi aaj na jaane use humne kyu Rulaya hai.....

Sochti hai ki uss binn bhi jeete hai hum.....
Nahi jaanti ki uske binn toh Maut ne bhi hume Sirf ek Saya banaya hai......

Khudi ko Buland karne me kya maza hai humse kabhi poochiyega....
Kho baithe sab tab Khuda bhi kehta hai Mahobbat me ab tera WaQt Zaya hai..........!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 01, 2006, 09:46:04 PM »
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app to isha-e-khumar se dard-e-khumar mai aagaye BS JI....

Hey jo payaar to khud per bharosa kar le
kisi ki nasamjhi, kayun na najarandaz kar de
dilo ki hai baatein, dil mai hi rahne de
jo na de sath, usko tu bhi Alvida kar de
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«Reply #12 on: July 01, 2006, 09:49:09 PM »
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app to isha-e-khumar se dard-e-khumar mai aagaye BS JI....

Hey jo payaar to khud per bharosa kar le
kisi ki nasamjhi, kayun na najarandaz kar de
dilo ki hai baatein, dil mai hi rahne de
jo na de sath, usko tu bhi Alvida kar de


Upsss....Sorry Yaad nahi raha... Puzzled !  Jawaab accha dia hai ek baar phir

Tere Bhaag me aaj bhi Papihe gungunate honge.......
Chote bacche lete honge Naam mera phir raat ko sab thakkar so jate honge......

Aaonga main Jald hee tujhe Dulhan banane......
Kasam teri Chor diye Nashe Chor diye sab Maikhane......!!!!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: July 01, 2006, 09:55:23 PM »
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ha ha ha good one

nasha kaise karna app chor gaye
bottal se door app, juda kaise ho gaye
her ek juban per bas apka hi naam hai
din-rat, subah-sham, apka hi khayal hai
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«Reply #14 on: July 01, 2006, 10:02:25 PM »
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ha ha ha good one

nasha kaise karna app chor gaye
bottal se door app, juda kaise ho gaye
her ek juban per bas apka hi naam hai
din-rat, subah-sham, apka hi khayal hai


Yaad rakhna bas ek Deewana Badnaam hua karta tha.....
Jo hamesha Khumar me Dard ki baatein karta tha......

Tab Rang hamara tumpar bhi chaane lag jayega....
Ho jaogi tum Majboor mera ek Lafz tumhe bhi kuch keh jayega.....!!!!!!!
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