Likhte Rehna (Shayad...)

by Bambi on May 26, 2009, 05:36:44 PM

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Bambi

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Kitni aahsani se keh diya tumne
‘Likhte rehna’

Aakh churake kaha
Par kaha toh sahi.
Baton baton main kaha
Par kaha toh sahi.
Ek bewaja mulaqath main kaha
Par kaha toh sahi.

Kitni aahsani se kehdiya tumne
‘Likhte rehna’

Tumhe likhein bhi toh kya likhe
Bandhan hummi ne thod diye
Dhuen main uss khushbu ko
Shayad hummi ne mehsus kiya.

Varna…
Iitni aahsani se tum na keh pate
‘Likhte rehna’.


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dead heart

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Re: Likhte Rehna (Shayad...)

«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2009, 06:58:24 PM »

Nice one


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angel4u

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Re: Likhte Rehna (Shayad...)

«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2009, 07:18:46 PM »

Nice one


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Roja

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Re: Likhte Rehna (Shayad...)

«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2009, 03:52:40 AM »

haha... bahut acche Kitna aasani se shayari likha aapne... bahut khoob


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madhuwesh

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Re: Likhte Rehna (Shayad...)

«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2009, 06:44:54 AM »

bahut khoob bambi ji,likhte rahena, Applause


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Bambi

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Re: Likhte Rehna (Shayad...)

«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2009, 01:33:00 PM »

thank you for your support.
you can visit my blog
bambideerest.wordpress.com for more poems


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deepika_divya

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Re: Likhte Rehna (Shayad...)

«Reply #6 on: June 02, 2009, 02:59:34 PM »

Bahoot bahoot Khoob Bambi Ji


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MHussain

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Re: Likhte Rehna (Shayad...)

«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2009, 03:34:55 PM »

Also good.


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mudassirali

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Re: Likhte Rehna (Shayad...)

«Reply #8 on: June 02, 2009, 04:31:11 PM »

achchi nazm hai bambi, par main aakri band ke barey mein kuch kehna chahta hoon, "tumhein likhein.............mehsoos kiya"

agar band yoon hota
"tumhein likhkhein bhi to kya likhein
bandhan hami ne tod diya
dhuein ki us khushbu ko
shayad hami ney mehsoos kiya"

to shayad zyada achcha hota.


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MHussain

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Re: Likhte Rehna (Shayad...)

«Reply #9 on: June 03, 2009, 07:56:25 PM »

Mr. Mudassir Ali I thoroughly recommend your suggestion, as I have noticed but said nothing.
This is a direct way of teaching through which new comers can learn and also benefitial for the old poets to gain knowledge.